The Villainous Empress's Favorite Retainer Can't Possibly Be Cao the Bandit

First Then, once the worldview and everything else are fully developed, that's when the real test begins. The main plot and side plots, emotions and bittersweet feelings, female supporting characters and male protagonists, enemies and male protagonists, conflicts and daily life, etc., Each part has a different weight in each chapter and the overall rhythm is well grasped.

I've only read up to chapter 30 so far, and it seems the author doesn't seem to be very conscious of avoiding sensitive content. I couldn't resist giving a brief review, and please point out any inaccuracies. (I'll continue reading, and I'll post any other discoveries here.) 1. The protagonist has been the Empress's companion since childhood.

I just don't understand why, if you're writing a villain story, you shouldn't try to capture the essence of a villain story. Whether it's sucking up to someone or being a scoundrel, the point is to kill them, instead of constantly emphasizing the protagonist's halo or their invincibility. If you're so afraid of this and that, why don't you just stick your neck out and let the protagonist chop it off?

The protagonist is constantly constrained, especially the character Li Longguan. The author should adjust this and get rid of him as soon as possible. Nowadays, people like to read stories where the protagonist is always having a good time, not the kind of story from 10 years ago where the protagonist suffers setbacks first and then retaliates.

Let me give you my opinion on the premise: it's a pile of shit. 😅😅😅 It's like those reincarnation stories, even though it's a game setting. The most outrageous thing is that every woman in it can be seduced. I'm not just imagining things; I've already transmigrated into the game world, so I can't just say the previous parts were fake, right? 😅😅 I'm just fooling myself. Is this Lu Mao Gui's reincarnation and salvation?

This book is garbage. It lures you in and then kills you. In 300 chapters, it only gets one female lead, but the title is ambiguous, just keeping you hanging on and treating readers like idiots.

Learn from your neighbor; this kind of writing has two key points: one is a clever trick, and the other is satisfying. Yours has neither and you're just dragging your feet.

Thank you so much, reader , for collecting information on the female lead for this book! Also, the female leads are starting to appear one after another, so you know what that means (laughs while covering mouth).

Let me share my personal opinion. When I saw the author say in the book review that he initially wanted to write about the protagonist being a blond guy who would train the female characters, but then he was worried about being reported and having those plot points removed, I suddenly understood why it felt so dry. It turns out you deleted the most important part!

The plot felt too slow and bland. A month basically only covered the protagonist obtaining the tower and using a fortuitous opportunity to heal the Empress. The author used too many perspectives at the beginning—Gu, Qin, Yan, Li, and several factions—each briefly mentioned, then quickly switching to a different perspective at crucial moments.