Immortality and Immortality: Supplier of Two Realms Spirit Mine

The writing is good, especially the supporting characters are very detailed, and there is no weak-minded and brainless plot at all. However, the upgrade is too slow. It only takes more than fifty chapters to go from the third level of Qi training to the fourth level of Qi training. It still takes a lot of drugs. Generally speaking, the novel is probably in the middle and late stages of foundation building.

The more I write, the more I get off topic. How many of the two hundred chapters are related to the Root Spirit Mine? We want to see the operation and development of the spirit mine between the two worlds. It's not like you've been jumping around to your death! You want power but not strength, you want strength but not strength, you want background but no background, and you don't have backers. You just rely on the enemy's imagination to bluff once or twice. You really think that there is someone behind you, jumping left and right among the major forces. Those who are cultivating immortals have to go and practice martial arts, which makes the martial arts practitioners even better than those who are cultivating immortals. No matter how fast you practice martial arts, can you be faster than your spiritual consciousness or faster than escaping light? Can defense resist magic weapons of the same realm? Can you resist the soul attack? Those with high realms have magical powers that are thousands of miles away. Sealing the sky and locking the earth, burning the sky and boiling the sea will be used as a soup pot for you, controlling life and death and directly attacking the soul. Even if you are allowed to get close to the body, split light and shadow, Li Daitao is dead, reborn with a drop of blood, and other magical powers, how can you reach the same level in martial arts training and immortality? If martial arts training is so powerful, it should be in the world of martial arts instead of the world of immortals and demons, and it is so miserable to be suppressed by cultivating immortals.

🪖 There are no immortal cultivators on the other side. I am afraid that after the protagonist has passed a period of time or has reached a high level, a bunch of people who are not immortal cultivators but are comparable to immortal cultivators will pop up from behind.

Are you wearing it? Like wearing. Since there are immortals on both sides, precious ores are everywhere! Either the world level of martial arts is too high and they don't appreciate that kind of ore. Either the level of the martial arts world is too low and they can't handle those ores, but it doesn't make sense. After all, there are people who are cultivating immortals.

It could have been! There is no panel, and the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are all above average. However, the title and introduction of the book are a bit discouraging, and I thought it was another mindless text. After reading it, I found that it is really good. Ambrosia! Don't cut it, hold it steady

I said your economic system is unreasonable, so delete it!

The biggest problem is that I have been in the martial arts world for too long.

Why do I always feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. . . .

It's okay, have fun, don't be too greedy, and write well!

The writing style is okay, but there is no distinction between priorities and priorities.

The writing is too slow. When I reach Chapter 35, there is no plot at all. Various things are written a little bit.

The biggest problem is that I can finish reading it in one day at this point. If I don't follow up, it's easy for a new author to stop reading.

This book is okay, there is nothing poisonous about it so far

But after reading the previous part, there are actually quite a lot of logical problems. I just don't know if there are any explanations later on. Have you seen Shen Nong? Please start your performance

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You don't have to pursue coolness, you can slow down the pace 🤐 and have some ambiguity.

Good food and grass. The slow growth of the realm is not a poisonous point. Only when you can tell a good story can you be successful. Except for some details, the writing is quite good.

Overall it's okay, but there are a lot of flaws in the front

It's good-looking, and the writing can be a bit cool, but it's just too little.

The development of civilization depends on environment + time, as well as the intelligent life forms that develop civilization. There may be deviations in cultural ideas, leading to different paths, but the basic things have little impact If there is a lack of physical training methods in the world of cultivating immortals, it is recommended to attribute it to environmental resources rather than martial arts, and the so-called lack of physical training methods does not last long, otherwise they can forcefully find another way for you, a path that does not require physical training. Of course, I always believe that it is better to talk about resources than skills Just an opinion. In the end, don't treat everyone as fools. Unless the world changes too fast, otherwise the creatures in the world will definitely have all the ways to use resources. Except for some strange resources, there are not so many loopholes to exploit in conventional resources. Even if they are useless and there is no way to use them, others will collect them first and circle them first due to their characteristics alone Moreover, if you have the skills and resources to reach the top, those big families and even big sects will probably all train their own children. As long as they are not in the Age of Ending Dharma and their talents are not bad, almost all of them can reach the top... If you want to suggest, add a lot of descriptions about transformation during the growth process of the protagonist. It is best to use spiritual will as a higher level level, otherwise the world will be a lot of strong people at the same level. After all, it is not a world where fantasy physique is king. Even if physique is king, others will definitely have various plunders and blood inheritance. After all, it is still about resources. "Unless the protagonist's golden finger can break all barriers, the essence is extremely high" The early and mid-term are definitely resource-based, and the main focus is on the later stage. You have to find a way to write down why it is difficult to break through each realm. It is best not to talk about the protagonist's breakthrough in terms of understanding. I really don't think the protagonist's understanding is very high...

The writing is very good, but there are too few updates, and there is not much content every day. It is a bit tiring to follow it, and I have to recall the previous content.

Although I don't follow updates, I come here regularly to resubscribe 🙂, don't stop.

😁Be sure

There are too few of them, so I have to wait for a while to read them. I can't quench my thirst every day.