Reborn: My Desk Mate, Whom I Spoil, Is a Hidden Gem

It's not that you are not allowed to have more female protagonists, but you have to ask yourself whether you can grasp it. Why don't you like multiple female protagonists now? It's because eight out of ten failed to write.

😄😄

Overall, it's okay. The male protagonist handles things decisively, especially the family business. The character creation is also relatively detailed. They are not all the same. Each supporting character has his or her own personality, but the amount is too small and not enough to watch!

The image of the heroine still cannot be established... She talks little, she is righteous, she can run, she is good-looking, she likes the protagonist, and these are the labels that come and go. Like Fang Jun, who loves to drink, there are not many daily descriptions. There are many appearances but nothing The content of portraying the image This is a novel. If a character does not "speak" and has no action description, then she/he is transparent, just like the historical celebrities hanging on the wall of the school. What achievements can be achieved by just knowing the name? In private and daily life We have no way of knowing who he is, so we feel a sense of distance. Fang Jun is fine with this. But Xie Bingran is the heroine. If she is not alive, she will become a celebrity in the history books. If you only hear the story, you will not know the person. Other novels are considered to be in different places. Love also involves communication. There is no such thing as a talkative character. Only unfamiliar people talk less. Even deaf-mute people can type and sign and express their emotions in their own way with familiar people. Even if their hands are as tired as seals, how can they not have the desire to express themselves to the person they like? "Oh" is all you need to reply to messages every day. How about writing the heroine like a big tree? Shake the leaves when watering every day. At least it's a curiosity. The most important thing is that the author obviously doesn't have the ability to portray characters. The portrayal of middle-aged people like the protagonist's father, classmates, competitors, party A, leaders in the system, and people who don't have much content are all portrayed very realistically The heroine becomes mute. Damn it. After a while, he disappeared and went to the sports hospital and went to jail. He didn't even bother to type a word about the protagonist. He didn't describe his daily life at all. When he met, he just walked around and kissed and hugged him in a formulaic way. He didn't even say "Do you want to"? Are you going to die?" Look at how many times I have written it. It's hard to resist. It's still the same sentence. There are no people who talk little. There are only people who don't have a good relationship. Anyone who is silent around you is just that you are not familiar with him.

Is it a single girl? Single girls don't read it. Now the starting point has become the world of eunuchs. It's so hypocritical. I can't find any books and read them all. Isn't there such a neat and refreshing novel? There are 180 chapters in one stretch. It's really stupid and annoying to death.

Don't order the part of the recent advertising pitch. The author is cheating me out of money. I can't see the existing advertising plan analysis. I'll pay you to see it.

This is not the first time I have seen limited sales. Just a sports star has not released a product yet, so he will release a limited edition first? Build a tall building first without laying a foundation? Too 6

First of all, I have no interest in advertising company development and professional content. Then the update is too slow. The plot progress of each chapter is slow. After this, I have to keep reading. Then the protagonist has to stare hard at such an advertising industry? It's okay to engage in industries such as electric vehicles and sports brands, but don't you consider getting involved in the Internet based on the direction of your previous life? Anyway, the pen is in the hands of the author. If it is unreasonable, it will be unreasonable. Those authors who write about business wars and the Internet may not know much about it, so just feel free to write. There is no need to write in such detail as in today's advertising industry.

Single heroine, or I will kill you! ! ! ! ! Author, please don't be ignorant

The book is okay, but the pace is too slow. Really, whether it's a romantic drama or a career line, there's a reason why it's not popular.