Dream of the Red Chamber: My Daiyu Has Been Reborn

It's just so-so. The male lead is the son of the eldest princess and the emperor's nephew. He should be a prince, but that's not shown. Then it's said that Lin Daiyu is reborn twice. That means she played a love game with Jia Baoyu in her previous life, and in this life she got tired and asked the male lead to take over.

This setting is quite interesting. It's a very female-oriented setting appearing in a male-oriented book. But I've read a few female-oriented books, and they're basically just Daiyu with her mind full of revenge and then she screams and screams, which makes me speechless. Ultimately, Daiyu couldn't truly hate anyone.

What if? How did I get on the potential ranking?

Having read nearly 50 chapters, it feels perfectly natural to remove the protagonist; he's barely appeared for over ten chapters, and the focus is entirely on the Jia family. There's nothing wrong with writing about the Jia family—after all, *Dream of the Red Chamber* is primarily about them—but shouldn't I be reading from the protagonist's perspective?

When did the main character marry Grandmother Jia?

The comment section is almost empty after 40 chapters? That's a bit scary. Is there anyone like Shennong (a legendary figure associated with agriculture)?

I feel like chapter 30 is a problematic point. Are you sure that in ancient feudal society, having someone blow out candles on their birthday is a good thing, or is it something only royalty would do? Making a cake is fine, it's just like any other dessert, but having someone blow out candles on their birthday... Change it. If you change "candles extinguished" to "candles moved away," I think it would be better.

Try to enhance the emotion in your reading aloud; the current tone sounds unpleasant.

First, the protagonist didn't die. Simply being a transmigrator, a prophet (knowing only the plot), having a photographic memory, and a good background isn't enough to command the winds and rains. Second, Daiyu is reborn, but not much has changed. For example, her mother still dies. So what is the meaning of this rebirth? The plot progression in part three is a bit slow. Fourth, it's frustrating. Most online novels are "feel-good" stories, so if you're not satisfied, it's not good enough.

The Grandmother Jia here is outwardly kind but inwardly ruthless.