Marvel's Venom: From the Start, I Become a Hydra Mole

I received this book via private message today... To be honest, I'm a bit speechless. This book has left me completely confused. I thought I wrote it very well, but the data wasn't good. When I contacted the editor last Friday, he said that if I didn't get a private message after 130,000 words, I could just cut it.

Honestly, the identity of a secret agent is completely unsuitable for a close relationship with Gwen. They're not in the same system. If you want to write about Gwen, it's a campus romance; if you want to write about Daisy, it's a secret agent romance. You're being too greedy, wanting to have both of these Marvel novel characters as well.

The author's writing style is somewhat similar to that of early Venom fans, but not many people appreciate it; I personally quite like it. Also, why doesn't the author try to thank other symbiotes, like hybrids, howls, poison, carnage, etc.? And since Marvel fiction isn't as popular as it used to be, the author could also integrate symbiotes into other universes. (Personal opinion, take with caution.)

Speaking of which, I wonder if we could enhance this symbiote to be as powerful as Venom from Marvel's Spider-Man 2, with similar unique abilities. Maybe we could try a large-scale battle mode, something like that. The Venom from Marvel's Spider-Man 2 is quite exciting! Remember Venom from Spider-Man 2?

This novel is readable, but that's about it. Just read the free chapters; the rest will probably poison your mind.

The pacing is too slow. They've dragged out the plot of Iron Man 1 for so many days. Everyone knows the first movie's story, even the protagonist knows it, so they're doing nothing.

Will the male protagonist's abilities increase later? If it's a movie universe, using his brains might be acceptable, but if this is a mix of movie and comics, some abilities seem a bit too far-fetched. Although Venom is very interesting, I prefer the protagonist to focus on increasing his strength. Author, please elaborate. Also, regarding the female lead, finally I've found a Marvel book with decent romantic development! Will you add more female characters later?

Holm Clint

I found a good Venom novel! Speaking of which, I recently read a Venom novel. I remember that Venom initially had a symbiote with all sorts of abilities, like Carnage's. He also had no weaknesses, so he wasn't afraid of fire or sound waves. I remember that when he first came to Earth from outside, the first guy he possessed was a drug addict and a cannon fodder member of the Hell's Kitchen gang.

In just 70,000 words, two female protagonists have appeared; relying solely on interactions with female characters won't sustain the story for long.