Rebirth: the Deskmate I Feed Is Such a Treasure

There may be some plots that are not very reasonable, but that does not prevent it from being a good work. Well, this 🍅 content is already top-notch, I hope the author can continue to maintain and improve it

It's not that you are not allowed to have more female protagonists, but you have to ask yourself whether you can grasp it. Why don't you like multiple female protagonists now? It's because eight out of ten failed to write.

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Overall, it's okay. The male protagonist handles things decisively, especially the family business. The character creation is also relatively detailed. They are not all the same. Each supporting character has his or her own personality, but the amount is too small and not enough to watch!

The image of the heroine still cannot be established... She talks little, she is righteous, she can run, she is good-looking, she likes the protagonist, and these are the labels that come and go. Like Fang Jun, who loves to drink, there are not many daily descriptions. There are many appearances but nothing The content of portraying the image This is a novel. If a character does not "speak" and has no action description, then she/he is transparent, just like the historical celebrities hanging on the wall of the school. What achievements can be achieved by just knowing the name? In private and daily life We have no way of knowing who he is, so we feel a sense of distance. Fang Jun is fine with this. But Xie Bingran is the heroine. If she is not alive, she will become a celebrity in the history books. If you only hear the story, you will not know the person. Other novels are considered to be in different places. Love also involves communication. There is no such thing as a talkative character. Only unfamiliar people talk less. Even deaf-mute people can type and sign and express their emotions in their own way with familiar people. Even if their hands are as tired as seals, how can they not have the desire to express themselves to the person they like? "Oh" is all you need to reply to messages every day. How about writing the heroine like a big tree? Shake the leaves when watering every day. At least it's a curiosity. The most important thing is that the author obviously doesn't have the ability to portray characters. The portrayal of middle-aged people like the protagonist's father, classmates, competitors, party A, leaders in the system, and people who don't have much content are all portrayed very realistically The heroine becomes mute. Damn it. After a while, he disappeared and went to the sports hospital and went to jail. He didn't even bother to type a word about the protagonist. He didn't describe his daily life at all. When he met, he just walked around and kissed and hugged him in a formulaic way. He didn't even say "Do you want to"? Are you going to die?" Look at how many times I have written it. It's hard to resist. It's still the same sentence. There are no people who talk little. There are only people who don't have a good relationship. Anyone who is silent around you is just that you are not familiar with him.

Is it a single girl? Single girls don't read it. Now the starting point has become the world of eunuchs. It's so hypocritical. I can't find any books and read them all. Isn't there such a neat and refreshing novel? There are 180 chapters in one stretch. It's really stupid and annoying to death.

Don't order the part of the recent advertising pitch. The author is cheating me out of money. I can't see the existing advertising plan analysis. I'll pay you to see it.

This is not the first time I have seen limited sales. Just a sports star has not released a product yet, so he will release a limited edition first? Build a tall building first without laying a foundation? Too 6

First of all, I have no interest in advertising company development and professional content. Then the update is too slow. The plot progress of each chapter is slow. After this, I have to keep reading. Then the protagonist has to stare hard at such an advertising industry? It's okay to engage in industries such as electric vehicles and sports brands, but don't you consider getting involved in the Internet based on the direction of your previous life? Anyway, the pen is in the hands of the author. If it is unreasonable, it will be unreasonable. Those authors who write about business wars and the Internet may not know much about it, so just feel free to write. There is no need to write in such detail as in today's advertising industry.

Single heroine, or I will kill you! ! ! ! ! Author, please don't be ignorant

The book is okay, but the pace is too slow. Really, whether it's a romantic drama or a career line, there's a reason why it's not popular.

The current update is up to chapter 308, 75% of the progress, fully subscribed. I couldn't help but complain a lot in these chapters, it's just my personal opinion. 1️⃣The male and female protagonists are well established, especially the heroine's character, which is very bold and novel. The main motivation for pursuing her is Brother Bing. 2️⃣Personally, I just want to read a cool article, not to learn about advertising. I feel that the author should be a practitioner in this field. There are too many private articles exported. Nearly a hundred pages are filled with advertisements. I finally finished it. I knew that the protagonist can pretend to be pens and win, but I didn't expect to be able to write so many private articles. Wow 3️⃣Every word is a teacher, and the whole world is calling it teacher. It's very confusing. I'm not a person in the relevant industry. I don't know if it was already like this in 2006. I'm shocked to see it 4️⃣It's just a complaint. I won't say more this time. It doesn't matter if you delete the comment. Anyway, I am used to taking screenshots as a souvenir. Just take a look, it can be considered as support Above

The female characters in this book are well written, a little ambiguity is enough, but if there were really multiple female protagonists, it would fall apart. Brother Bing's character design is even finished. Unless the harem is opened and Brother Bing leaves.

Don't bother with multiple female protagonists. It's boring. Really, you can write 2 million words for a single career line. It's appropriate to add a single female protagonist. The monthly ticket at the end of the month is 800 or 900. This should be a good result. If you fail to write multiple female protagonists, won't you fall short?

I think Brother Bing, your setting is too strong. If you dare to go out and play, she can dent all the protruding places on your body, and then kill you and make you unable to survive. If you want to have a harem with this kind of heroine, you're just dreaming.

Can you write one main line? Merchants write advertisements to defraud money. Who wants to see you write advertisements?

That's all there is to say about the advertisement, so it will be removed from the shelves.

The author is quite clever and knows that in the readership circle of Qidian, both single heroine and multiple heroines have a large group of fans. If the label of single heroine or Shura field is clearly marked, some readers will definitely be lost, so he simply does not label it and allows readers to judge for themselves by reading and subscribing. I am a multi-heroine person. My philosophy is that in reality, based on my ability and status, I can only have one female protagonist, my wife. I was reborn as a single heroine. Isn't my rebirth for nothing? No matter what, I have to keep the red flag inside the door and the colorful flags flying outside.

You underestimated when the plot will end. It's been nine days since you updated every day 🤔

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This one most resembles Brother Bing's temperament

Thank you Baiyun Qingniao for your great masterpiece. I cried, laughed, and read at the same time. I was deeply attracted by this two-way rush and careful protection ~ I love it so much 😍 I was lucky enough to be able to win this book "Rebirth: The Deskmate I Feed is a Treasure" at the Himalayas audition. The audiobook has recently been put on the shelves at Himalayas. All listeners are welcome to listen and make corrections ~ 😌🙏🤝

My monthly passes have been given so far this month, so it's not too much to ask for a boost

It's so pretty. It's so damn sweet. I hope I'm single. I'm not against a harem, but it's just too sweet.

Did you change your name? ? I remember I seemed to have seen 🙂

The author is too slow to update. No one will follow you like this.

In 2006, should I fill in the application based on knowing the score or fill in the application based on the estimated score?

You don't need me to say it

This is the first time I have invested so much, usually it is expired.

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