In Marvel, I Am Venom's Host

I just saw the fierce battle, and I just couldn't understand it. Even if you didn't write an invincible novel, you could have arranged for the protagonist to be defeated. Why did you arrange for a pure and innocent thing to easily threaten the protagonist's loved ones? The most important thing is that I don't understand what you are saying. I can't understand why readers would think that. Who in the average person doesn't want to protect his family? Is it difficult to understand that the safety of your family is more important than yourself? Do you really not consider the readers' feelings at all? Or do you really think it's easier for someone you care about to be hurt than for yourself to be hurt? Also, you arranged a high-IQ setting for the protagonist, but he behaved like this. He was stronger than others but was crushed by his pure IQ... I just want to ask you one thing, will it still be like this later?

The protagonist doesn't know the plot of Marvel, but the author does, so this setting is meaningless, unless the author doesn't know the plot and doesn't understand Marvel, so it's okay to write like this. The author knows the plot, but the protagonist who travels through time does not. To develop the plot like this is nonsense.

Once again, I saw the palladium poisoning. Many Marvel novels have it, but even the original novel did not grasp the key to the problem. Iron Man needs that to suck the missile fragments in the blood vessels. He can completely change the energy source to provide power for absorption, and then use an external energy source for the Iron suit. . . . . I don't understand why so many people don't think of this. Is it because it's not feasible?

I think the writing is very good. I really like this kind of novel that although it unfolds a bit slowly, is rich in details. Many novels now introduce a system immediately after time travel, and then the protagonist immediately understands the use of the system and starts to go around to fight against SHIELD. This kind of novel always makes me feel that the first three chapters are just an outline. There are really fewer and fewer such slow and gradual advancements.

World view setting: It is a brand-new parallel universe. The subsequent plot development will involve many characters and events in comic books, movies and animations. It is a comprehensive but brand-new parallel universe. Protagonist setting: After time travel, he only has the memory of his previous life, no memory of his new body, and no knowledge of the characters and plot. Character setting: single female protagonist It is written in front to clarify the type of book, so readers who do not like to read it with caution

Protagonist himself = assassination character Invisible form ≈ Spider-Man Muscle form = demolition machine

Kingpin sent people to kill you, but you just ignored him? Don't you want to investigate? It's like this place is out of gear. Instead, he went with Spider-Man to investigate Mysterio. Then Dr. Lizard came out without any foreshadowing (although everyone knew how it came about), and then briefly explained the relationship between the Green Goblin, Goblin, and Kingpin, then talked about daily life, and then briefly got to know Tony, and then Doctor Octopus came out ( This is the one I've seen so far) The overall feeling to me is that after revenge, the following chapters are all put together with the stories of some villains. There is no continuity at all. You can add whatever you want If it is my logic, it should be that Kingpin failed to send someone to kill you. When you go to investigate who it is, you come across someone Spider-Man is looking for to imitate him. As a result, there are conflicts due to different ways of handling crimes (this is written). Let's get to know each other briefly, and then go through the daily plot. Then Spider-Man finds you to solve the Mysterio, and then returns to your own home. The investigation deepened, and Kingpin began to run out of manpower. Because they knew that you were a superpower, and originally infiltrated Osborn for his genetic engineering, they increased their efforts to lure Osborn out of reluctance and started looking for trouble, and then took up the lizard man plot in comics or movies. This is enough for you to write a lot Last point, why don't you solve the mental problem? Just leave a bomb in your head?

Black cat

Doesn't it mean that Pig's Knuckle doesn't have its own plot? It feels like going everywhere to go to the show has nothing to do with you, regardless of whether it has anything to do with you. Are you a nanny?

Burglar Black Cat