Coiling Dragon: Eternal Avenue

The article is short and small, as weak as the author

The Tomb of the Gods was really written down, and I was discouraged from it. Not only was the content inconsistent with the original setting, for example, the middle god could refine soul defense artifacts. If this was the case, soul defense artifacts would not be allowed to be on the streets in the underworld. And that fire of repentance, that's the Seven Star Demon's signature. You're copying and writing, you're really speechless.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but towards the end, I felt that the character of the protagonist was becoming more and more like Tang San. It was really annoying to watch, and I felt like it was written by two people!

Rubbish, wrong outlook. There are many poisonous points, but this is what the old author returns. Oh!

I think the author wrote too little about Dzogchen. Has the main godhead been changed thousands of times? Have you eaten too much? The original book said that the death of the Lord God is a big deal. And it has also been said that most of the main gods only have one body. Even those in Dzogchen are envious of these main gods because they were born early. All of this shows that the main gods really don't die much. The simplest reason is that they don't have to fight each other. Even if they really fight each other, the main godhead cannot be lost. The winning party will definitely take the main godhead. This will only lead to stronger and stronger strength. Finally, let me talk about two points. The original work clearly clarifies that only two or three dominant gods have died. The ten times difference in strength between the two main gods is not fatal. After all, you can think of the main god as an enlarged version of Dzogchen. Dzogchen has the same strength and can't break the defense. Being ten times stronger does not necessarily kill you. In the end, if you are a hundred times stronger, then there is such a thing as the main god's agreement. After all, you can only fight with the main gods of the same level.

The first part is okay, but the second part is the same as hell. It feels like a different person. The second part feels like the protagonist is purely a villain. It's disgusting to death, just like Tang San's, you already have a way to die.

The protagonist is speechless and unable to give birth to a child. How hilarious. Why not? Secondly, the heroine can basically be said to be a prostitute. It's just that I met the protagonist the first time I went out to sell, but being a prostitute has nothing to do with the first time. And she is the only one who can get pregnant? Do you like broken shoes that much? ? ?

Another waste of my subscription. Another author who wrote that the power of will of the Lord Godhead is only 4 times more than that of the Dzogchen. The original work clearly stated that less than one ten thousandth of the power of will is equivalent to 80% of the power of the Dzogchen. I can tolerate the small poison in front, but I can't bear to change the settings randomly.

It's not that you are too hasty to achieve Dzogchen. How many epochs does it take for the entire universe to have only a few Dzogchen?

I sneered, deleted the book and left.

This author has finished poisoning. First, here is a high-level soul defense artifact. The soul defense artifact can at least be made by Shura who is good at souls. This artifact can only be made by high-level ones. There is also the underworld. There are 28 masters of the 81 palaces with master artifacts. It doesn't count. There are 162 abdicated and secluded people, both in light purgatory and palace masters. Four messengers of the Lord God are still on standby on Netherworld Mountain. There are only 24 messengers of the Lord God in total. Those who can have the Lord God's artifact, not counting the children of the Lord God in the underworld, are at most about 30. Among the palace masters, there are Lord Gods. The maximum number of weapons is 10. The second hypothesis is that the soul mutation cannot be controlled by the superior god Mo Si. How could he not be able to control it? Mo Si is the first person below the Great Perfection and can control a lot of seven-star demons. The most terrifying thing is that the author does not know that the wind law is good at it. Material attacks are so perverted. How dare you write about a Panlong fan? Also write about Pusiluo's powerful material attacks. He is so slow and obviously has not integrated the mystery of explosion. He killed Chabu for a long time with his main artifact. He is quite weak. He feels worse than the Great Elder.

Wuhu, veteran author of Panlong fandom

Lost Book

The protagonist achieves Dzogchen by eating and drinking, and then is told that he is the tenth Dzogchen of life. There have been hundreds of Dzogchen in history, but now there are less than ten. The reason is that they were all killed by the Lord God, ah? ? The next paragraph is that thousands of main gods have fallen in history. Do you want to read what you are writing?

Lao Tu, you haven't written a book for so long, don't you know how to write about characters? You can be selfish when writing online novels about characters, but you have to be lovable in a big way. If you can't see the bright spots in the characters, how can you continue to pursue them? Don't seek merit, but seek no faults. If you can't control your own character design, why not try to please the readers? This book is less interesting than the previous three.

This level is not like that of Tu Dao.

If you really don't understand, don't write it. The setting in Panlong is that the Holy Realm begins to understand the rules. After the soul mutates, the mental power skyrockets and basically enters the god level stably. The original book said that Olivia broke through the god level not long after the soul mutated. She also practiced a shitty fighting spirit. She died in her own life and was a master of playing with the spirit. After the god level, the physical strength basically depends on the laws and the treasures of heaven and earth to improve. And that potential, people rely on this entry-level law. But after the soul mutates, it is no longer possible to understand other laws. It is a bunch of meaningless practice.

Open a new book and directly add an extra chapter? Is the author crazy about money?

I came across a funny comment. He actually thought that Panlong's fighting spirit has no attributes.

There are really people who are willing to eat, more than 200 monthly tickets

The old Panlong fanfic author also has an old problem, he likes to add secondary settings too much. . The expansion of the world view can actually be tolerated. For example, the previously rewritten Abyss, Demon King, etc. Are all good, but some basic settings, soul defense artifacts, and the number of strong men in the plane prison are always changed. Many things really cannot withstand scrutiny. For me, it can only be regarded as a Panlong fan who can still feed himself.

I just finished reading this review without reading it for a day.

I was shocked by this episode today

In the first chapter, I persuaded the dual-system holy mage to quit and mutate his soul to practice fighting spirit. It was so funny.

Even though he is an old author, he can still make common sense mistakes, 6

It is extremely poisonous, the setting does not follow the original work, there are all kinds of random secondary settings, the protagonist's personality is comparable to Tang San, and the ending is also bad🤮

I want to ask if I can experience the Spiritual Map.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

There are a bunch of bugs. Can you eat the Nether Fruit randomly? If you eat it, it will only affect the master's strength and limit your growth. It's nonsense.

It's well written, but the content of your book when other websites link to it is upside down.