Hogwarts: Dali Returns from Mystery

Advantages: 1. Although this is not the first fanfic that I have read where people dress up as Dali, but compared with the other ones, it feels less inconsistent (personal subjective) 2. At present, it seems that the mystery and HP system are well separated. In theory, there should be no situation where everyone drinks the magic potion and collapses in the middle and late stages 3. It cleverly uses the protagonist's need to digest potions to advance the plot, unlike some poorly written fan protagonists who inexplicably do things for the sake of doing things Disadvantages: 1. The personality of the protagonist as Dali is not outstanding. Although it is said that he has traveled to Mystery and back again, and the original work does not have much positive description of Dali, the author's character of Dali is almost the same as that of ordinary HP fans who have traveled directly from the real world but have not read the original work 2. Harry and Dali reconciled too easily... Most people are bullied like this. Even if the bully sincerely changes, it is good to live in peace at most, and it is unlikely to be so close 3. It has a bit of a nanny feel, forcibly stuffing Gryffindor into it, and it feels a bit forced to follow the original plot, and it seems that the changes to the original work are not big at present (but it may be because the story has not yet unfolded) 4. The "quote" of the original text is too long 5. There are too many plug-ins and too complicated, dual system + sealed object, people who have not seen Mystery or even those who have seen it but are not familiar with it may not understand it 6. The author's record of completing the book is worrying (it is said that he has completed the book with a large number of words elsewhere... But it still can't cover up the previous record of being cut in half) The above, if the focus is on HP, and the mysterious system is only used as a personal plug-in for the protagonist, and the plot can be reasonably changed without OOC, this will be a good book; of course, if any of the above points collapse, it may become highly toxic in an instant, but for now it is worth chewing.

It seems that Harry, Lu Mingfei, and Huo Yuhao have attained enlightenment and begun to save the people around them 😰

He didn't even read the original Harry Potter books clearly. Hagrid didn't even know how Harry was treated in the Dursley family. How could he discriminate against the Dursleys from the beginning?

I have only read a little bit so far, that is, to the vault. This book is a bit disturbing to read. The protagonist opens his mouth and is scolded... Combined with the golden finger brought back from the mysterious world, you will have a feeling that the magic world is so troublesome, why do you have to rush to it? After all, one can become the strongest in the world by performing digestion and promotion step by step. Under this premise, the magical world either finds it interesting, or it has some purpose. However, the corner of the magical world revealed in the author's early content is full of pride and prejudice, and any interest in it has been extinguished. The portrayal of Hagrid is also strange. He is not the rough male mother in the original work at all, but an unreasonable and foul-mouthed man. And it's unreasonable and unreasonable. If he knew what Harry had gone through, how could he be angry? No matter how badly the Dursleys treated Harry, they at least raised him. And what did he do? He did nothing. In short, it is a drama. The Dursley family is not a likable character to begin with. Even if the protagonist is Dali, the Dursley couple are still not likable. Then another OOC Hagrid appeared, and he was not a likable character either. When they arrived at the vault, Griphook was also very arrogant. There are only two characters who are not annoying, Harry Daly. After flipping through the catalog, there are also the Malfoy family who are disgusting. I know that as the plot of Hogwarts progresses, some good characters will appear, but the relatively large-scale accumulation of negative characters in the front really made me a little annoyed while reading.

The Return Stream has finally reached me, Dali

I feel that the mother path matches well with the HP worldview. You can enter Hufflepuff, and the related abilities and roles are very convenient. However, if the sequence 2 matron of desolation is a male protagonist, it will challenge the reader's acceptance ability.

So far, the writing is pretty good? But the Inquisitor path has nothing to do with Harry Potter, right? It seems that the ability is completely unable to adapt to the Harry Potter world view at low levels. How do you think that other paths such as the Medicine Path, the Apprentice Path, and the Fool Path have combat effectiveness at least at the low level. But it depends on how the author writes it.

As mentioned, I suspect that Dudley may have vaguely planted the seeds of losing control. The fact that he put the elixir of life in the family's dishes may be a precursor to losing control. Because immortality is something that everyone longs for, but not everyone can afford. Take Dumbledore as an example. Dumbledore lived for more than a hundred years, his family was broken up, his lover broke up, and two generations of Dark Lords were so persevering. Why didn't he use the Philosopher's Stone to make the elixir of immortality himself? The answer is probably that longevity is really a grinding thing, a very common setting in the second dimension. If you live a long time, you will experience a lot of things, life, death, separation, vicissitudes of life, etc. Even if Dumbledore really lived for more than a hundred years, he might not choose to continue. Except for Dudley, who is probably a god and has achieved uniqueness, Petunia Vernon is considered an ordinary person, while Harry is at most a special little wizard with a piece of Voldemort. Can their world view accept that they have to live for hundreds of years without knowing it, something that ordinary people cannot experience at all? Why did Klein leave his brothers and sisters? Isn't it because the extraordinary gathering is too dangerous and ordinary people cannot bear it. Wherever Dudley is, Feifan will gather, and everyone around him will be involved. So for Dudley, as a person who fights for power from the secret side, he does not consider the consequences of spreading the elixir without saying a word and dreaming of being able to live as a family in the future. Because he is here, Feifan will be attracted to him, causing others to be involved in incidents like Brass Book, and the whole school will suffer. Not to mention the psychological issues to endure. Judging from the results, he actually doesn't care about the safety of the people around him, he just wants the people around him to fix his humanity. How could two ordinary people, Petunia Vernon, adapt to extraordinary and strange things? They even seemed unsuitable for drinking potions, because being an extraordinary really requires intelligence that is higher than others and a cold hand.

It looks pretty good, but starting from Hagrid, it feels like the author is deliberately overstepping the original characters.

I have a question: Does Dumbledore Voldemort have the power of a demigod?

The setting is quite good. Why do you have to hang out with Harry Potter and return to the wishful world? There are two ways, whether it is to establish your own Black Emperor's kingdom, or to merge the wizarding world, Muggle world, or the wizarding and Muggle world to become an anchor. In order to maintain humanity in order to become a god, don't always focus on the original protagonist of Harry Potter.

It's boring,,, and you know and I know the plot, but the protagonist doesn't know the plot,,, it's a repeat of the original work, it's not interesting at all,,,

I have seen it in a fan before. The Invisibility Cloak represents the night, the Resurrection Stone represents Death, and the Elder Wand represents dusk. Hope this can give the author some inspiration

I want to see the witch through Salvador Dali. There is already Harry the witch, so having Salvador Dali is not too much. Cousins ​​are blessed to share the same blessings

Isn't it interesting for you to just follow the group?

Ron

I have read about 60 chapters so far. The protagonist Dudley is at one time unfamiliar with the things around him and does not foresee things around him. At another time, he talks like he has read Harry Potter novels and talks about things he should not know. At one time, he is like an aborigine who has returned to his original world. At another time, he is like an outsider who has traveled from another world. It is so disconnected.

How could the author think of putting the Lord of Mysteries and Harry Potter together😰

Forget it, I've run out of books to read You can leave your brain here, and I guarantee you won't eat it secretly.

Chapter 7 Zoo: This is the first time I saw someone think that a python can blink its eyes.

666, Judge who is promoted to the sixth sequence, you are telling me that he is in the promotion sequence. Author Yun doesn't even know that sequence seven is the mid-sequence, and he still writes that he is a best friend.

Personally, I think this book is okay. I almost wanted to remove it from my bookshelf when I saw the reviews. After thinking about it, I decided to read a few chapters first and found that in my opinion, it is not as bad as what I read in the reviews. You can read a few chapters first before deciding whether to follow it, and don't be affected by book reviews.

I feel like this book has been screwed up, there are so many bugs 🙂

The early stage writing is quite good, the system is very good and the protagonist's IQ is online. But starting from the mid-term, it became a bit pretentious. . . If you don't know anything about magic, shouldn't you be farming? . Slowly improve the sequence and enrich your poor brain, but it feels like you are writing just for the plot and have no idea how to stand on the moral high ground to confront Dumbledore. . And I feel like you don't know enough details about the Harry Potter and Lord of Mysteries books. . Many handling methods are too blunt. . The main character's personality is really unlikable. The writing flew away. . Follow me in a novel where the protagonist Slytherin leads Hermione to question Dumbledore for not taking the safety of his students seriously. Are you using the theoretical standards of the 21st century to demand the childhood of those born in the 1980s? . Maybe the author's writing philosophy is not in line with mine, and I feel a little uncomfortable with this kind of Long Ao Tianwen.

Dally has always been dissatisfied with Dumbledore, the principal, being irresponsible to students. For example, knowing that Quirrell had a problem, Dumbledore still let it go. But in fact, Dali has no right to blame Dumbledore. After all, he himself is not a good person. He formed a secret society in the school and even wanted to help Malfoy become the next Dark Lord. Moreover, he is also a fun-loving person and likes to watch the fun. He told Principal Deng that he didn't care about the wizarding world at all and was indifferent to things that did not involve his own life and safety. Therefore, he made himself act like a good person and blamed Dumbledore. It was a double standard. So I don't think he has any qualifications. Of course, you can also blame Dumbledore, provided that you are also a good person yourself. You cannot do some dirty things yourself, kill people wantonly, be cold-blooded, selfish and indifferent, indifferent to people except your own relatives and friends, and then always ask others why they are not kind and have a sense of responsibility. This is really ridiculous!

Before reading, in order to keep a normal person's brain from being distorted by bad comments, please ask yourself a few questions. You can read it after you approve it all! 1/Have you seen Harry Potter? Movies or novels are acceptable 2/Have you seen Lord of Mysteries? Novel or fan fiction is acceptable 3/Do you have the ability to think logically? 4/Do you recognize the results of the practical test?

It's well written. Come on, I've read Chapter 45.

The protagonist does not have the same sense of crisis as Mr. Ke in the original work, and the enemies are not good enough, resulting in insufficient conflict. Personally, the most satisfying thing was when the protagonist used 002 to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger for the first few times, but then it felt a lot worse.

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When will the new book be released? The author