The Hero Who Saves the World in the First Eye, the Devil Who Travels Through the Second Eye

I thought the protagonist was a P Club player, a Grade A reserve, and what this profile did was nothing more than that 🤫

There are 77,000 words, but I can't see anything yet. A bunch of stupid people in the comment area who say "it's not as good as the original" appeared out of nowhere. Let me talk about my opinions first. First of all, what kind of mentality does the protagonist have when entering the second game? The first game is just a game across a screen. The people in the second game are real people. Just like the name, if you have become a demon king, just be a demon king and don't help humans. After all, at the beginning, the rhythm control and character characterization were not obvious.

What I wrote above is really good, and the routines don't lose any new ideas. The only worry is that the setting of the human world seems to be too low-level, and Dihua cannot bring it back.

I have a feeling that this book won't last long 😐😐😐

Xiao Wu deceived Tang San and forced Tang San to commit suicide, Ning Rongrong killed Oscar, and Zhu Zhuqing stabbed Dai Mubai to death. A Yin kills Tang Hao, Liu Erlong kills the master, come and take a look, just click in to watch. Start hunting the protagonist from Douluo

This is another person who is in Cao Ying and his heart is in Han. Since he is a demon king, he should be a demon king and must be a demon traitor.

To be honest, do all the non-human abortions in Qidian write this? After traveling through time and becoming a demon, some people say that because the protagonist is originally a human being, do you want to say that aliens are also human beings? We are all in the game world and playing games but forgot about it (the introduction has nothing to do with the main text, just a pure game article is not very suitable, after all, I don't know how to play the game)

I thought the protagonist traveled through time and became a demon king to help the demons kill humans, but this is what happened. It was a pure white novel. The protagonist is a wallflower and is the most fucking disgusting. Neither of them are human.

The protagonist is a game player, I don't care which race he helps, but the protagonist's anger because the evil demon kills NPC is really a bit elementary school.

What is written here at the end? Is it too fast? Cut off at the speed of light?

It is said that the butt determines the head, so let me add fuel to the fire😋 The protagonist is from time travel, so he must be different from the human race in the other world, and he is also different from the demon race. The protagonist should find a way to connect with his homeland in the previous world, develop the other world together, and eliminate all these alien races.

The author has a high reading volume. This book draws on many excellent settings, and the advantages are very outstanding The early game settings and counter-routines are even more eye-catching, but unfortunately the author is probably a perfectionist. He adds many contradictory settings together and lacks the core theme. , Resulting in a sense of fragmentation due to the author's emphasis at the end At the beginning of the story, the evil and wisdom of the protagonist were emphasized, but as the author's setting of the identity of the brave became higher and higher, wisdom became a joke The unqualified part of the protagonist was I solved it with Dihua, but the original setting where the protagonist is an ordinary player is an excellent setting, but this book has become a major contradiction The author draws on many excellent settings in the world, but unfortunately it is because the protagonist's cheating is too direct, and in the end most of them are useless On the contrary, the character of the protagonist as a great god is a joke Secondly, the protagonist likes to emphasize reality too much. If this is an ordinary game NPC, everyone can actually understand it if it is silly, but the protagonist really likes to bring you back to reality with his words, but do you really have that level? You haven't Personally, I think the author can't control the settings that are too advanced, which is exactly why it becomes more and more ugly later on. The gorgeous settings without details can only be skipped and read.

I was thinking that the protagonist didn't do anything to harm the demons after time travel, so why was he just a faggot? Moreover, the bosses in the demon clan initially thought that the protagonist was too weak to be the king, and they wanted to fight the protagonist. If the protagonist's aura had not been lost, why would the protagonist have to revive the demon clan and attack humans across the board as soon as he became the demon king? 😠 What benefit does this have to the protagonist? The plot hasn't started yet, so don't be so anxious.

Why are they all female? Everything is female. It stinks.

The settings and routines are relatively novel, and the character creation is also good. On the contrary, the plot is its weak point. It is blunt and clichéd and has little of its own character. It's also amazing. It's rare to see such a "Bai" who goes against the routine. Usually the writing and character creation are poor. This author is actually not good at plot 😅

The First Apostle: Cultivating Demon——Ulala (Humanoid Projection)

The writing feels more and more clumsy. In fact, I have already guessed the plot. The ending will definitely be that demons and humans live together.

The Fourth Apostle——Corrupt Demon, Alice (humanoid projection)

I was discouraged several times by comments. Fortunately, I, the little Shennong of Qidian, decided to try the poison myself. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be the best food and grass, and it was the Nikkei fantasy flavor that I prefer. It has the flavor of Bone King. I announced that this book has been approved by my little Shennong of Qidian 😡😡

After reading it, I felt it was more like a bad ending than a ending. The powerful empire of the protoss, the dragons and the zerg have all become the background. After defeating the evil demon, it will basically be over. I didn't expect it to end so soon. I went through the starting and unfinished two weeks again. The demon king himself did not write any real control of the demon army, and it ended with a lot of unwritten things. . . . .

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away, it's really worthless.

It ends in an anticlimax, and the ending is inexplicable.

When I saw the ending of this novel, I felt that there was a theme, but the author could not fully control it I recommend the author to read "Strategic Fantasy". You must be crazy enough to write a good anti-convention novel.

The writing is quite good, but the content at the end is a bit too sloppy 🙂

The plot is not easy to grasp, but the introduction, original setting, and the first 4 or 5 chapters are good. All I can say is that it was not the article I expected. As soon as the plot unfolded, I was persuaded to quit.

This is my first fully ordered book, and I didn't expect it to even have an extra chapter.

How come it ends after reading something 😰

Ah? ! Why did the new book suddenly come off the shelves again? !

There is not a single copy left of this one, it was cut neatly

There are a lot of things to sew and a lot of settings to draw from, but unfortunately I don't have enough writing skills. If I could shape it, it would be awesome. Just like I read a lot of books, some authors want to create characters with high IQs, protagonists or supporting characters. But don't say that more than ten years ago, the biggest infinite horror Chu Xuan Such a high-IQ battle, most of the results are written as children's play house, kindergarten play house, a lot of loopholes, mostly because the settings are too high, and the foreshadowing is so messy that it doesn't even feel like an ordinary smart person. This book has a bit too much stitching, and the rest of it should really be cut out.