Immortality Begins with the Master of Weapon Refining

The creativity is okay, but there are reasons why your book is not popular. First, the title of the book is "The Master of Weapon Refining." As a result, the setting of the weapon refining part is too superficial. The protagonist is just like a mechanic who keeps forging iron to earn contribution points. The uniqueness of different magic weapons is not reflected at all, which makes it boring to look at. Second, it is similar to the setting of "Weapon Refining". You have to develop a system by yourself. You can choose different names at different levels, but the difference is that No, there is nothing special. I can't see anything special. I only see you talking about theories all the time. I feel that only the mana has increased, and nothing else has changed. Third, it's too watery. Why talk about so many cultivation processes? In more than ten chapters, I only know that the protagonist has taken pills, the protagonist has practiced, and the protagonist's cultivation has improved. Then there is basically no plot advancement. What is there is that it just passes by without ups and downs. The writing of the fighting scenes is really a bit abstract. If you read 5 chapters a day, the number of words is basically equal to 2 chapters, but the content is not as good as 2 chapters.

Good looking meow, good looking meow, wonderfully written and not boring 🙂🙂🙂

If you want to read it, you can read chapters 208-212 first. If you think you have no problem, you can continue reading. If you can't stand it, don't read it. To be honest, there are some problems in the front. It's acceptable, but when you look at Huilongguan, you can either kill him directly or use this to gain profits in the front. This is acceptable, but there was such a big fuss in the front. In the end, the viewer put down his grudges and did nothing after a few words. It's just disgusting.

I just saw the first picture. A 6-year-old child has no strength at all. It's a troubled time, and you are still tossing around in several places. What are you doing?

I only read the first chapter and have a few questions. Why did the First Taoist Temple drive him away? A six-year-old child who was raised since childhood was frail and sick but later said he was well. As a direct descendant of the Taoist temple, how can other experienced Taoists not say that they drove away disciples just after their master passed away? Even if this is an evil Taoist temple, wouldn't it be more secure to use the cauldron that you have raised since childhood? Or write about a small Taoist temple with only an old Taoist priest and a few disciples, and kick him out over the inheritance. Second, why can I enter the blacksmith shop? Don't use any dirty tricks. You don't even have the basic physical strength to enter the blacksmith shop. Why would they recruit you? After six years of being weak and sick, and six years of wandering around, if you could tell the protagonist that he was able to survive six years, you would still say that he had a bad life. You will be kicked out of the blacksmith shop at one glance. And with your body, even if you find some connections to get in, what kind of work can you do? Are you kidding me? If you don't last three days, your boss will let you go. Unless the despicable means you mentioned were designed to save the life of his child

After listening to five chapters of the book, I can only say that it is really good, has no goals, and is not fun. I don't think it is as interesting as the traditional fantasy novels from 10 years ago. I can't stand it.

Regardless of chance or not, the moment you see Huilong Guanzhu, you must either kill him or let him go! What are you writing about? Huilong Guanzhu dispelled the protagonist's doubts with two or three sentences. The protagonist felt at a loss. According to the protagonist's psychological description, he felt as if he had forgiven him! You kill him again in the next few chapters! Both groups of people were offended. It was originally a big climax, but it was written like this. I was really speechless! I have never investigated beforehand, so you believe whatever people say. They said before that the human race is so united, but no one pays attention to the human ancestors' heritage, and they were killed by a small seventh-grade man! In the future, when the ancestor of the Immortal Sect of the human race ascends to the throne of the human race, he will ask, how should he answer? A family with such a mascot may be useless, but it cannot live without it!

If you don't take revenge, why would you write about Huilongguan? You wrote the protagonist so hard-hearted earlier, and then you want to treat Huilongguan coldly, so isn't your writing about Huilongguan disgusting? 🙂

The latest chapter is obviously for revenge, but you ended up writing it like this. No matter what the reason is, driving a six-year-old child down the mountain is murder. The protagonist can let go of hatred, and I can also let go of this novel. I have written so many contents in circles, but the result is no longer satisfying. I originally wrote it very late, and you still write like this. The author must think that he has written well, and he has indeed written well. But with my character, I cannot persuade others to be good without others' suffering. If you have gone through my suffering, you will be buried in the coffin. No matter how hard it is, I will still choose to kill him.

It's so boring. What's interesting about it is that it's very bland. I don't know if it's my fault. I felt reading this book was a bit depressing.

In the previous chapter, humans and monsters were at odds with each other, the requirements were very strict, and the protagonist was very smart and intelligent. Why did he suddenly give up killing monsters because of a mortal? According to the previous chapter, just grab it if you change it. If it doesn't work, hurry up and complete the task and go back.

The prefaces of many chapters do not match the subtitles, which greatly affects the reading experience.

To be honest, your forging skills are nothing special.

I hope that the master of weapon refining can't keep following the pictures, get creative, and get some auxiliary magic weapons, such as those that collect purple energy, gather spiritual energy, and assist in training. You can also refer to the gun mode in battle. A simple thing is to use the explosive kinetic energy of the fireball to launch small weapons. Marbles are hundreds of times more lethal than fireballs. At the advanced level, just focus on the sky thunder bullets and ammunition. I personally always think that the weapon refining industry is very promising. For example, for meditation practice, can I get a magic weapon that absorbs the spiritual energy, separates and purifies it, and then directly refines it. Set up a closed spiritual energy training room, whatever the spiritual energy concentration is, just take a spiritual energy bath. I don't see any difference from people from other worlds. Apart from hanging, they are completely traditional fantasy geniuses.

Inexplicable, I don't know what to say!

Come on, how are the realms of this book divided?

I read the comments before I read the book. A lot of people said that it was a poisonous point for a 6-year-old child to have the power to run around several houses during a natural disaster. I thought it was a poisonous point at first, but then I read it and found out that the first chapter introduces the background of the characters. . . Are you confusing an ordinary 6-year-old child with an adult who has traveled through time in a 6-year-old child? In Gu Long's novels, women, children, and the elderly are not to be messed with in the arena. After a quick glance, you will know that the protagonist is ruthless. How many people can be confused by the identity of a child? Long Xiaoyun didn't know how many people he killed who were more powerful than him. Isn't this just a background introduction? Why are you so anxious? There are also several mansions. Two or more mansions are called several mansions, and they may be very close to each other. Isn't this reasonable?

It looked good at the beginning, but it suddenly became a stallion. Of course, some of the conflicts in human relationships were also very sudden, so it's okay to jump and watch.

The writing is sophisticated, the plot is reasonable, and the self-created system is also very good. In my opinion, there are no poisonous points. Those who give negative reviews may have read too many books. This author shouldn't have achieved this result. 20 Year old bookworm

After Ascension, the plot is completely rotten, the setting is rotten, the world view is rotten, the combat power is rotten, it's over.

Reality does not need logic, fiction must have logic,

The idea is good, but the writing is almost boring, and the character descriptions are terrible. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the decent villains have no characteristics at all, and there is no memorable point. The protagonist in the first twenty chapters is unscrupulous in order to achieve his goals, and he is decisive in doing things. After it was released, he became petty, always guessing people's hearts, and not ruthless enough! Inconsistency!

What a copy, exactly the same, ugh

I saw Chapter 128, and I was defeated by the attitude of Elder Yao and the protagonist. The previous two times Elder Yao sent out tasks and suggestions that the protagonist didn't like, and the protagonist didn't refuse. Then the author gave the tasks that the protagonist didn't like and turned them into benefits and forced him to create an old naughty boy character. In Chapter 127, he also arranged a marriage or a marriage! The protagonist still didn't refuse on the spot. This is not a weird and underworld cultivating fairy tale. If you refuse, you will die.

Don't pay too much attention to other people's comments, you will know after reading it yourself. Tag "Setting the Party/New System/Four-Nine Immortals/Golden Finger/Growth Stream"

Update faster and faster. I read more than 30 chapters in one night. It's not enough!

Overall, it looks like it's at least an upper-middle level. Why are the results so poor?

Your self-created system is really good. The upper limit is high, the name and practice are meaningful, and the 36 levels are enough to support you to write two to three million words. It can be said to be an amazing system.

There should be more updates, more than 4,000 words a day is not enough to read, I miss the previous four updates 🙂, I can't even afford the monthly subscription

Dear gentlemen, how do you think this book is? Is it poisonous?