Immortal Cultivation: Spirit Mine Supplier Between Two Worlds

The writing is getting increasingly off-topic. How many of the two hundred chapters are actually related to spirit mines? We want to see the development and operation of spirit mines between the two realms, not your constant back-and-forth and reckless behavior! You have no power, no strength, no background, no backing.

🪖On the other side, there are no cultivators now. It's probably because after the protagonist goes through a period of time or his realm becomes higher, a bunch of people who are not cultivators but are comparable to cultivators will suddenly appear.

Are you wearing it? Yes, you are. Since there are cultivators on both sides, and precious minerals are everywhere! Either the martial arts world is too high-level to even consider those ores, or the martial arts world is too low-level to process them, but that doesn't make sense either, since there are cultivators.

The writing is good, especially the supporting characters are portrayed in great detail, and there is no brainless or idiotic plot. However, the leveling up is too slow. It took more than fifty chapters to go from Qi Refining Level 3 to Qi Refining Level 4, and he still had to take a lot of pills. In most novels, he would probably be in the mid-to-late Foundation Establishment stage by then.

This one's great! No character panels, and both the main and supporting characters are intelligent. The title and synopsis are a bit off-putting, though; I thought it would be another mindless read. But after finishing it, I found it's really good. A gem! Don't give up!

I said your economic system is unreasonable, so delete this!

The biggest problem is that I've been in the martial arts world for too long.

The writing style is acceptable, but the main points are not well-defined.

It just doesn't feel quite right when I read it...

It's alright, don't be greedy for too many exciting moments, just write well!