The Game of Kings

Patriotism is really embarrassing. Political correctness is political correctness, but your love is outrageous for no reason, just like a licking dog. To be honest, I didn't feel any enthusiasm at all when I was patriotic and raised the national flag this time. I just felt awkward. It's outrageous that no one recognizes the national flag raised. I hope the author will contain less personal information in the future. I came to read the novel, otherwise I might as well read Qiangguo. Even if it's private goods, please make it more reasonable and well-founded, okay?

Dad, you are awesome. Please show mercy to this girl's worldview. Don't be a stallion, please ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Tell me about your personal feelings and suggestions 😁 The protagonist is relatively calm. Although he occasionally hits the second grade, he does not pretend to be crazy just because he has skills or predicts the plot. He explains to his teammates appropriately and keeps his secrets appropriately. He is very mature and hopes to maintain it. 👍 It is recommended not to add a female protagonist unless you can write a good emotional scene or add a female confidant. The three most common types of female protagonists that I hate most: the Holy Virgin White Lotus/The Troublemaker/The Troublemaker, they will definitely ruin the book. It is difficult to write this kind of world-traveling novel, especially adding King of Glory is equivalent to locking the scope into the combat theme. However, I personally recommend not to enter a world repeatedly unless necessary (unless the material is not enough). The excitement from meeting/acquaintance/acquaintance/to parting is difficult to express in repeated worlds. Appropriate regrets make the novel more exciting. Moreover, it will be difficult to deal with the feelings between the characters when you enter it the second time. The relationship between the two parties sublimates at the end of the first time, and it will feel like a series if you enter it multiple times. 🤭In fact, female heroes can also be used, and they can be changed to a male style with consistent skills. However, I still look forward to the emergence of some elegant legal characters (with a change of fighting style) such as Yixing/Yuan Ge/Zhang Liang/Zhuge Liang, etc. Finally, I would like to say that the update is slow and the length is short 😭

Can the author write about other worlds of Tomb Raider Notes, such as the sea of ​​sand, hidden sea flowers, angry sea submerged sand, Laojiumen, etc. The third uncle of the Southern School has conceived Tomb Raider Notes as a macro world. I think it is quite good. There are many places to conceive, just like the main story of Tomb Raider Notes you wrote. I feel very immersed and like it very much. I recommend it to you, please improve it, and subscribe to it if it is available.

I think the strange thing is that the protagonist knows that he can wear it, why doesn't he make up for it in reality? The persona of the academic master in the book is very inconsistent with the character of the academic scumbag. I think the reason why this book failed to achieve the desired results is because of the loss of the first wave of book friends in "Revival of Spiritual Energy" and the loss of the second wave of book friends in the Douluo Continent chapter. In layman's terms, the author stepped on a lot of mistakes.

The author please pay attention to the wording. There are a few uncivilized words in each chapter, which may look good to some people. However, the core socialist values ​​advocated by your book include "civilization". According to this way of writing, every subsequent chapter will have uncivilized words, and then there is "the divinity of civilization", which is not good! ————The above is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize!

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It's pretty good. Keep up the good work and don't want any more eunuchs.

I revealed the prototype of the male protagonist in the book, I want to go to the author's house to kill him...😑😑😑😑😑

I have a request for the harem, and can you write more about the tomb robbing notes? I beg you.

There are not many people in the group. If you are a good book friend, please add me. There is a young lady in the group and you can get red envelopes!

The front was fine, but the back immediately started taking people through time travel, which felt a bit weird.

I still like the idea of ​​this novel. The game has the setting of transforming into a hero in Honor of Kings, but my love is limited to the protagonist. Now that he has transformed, other people can also become heroes. This is a big discount for me and I may not continue to pursue it in the future. Tear, your vote is gone.

Who asked you to write about such a biased world? I think most people have only read the parts of Douluo Dalu and Tomb Raiders.

Am I the only one who hasn't watched Eight Hundred?

I like this book, especially the Operation Red Sea chapter. I hope to enter that world again. Baili keeps his promise and never breaks his promise. Extra chapters are also possible! Big cheers for the author! Your book is very beautiful≧∇≦

Ahhhhhh, I'm really looking forward to more and more roles in the future...! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! (Actually, I really want to guard Yuo's wolf ears and Daji's fox ears and tail~ Hehehehe... ⁄(⁄⁄⁄ω⁄⁄⁄)⁄) Hmm... Big boost, author! ! ! ~\(≧▽≦)/~ (Quietly give me a mom~╭(╯3╰)╮ (no one should see me (＞人＜;)))

The creativity is very interesting, but the author has a poor grasp of the settings and characters of each original work. The Douluo part is too poisonous.

Some personal suggestions ✊ The next world should not be too long, or it would be better to describe a time period in it from the perspective of a passerby. If the novel world is too long, it will become fan-like. Although the stories like Tomb Raider Notes and Operation Red Sea are short, the emotional portrayal of the characters in them is quite good. Douluo is too long, and many plots directly match the protagonist's experience of Tang San in the original work.

No heroine or single heroine! (Preferably without a female protagonist) Our country has a complete set of laws on marriage 😜

To be honest, I don't like the feeling of being restricted by skills. It's too rigid. The game does that for expressiveness, and there are not so many messy restrictions in CG. For example, Li Bai's first skill should be similar to thrusting (although it can penetrate walls) in reality, his second skill should be similar to field, and his ultimate move should be sword energy. It feels very silly to insist on rigid skills.

Do you have any similar novels about time travel with king skills?

It's pretty good. Small World is also very interesting, but I can't stand it anymore starting from the fifth row.

Magic Boy

The early stage was amazing! But since the beginning of Douluo, I have had the feeling that the golden finger has been opened wide, and it is no longer within the normal range.

It's a good question that you wrote like this. The heroes in tmd have been weakened by at least 90%. You can beat someone with several sets without dying, and you have purchased several ready-made sets. This one just got that spiritual energy, that is, the little garbage that just refined it. For those who have cultivated the truth, they should only be on the first or second level of Qi refining. The weak ones. I read your last book and it was also very rubbish. The sovereign of a family knew that the male protagonist had the mentality and strength to destroy the family, so he sentenced those minions in the Jindan stage to die (by this time, the male protagonist had already killed several of them, and then the Jindan person exchanged his life for a piece of information, and then sentenced three golden elixir stage minions to die)

It's not even a cool novel, and it's not even close to a novice novel. I can still read the first one when I first started reading. This book is actually the same as "King of Fighters". It's full of operations but it's a pity that no A's are found. The opponent was assigned a pentakill script, but he didn't have the skills.

This book is written very well by the author! But I'm not familiar with the copy... I feel dizzy after reading it... The tomb robbing notes are at the beginning, it's hard to skip! This copy is very popular, but it still can't compare to Gui Blowing Lantern! Just look at the popularity of the film and television version! And the plot relationship is relatively complicated! I can only say goodbye!

It's all settled, let me give you the essence.

How can I put it this way? This book was the first book I read when I joined Qidian. At that time, I read it in three days. I thought I could read it for a long time, but I didn't expect it to be finished in a hurry. The world of tomb robbers was not finished yet. It can be said that this book was beyond my control! 😭😭😭