Spiritual Qi Revival: Cultivating Immortality in Dream of the Red Chamber

As a time traveler, when spiritual energy is revived. Originally I had just learned how to practice Taoism. And hanging. Not as good as the natives

To be honest, if The Red Mansion is written as a fairy tale, you will not be able to please both sides. At present, most people who read Red Mansions are just to watch you have a harem without any sense, and accept unscrupulous women. As long as they appear in the book, they will accept them as long as they are women. You have already cultivated immortality, your starting point is higher than the setting of Red Mansion, your debut is the peak, and the biggest boss of Red Mansion, the Imperial Power, is not as good as you. What do you write next? I can only have fun at the beginning and then rush to the street. But if you write it in the category of cultivating immortals, it will conflict with writing a bunch of women. Have you ever seen a good novel about cultivating immortals that has a bunch of women and a harem? People who like to read novels about cultivating immortals will basically not read your novels. Because as soon as you see the name, you will know what you are going to write.

I have read a lot of Red Mansion novels, and this one you wrote is quite interesting, but the relationship between the male protagonist and Ke Qing has not progressed for a long time. Ke Qing will be the male protagonist's real wife. The author should write according to his own ideas, other people's opinions may not be accepted by other readers.

I really can't stand it anymore. There are over 200 pictures and I'm still dangling at the sixth or seventh level of Qi training. I'm still dragging my feet on making a plug-in. Everyone is just a rookie.

Play some exquisite naughtiness with Jia Baoyu

His wife, Qin Keqing? Forget it, Geying

I usually rarely comment on the plot when reading books. I only read some typos or make fun jokes in the book review section. Because I just came to read the author's story. How to tell it specifically should be left to the author. But of the few Red Mansion novels I have recently read, this one is not the best, but it is certainly not the worst either. The setting of this book is quite good, the writing is not too dramatic, and the dialogue and wording still retain a hint of Red Mansions style. And that's exactly where the problem lies. Why do several books that are of the same quality get better results than this one? The above post actually makes sense. Resurrection of spiritual energy is a large category, and it has many settings worth filling in and exploring. It will definitely take a lot of words to build up the large and small cultivation systems under it. The label "Red Mansion" is destined to attract core audiences who still prefer garden dramas, who prefer to watch the protagonist interact with the original characters, save those Jin Chai who have a tragic ending, and pretend to be cool in the process. This means that it is difficult to achieve a true balance between the scale and trade-offs between these two categories. Otherwise, the next big dungeon will have more than ten or twenty chapters, followed by the even bigger national war or even the war between gods, and there will be dozens or hundreds of chapters without characters like Chai Dai and Sichun appearing, which will inadvertently screen out a wave of readers. If you rashly pull the main characters of the original work out of the garden and throw them into the melting pot of spiritual recovery, there will also be risks and possibilities of OOC, and it will easily be criticized. The specific scale must be controlled at the author's discretion. But I don't quite agree with the idea that people are born with neither ends in touch. Dialectically speaking, this is precisely the strength of this book, which has one more selling point than others. You have to see the goods to know how they are. The writing so far is good, and the overall balance is well maintained, but there are relatively few garden plays, and there are almost no major highlights (the garden play part). In fact, the first chapter can be a big one. The background of spiritual energy resurgence, in a deep mansion like Ning Rong Mansion, where are there not a few lonely souls and wild ghosts? Not long after his death, he was stimulated by spiritual energy and performed a "sacred appearance in front of others" on the spot. He showed his face in front of everyone in the Jia family and wrote down the appearances of all living beings between them. What readers love to see is not the funny scene in which maggots and wolves in the Ning and Rong mansions run wild, unable to keep an eye on each other. Jia Mu, who is usually aloof, bursts into tears, Jia Zhen and Jia She are fighting each other. If the protagonist shows off his skills in a small way, won't he gain face and benefits? In the end, it was a little dull. The biggest joy at first became the harmony... It's not that it's not good, but it's relatively unsatisfactory... It can be seen that it is still in the stage of setting up the stage. Between the overly grand world view under the background of spiritual recovery and the original delicate powdery atmosphere of Red Mansion, the protagonist's organic combination between the two houses and the entire practice world is quite impressive. I originally wanted to say a lot, but I have forgotten the first one and the last one😣 I will reply below when I think of it later. Anyway, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Bro, if you keep writing like this, your grades will definitely get worse and worse. The plot develops too slowly

Come on, author, I have continued to read.

Interesting, this book is pretty good. It's just that the protagonist is restricted by the author yw