Sequence Doctor

What is the purpose of Chapter 3? If there is no suggestion, it will be deleted directly. At best, it is screening readers, but at worst, it is a mistake. The main reason is that there is no coherence between this chapter and the surrounding text. What exactly do you want to express? Does it happen at the same time as the protagonist's meeting? But why do you need to write a whole chapter? As soon as I entered the atmosphere of the article, the author suddenly came to you with this scene. When I was reading it, I was still wondering if this pirate had opened something and had an impact on the change of the world. The result is really meaningless. Contextual association, can't this be done?

Well, there are many minor problems, such as a lot of typos and missing words, and there are also big problems, such as is An Xiaole a succubus? It feels like everyone is treating him very well, and the hospital even invites the protagonist to have a meeting, hoping that he can take over. However, it says that he comes from a poor family and suffers from heart disease. Can the hospital's senior management be invited to persuade the protagonist? Moreover, the protagonist's name is Lucas, and An Xiaole is called Brother Lu. Don't you think it's awkward for the author?

It feels a bit convoluted, but as expected, I am still suitable for watching the straightforward opening 😭

At your level, well... I really suspect that someone has been replaced.

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This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

The author is a badass, can you write faster? The next door is always on the fifth update, but you are the slowest every day.

I just started reading it, and I feel pretty good. I will subscribe when it is released in the future. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. Come on, author 🌹 (comparison) S2

Chapters 1 and 2 are about Xiao Le's surgery, Chapter 3 is about the pirate sequence, and Chapter 456 is about Xiao Le's failure in surgery or the meeting before Xiao Le's surgery. I just saw this, is there any connection? This opening is quite magical.

Come on, become bigger and stronger! Create greater glory!

Little welfare (ಥ_ಥ)

Medusa

Excellent writing style, good for food! Highly recommended!

I wish the author will write better and better, and the book lovers will become richer and richer.

I took a look at it overall and found that the first three chapters were a bit deliberately created, but the first three chapters are really good. You can read them and get through them. Overall, they are very good and you can look forward to them.

Is Chapter 4 connected to the first three chapters? It's so confusing to see 🙂

Why is the protagonist called Zhou Ruiming again? Is there any foreshadowing?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~