The Sound of the Knife Shaking the Wind Chime

The martial arts area has always been tepid inside the starting point, and it is difficult to find books. At every turn, there is a big fight between Jin Gu and Huang Wen's fans. There are so many books on the same subject that it becomes stale. I also read the few original books. One of them incorporated the plot of Cthulhu. The creativity was good, but in the middle period, the same copy was boring and lost the motivation to read. There is also the Grandmaster Invincible series. Every time the villain appears, The same setting ➕ Change the name of martial arts and then be immediately squeezed out by the same supporting role later, boring... Until this book appeared, I finished reading it in about two hours. So far, the reading experience is very smooth, and the plot reversal is not abrupt. It is something that has been carefully designed and considered. There are some expressions of literary youth, but it is not awkward, and it feels like it just clicks. I also had a similar reversal when I read another book "The Immortal Eater" in the past two months, expressed by Wenqing. But since entering the second volume, the character's inner description and literary expression take up four-fifths of a chapter, and it continues for dozens of chapters, which really makes the reading experience drop a lot, just like the moments before Naruto's battle and the climax of the flashback chapter side story. Although it's something that enriches the character's image, I still can't bear to think that ten episodes are all about memories. Balance, but not at the expense of reading flow. The current book is very good, with some cologne-like dialogues, but it is not procrastinating. This is very valuable when the number of words is the starting point for measuring income! Like👍🏻 At present, these are the advantages of this book. Personally, I feel that the key content in the later stage can also be introduced into the key content of Diudiu's entrance poem number and final poem number. Learning how to perform Baodao Puppetry is also one of the ways to improve your performance, rather than directly describing the techniques and using treasure phantoms to support the scene. Speaking of this, I admire that the descriptions of moves and techniques in the book "The Immortal Eater" are all based on ancient Chinese poetry, which always gives little surprises inadvertently.

The plot is full of reversals, reversals, and reversals. It belongs to the style of martial arts novels of the previous generation. The writing style is very suitable for martial arts literature.

I think of the sentimental flowers and the ruthless snow again. When the wind stops chasing, the moon can only be speechless. It's so sad.

After reading a few chapters, the writing is excellent, but the character portrayal is a bit inverted, and the lines have the flavor of Cologne. To put it simply, they are all crazy. The shortcomings are not as ruthless as the protagonist in Pillow Knife!

I feel a bit cuckold, brother, if you are a female protagonist, don't get involved with other men 🙂🙂

This book supports maintenance, but it is also important to read the data. I hope you will take the time to click on the latest chapter to the end and stay for about 30 seconds. After listening to the instructions from the boss, it seems that there is also automatic reading. It seems that just 2 minutes will be enough. Sorry, I hope it can be put on the shelves as soon as possible. After all, I am short of royalties. If I have to work and write at the same time, I often write unsatisfactorily if I don't have enough energy. But I don't want to send garbage to people, I just want to write a good story for everyone to read, so please everyone, thank you.

I write things first, and of course what I write is for people to read. Some people, if you read what I wrote for the first time and you don't like it, okay, it doesn't matter. You can go around as you like when you go out. I'm not begging you to read my books. I'm asking you to read other people's books. But if you curse and insult others, then brother, if I don't ban you, who will you ban? Then, I don't ask for what this book can do. What I write is first of all what I like, so I have the motivation to write it down. Well, if someone wants to show off here, they can scold me and other readers because of the content in the book. Brother, let me ban you.

I thought it was catching a knife in the wind😁😁

The rivers and lakes often despise the king's power and the king's country the most. It is the country where you marry, not the country where you marry, that brings shame to the country where you marry. How can the country where you marry go one after another and kill the men of the country where you marry, especially the rivers and lakes. In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, even powerful Han Dynasty sent their daughters to marry. At that time, people (Han/Tang) said they were from the same family, and marrying someone would gain more benefits from the population, craftsmen, and wealth. Today, people call the two sides a fusion of nationalities.

The writing is quite good. The author should be a cologne fan, but relatively few people read this type of writing. If you want to make money, you probably have to be flexible and adapt to the times to survive.

No, this kind of book cannot be appreciated by just one person. Wait for me to circulate it to everyone.

Very well written, but unfortunately, I have adapted to fast food and can no longer watch this kind of thing

Difficult book, fairy grass, stand up as proof, this book will be a god

I have almost forgotten what Zhengzheng Jianghu is like. Starting from Jin Yong, the word "jianghu" has appeared widely in the public eye. What does it mean specifically? Is it a human relationship, a story, or the Jianghu in the hearts of people in the Jianghu. To be honest, I really can't tell clearly. It also started from Jin Yong. My definition of Jianghu is becoming more and more vague. I can't find the reason. I have forgotten what Jianghu is except for Jin Yong. What kind of thing is it? After many years, I suddenly understand that Jianghu is an emotion that recognizes the author. I think you are very good. From ancient times to the present, this thing has really been difficult to write clearly. What you can write clearly is what is in your heart. If you can get the reader to be in a trance for a moment, then you are successful. You are very good. What you write is very delicate. There are not too many words, but it is like a lot of words.

Damn it, my writing is so awesome

After reading the comments, they seem to be well written. Original martial arts, commendable courage, but only 70,000 characters, I will learn how to do it first. I just took a look at the author's rewritten revision statement. It seems that the author won't write a lot, so how many words do I plan to write?

Can you help me take a look at what I wrote?

From the current point of view, the author's writing style of martial arts is still good, but I really don't mind writing original books in the first book. Why, because it is not in line with the mass market, and there are not many fans and popularity. Now it is almost the most difficult time for original traditional martial arts, because its golden period has passed, and most readers have their own warm-water zones and will not easily try to get in touch with other types of books by other authors! Only a few readers will continue to try different styles and types. The original readers are mostly from this kind of people and people who are new to the game and people who like martial arts. Of course, compared to the majority of readers, this is a very small number. Only after it becomes popular can it attract the public readers! The words of martial arts fans are relatively in line with the mass market. This is definitely due to readers' dissatisfaction with the classics. They don't like certain plots in the original works and are eager for changes. Another advantage of fandom is that it provides a relatively large template that the public prefers. Personally, I still recommend writing some martial arts fan fiction first, to accumulate popularity, and then try to create your own!

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