Are You Addicted to Fairy? Just Electricity!

He is a cultivator who values ​​friendship very much. He has also been obsessed with this emo many times because of the unclear relationship. He also wrote a character called "The Child of Luck", and secretly steals from the main character, steals his house, and is disgusting. It smells like blue silver grass.

At first, family farming was quite interesting, but then the protagonist suddenly started to go crazy. Combined with the simple and straightforward writing style, it seemed that the protagonist was in adolescence instead of becoming a black man.

It's all about useless things. It doesn't write about the practice process, nor does it write about inventions and creations. It only writes about trivial and insignificant things. Too boring to watch

Book Review: Great book! I have read 65 chapters so far. It is well written and interesting. I recommend it.

Cyber ​​cultivating immortality? Mechanical ascension?

What is the difference between modern knowledge traveling through dimension reduction to attack the world of immortality and the ancient world of magic with qigong? It's disgusting to watch. You can cultivate immortality even if you can't control the size of the electric current. People's Lei Linggen can't control the current more accurately than you. You can sense spiritual energy with just a single electricity. Then any qi practitioner disciple can help people get started.

It's okay to avoid the prince and get involved with the princess instead. This time, I arranged for the protagonist to get in touch with him Isn't it shameful for the protagonist to go even though he knew it would cause a lot of trouble? Still can't hide? The protagonist is a cultivator, but he is afraid of a mortal? At worst, it would be over if she was assassinated. Anyway, there are many people in the capital who can't stand her. If it doesn't work, they will poison her and frame her for the prince-in-law. Later, this woman seems to have gone to the Hehuan Sect, so what does it have to do with the protagonist if she goes to cultivate as an immortal? Don't say that you hold a grudge against the protagonist because he didn't go to dinner with her. Isn't that just a look-alike? I have helped her so many times before I subscribed to 3 chapters of the chapters after they were released. As expected, the first chapter was about poisoning, asking for trouble, and then pretending to slap her in the face. The protagonist was so cautious in doing things before, and the prince was hiding away to avoid getting into trouble, but he wanted to get in touch with this down-and-out princess. You can see for yourself what this plot is about. Before, a lot of people scolded the protagonist for being a dog-licker and a green-haired turtle. You are directly supporting the protagonist 😁😁 I thought you could write something about the plot that you didn't want to arrange a clan master's wife. Is there any difference between this and that kind of plot? 🤔🤔 You have to add the setting of a wife to this princess, right? Is there a possibility that it can actually be written without a female protagonist? This is a fairy tale, not an urban novel. It has to have a female protagonist, and a lot of urban novels don't have female protagonists 🙂 Anyway, I can't bear it anymore, so I'll moisturize it first. If this woman's character doesn't change, see how many people will read it.

，，？ This operation was done 10 years ago. Isn't this retro? What do you mean by being tired of watching something older? Whoever becomes the emperor should not be the brother of the protagonist, and for the sake of this female character, the protagonist's IQ is directly lowered. What is your point? If you want to write a character well according to your way of writing, does the protagonist have to be distorted by you, his mind lowered, his intelligence reduced, and he suffers a loss? Aren't the main characters, his brother and his third uncle, well described? Why do you have to abstract them as soon as you get a female character? You also have to be tough on your words. If you don't know how to write, you can just go to a female channel if you want to write like this.

Sometimes the writing is really good, thoughtful, interesting, and interesting. Sometimes, there is really shit hidden in the text, which is poisonous and smelly

I testify that the author is indeed not a major in electrical appliances, he is a major in civil engineering 🤓

Everyone is disgusted with this plot, eh, I just won't change it, and I will disgust everyone, to avoid lightning.

Collect the names and functions of some exercises, spells, elixirs, magic weapons, formations, and spiritual materials from passing readers.

If these recent plots are not changed, this book will be useless.

The author doesn't have to write it if he doesn't want to. Why are you doing all this bells and whistles?

That female cultivator named Luo Hongxia was just disgusting and criticized her addiction for violating her own health care.

There are so many people criticizing this female supporting role. Why don't you, the author, reflect on it?

Quickly, this is an old author (affirmation from an old bookworm)

Cultivation or not, making money or not, being low-key or not, showing off or not, this is the intrigue in the mortal world. It's really interesting. I'm more convinced and like it. I'm not worthy of watching it.

There is no need for the role of princess to exist

What's the point of writing this princess? Do you want her to be the heroine? The current description is disgusting enough, why not not write it?

The protagonist is a time traveler, and then he has no spiritual roots to practice through electric current, and then has a smooth journey. As a reader, I feel that the protagonist should be arrogant. How can he really become friends with several people who meet by chance and come together through interests. Luo Hongxia, I also don't understand what charm can attract the protagonist. When reading now, it feels like there are too few words to describe the relevant characters. You don't have much foreshadowing in the front. When you need to be a tool to promote the plot later, the readers can't get involved 😒

Fortunately, I gave up early, and the heroine wrote the same thing as the defense

What I took was a script about scientific research and cultivating immortality. It had to be written as a story about seizing treasures and cultivating immortality. This was the script. If it was written like this, it would be weird if the results would be good.

How should I put it? From now on, I don't want to see it anymore and it feels like someone else has changed.

I still like the author's Douluo fanfics! ! ! Does the author plan to write another Douluo fanfic?

Is anyone in the small treasury group? It took too long to bubble up, so I was kicked out 😭

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

The beginning of Chapter 75, what is written, is poisonous and embarrassing,

Which one makes money writing, Douluo or this one?