Senior Brother's Life Is so Miserable

It is written in about 1 million words. I read the middle part and skipped to the second half. (The following content will contain certain spoilers, and there will be a summary at the end) I felt at the beginning of the novel that it was fast-paced and sparse. Using the novel system of cultivating immortals as an example, in the first 40 chapters, the reclusive protagonist who is in the Mahayana stage has completed joining the world + building momentum + killing two Mahayana stages. The progress was so fast that I once thought the author was rushing to finish around chapter 200. Later, or from the moment the protagonist goes north, the protagonist changes from a real person living in the mountains and forests to a counselor, and later becomes the husband of the empress. The plot also focuses on the struggle in court. I personally found two strange things about this part. One is the characterization of the male protagonist. In the beginning, the male protagonist wanted to stay out of the world; in the middle, he had just entered the world and wanted to be able to escape at any time; in the end, he was deeply involved in it and could no longer see the free and easy life of the people in the world. The male protagonist in the book is a character who makes decisions and then acts. The problem is that his actions are contrary to this setting on the issue of joining the world: is it possible for the junior sisters to live alone in the mountains and forests when the time comes? (The protagonist is very fond of these eight junior sisters in the book, but in general there is too little detail, which is a minor flaw) The second point is the process of seizing the heir. It can be said that the author has written a pro max version of the Tang Dynasty. When the male protagonist beheaded the prince of Chu, he went directly to the palace to behead him without any charge. Going a little further, when the male protagonist escorted the king of Chu northward, he also beheaded one of the princes who set up an ambush on the way. Later, he reached an agreement with the emperor, and the matter was over. It can be said that as long as the emperor acquiesces, it is not a problem to directly kill other contenders for the throne with a sword. But this conflicts with the emperor's own personality that decides everything: even if the country is not righteous, order, legal principles, and rules must still exist. At the beginning, the dynasty did not make up for the inherent shortcomings in legal principles and rules (the consequences of the emperor's disloyalty to the previous dynasty and usurping the throne). Instead, it encouraged the clans to harm each other without any bottom line. This was really unfaithful and unfilial. Theoretically, a clan can obtain a powerful monarch by raising gu and internal friction, but looking at the stories of the Western Jin Dynasty, the middle and late Tang Dynasty (Xuanzong, Suzong, etc.) And even the Ottomans, this is just wishful thinking. I don't understand the reason why the author counted all the organs written by the emperor, but seems unable to account for this development. Although the ninth-grade emperor can live for one or two hundred years, failing to govern the country with loyalty and filial piety can be said to be fatal to the feudal dynasty (although the dynasty in the novel is ruled by practitioners, it seems that the operation logic of the dynasty is similar to that of a mortal dynasty). To sum up, if you like to watch intrigues, court battles, and bloody heirlooms, I still recommend it. It is the male protagonist who has gone from being carefree to being wrapped up in the world and wrapped up in the whirlpool of the times, as well as the many exclamation points and fast pace in the early stage, which may be unacceptable to some people.

I have finished reading half of it now. The other thing this author is good at is that he likes to sensationalize. Although it is not as forceful as others, if he does too much, it will still poison some people. And if you do this, you will inevitably be constrained and unable to write a good work. I suggest you be more conservative and write more transparently. It is good for the readers and good for yourself.

The author's literary talent is average, the story structure is clear, the lines are logical, and the character analysis is relatively complete. Avoid facial makeup, and many variables are a good thing.

The novel is not bad, the plot development is in line with my wishes 🙂🤓😊 There is no smooth road in life. When you face failure and are indecisive, when your self-confidence is shaken and you blame others, when you miss opportunities and give up on yourself, will you think: Where is my self-confidence? In fact, self-confidence is in our hearts.

Generally speaking, it should be encouraged, and you should revise it if you have time. The understanding of some things should not be unilateral... For example: ancestors, revising the exercises, some things should not be too thorough and straightforward... The idea is good, the writing style is okay in the starting point, I will collect it first.

Are you going to rebel against your master? 🙂

The author writes well, but the starting point is all female + literary young people + undecided future partners + ambiguous feelings. In view of the fact that I just panned for gold and turned into shit not long ago, in order not to cause secondary damage to my mood in a short period of time, I will wait and see for the time being.

Overall, the writing is pretty good and is more to my liking, but unfortunately, if I would have supported it a few years ago, now I no longer like this kind of article that forcibly "rebels authority", is arrogant and rude, and is proud of one's talents. I don't think these are cool anymore. Just like I used to think it was cool to have a cold face all the time, now I don't like it anymore when I see my face is paralyzed. In the author's own words, the protagonist will "resist" everyone he meets, will not give a good look to anyone, and will be awesome and coaxing everyone he meets. My opinion is that Huang Mao is just an alternative, not as good as Feijian Huangmao. Feijian Huangmao enjoys this kind of rebellion, and the protagonist is not as good as Feijian Huangmao. It's too childish. In just a few chapters, the protagonist doesn't act like a normal person except for the people in the sect. He understands the old man who comes to visit him. He has been annoying you. It's okay for the old man next door. You help, you are the uncle. I really live in the academy. If you just want to play in the academy, that's no problem. The problem is that you want to enter the academy. Why, doesn't this make others look good? Don't talk about ancient times, now it's you who are talented and smart, so I beg you to study? Did ancient academies only teach based on talent? Does poetry club selection only look at talent? How come the four great talents of the Ming Dynasty were so miserable? I want to see how the back is rounded. The result is that it can provide traffic to the academy. I live in Bengbu, so I plan to leave completely. The number one scholar in my province, Tsinghua University has me, which proves that it is the number one university. If I don't go to Tsinghua, who knows Tsinghua! Is this what you mean? As the provincial champion, do I have to impose various conditions? Why, there is also a Johnson & Johnson member from Peking University and Tsinghua University in this world?

It's something that I could have watched. It might be the fairy grass in other people's eyes, but I can't stand it. 1. Regarding the methods of cultivation in the world, I felt at the time that the author was deliberately vague about cultivation, and did not say anything about how long one can live in a realm. In ancient times, one could ascend, but now it is no longer possible. There is always a slight gap. 2. This kind of book has a big enemy and a big crisis at the beginning, which makes it difficult for people to read it calmly. It can still be read well at the beginning of this book, but there is always a feeling of anxiety at the end. 3. In this world with extraordinary means, relying on the knowledge ahead of the times, known extraordinary talents, and unparalleled strength, can't the world be changed? He has the means and the strength, but he keeps thinking about killing the emperor and then doing nothing else. It is a pity that the risks are not proportional to the benefits.

If you have ever understood the difference between geniuses and ordinary people, you will know it. The gap is incredibly large, it is not an exaggeration to say that they are two species. Study hard the day after tomorrow, there is a limit, everyone's innate limit. Just like the author said about mathematics, this thing is most dependent on talent. Your talent is to be able to draw inferences from one instance and draw inferences from one instance to ten. Ordinary people can only follow the steps step by step, and a lifetime of learning may only scratch the surface of a genius.

The probability of a bullshit rebellion succeeding is 0. As a time traveler, you travel to a world where you can practice. Your cultivation talent is still extremely high. If you practice to the point where you are invincible, you can directly suppress the world. I want to help the master but I am coy and disgusting. Even if the world cannot be suppressed directly, if the junior sister, master and his subordinates are added to develop a sect like the White Lotus Sect, and cause chaos for decades, what feudal dynasty can sustain it?

Okay, okay, it will be better when the filial piety turns bad and takes over Da Ningning 😌😌

This plot could have attracted readers through the emotional changes between the protagonist and the master to pave the way for the master's return to the country. Instead, a cliched plot was arranged that not only dulled the emotional changes between the master and the protagonist, but also made the protagonist's character look worse.

There can be dozens of exclamation marks in one page, which really affects reading

The author's writing is very good, and the plot is smooth and compact, making it attractive to read. Let's talk about the Taoist couple. For those who are possessive, sending the heroine out to study in the early stage may be a bit outrageous (simply leaving home to study with a teacher), but so far there is no plot to send the heroine away. So far, there is no clear statement about the relationship between the main female character and the protagonist in the book. There is a possibility that it will be a family relationship in the end (PS: The author has not made a statement, but some plots in the book are ambiguous). As for the harem, if there is a female protagonist, there will be a single female protagonist. Because the author has some differences in the narrative methods of the two types of heroines. There are some plots that deliberately show the saints in front of people. The rhythm is not comedy, and it is slightly more focused on Jianghu (the plot is like this...). It might sound like a literary youth when you read it? For its writing style, it is worth reading. In terms of love, there are some risks. If there is anything unreasonable or inaccurate, please include it. If you haven't read it yet, I recommend you to read it yourself. It is better to judge others than to judge yourself.

They say it's a literary thing, which makes me afraid to try it. It's all Li Tailu's fault.

It appears to be the fifth rank of Jianjue, but in fact it is the royal family of the feudal lord.

Wen Qingjia has an affair with Yitui Girl and then has a single heroine. I have finished stacking the buffs for you.

Seeing these female protagonists, my eyes darkened, what a stallion 🥵

Xiancao looks very comfortable, feels smooth and smooth, and has an online IQ. 100 Points

I just saw the latest one, it may be relatively niche, but I like it very much The writing style is very good, and the overall writing has a touch of sadness, or it makes people feel that a tragedy is about to happen, but I believe the author will not write it like this I have no objection to the harem at all, as long as the heroine is well portrayed and has a process of inner change, there is no problem so far

The project is good, I, Wang Duoyu, have invested in it. But I feel that this main plot is full of bitterness and hatred. Not to mention whether the harem can be opened, at least a few people in the protagonist group will die. This feels like the flag is flying...

The crown prince is suffering, he has lost 800,000 people in Beiliang, all his relatives and friends have died, and he is free in the world.

The protagonist marries Zhao Baimeng? I'm speechless, then why are you describing so many junior sisters and masters?

I have seen more than 100 chapters, and the general direction of the theme is: Invincible Style + Genius Junior Sister/Disciple Development + Master-Apprentice Bureau + Dynasty; there are many points, and it will test your writing skills to write well. Personally, I would give it a 4 out of 5 points; Highlights: There are some traditional martial arts in the character creation and story. The charm is a bit of a surprise, let's see if the follow-up development can hold up; Disadvantages: In the environment of low martial arts surpassing and high martial arts dissatisfied, I feel that there is still room for improvement in the shaping of the fighting scenes Overall, it is still worth reading, and I wish it will get better and better.

Overall, the story is logical, and I believe that everyone who came in with this name is not specifically interested in cultivating immortals. There are a few main issues that are a bit unclear. The first one is the relationship between the sect and the court. According to the time relationship in the article, there are at least hundreds of thousands of years of imperial court. So the question is, who is the boss of the imperial court or the sect? I don't believe that the emperor can always tolerate the sect's power, disobey discipline, and dare to kill innocent people directly. The second one talks about the dispute between Buddhism and Taoism. This should be just the beginning. The pit dug seems to be a big one. I hope the author can control it. The third thing is that I feel that it is not necessary to send my junior sister away, and I feel that I can't take it back. To be honest, now I feel like I am in the middle and late stages of reading. I am constantly wondering where I am in the world. Will there be anyone to beat me later? It's not easy to ascend and open a new map in the Age of Ending Law. Besides, it's hundreds of thousands of years since the end of Law. Don't suddenly say that the hero's spiritual energy suddenly revives when he arrives. That's too false.

Surprised. It actually ranked fifth on the new book list on the site. Number one on the Xianxia list. Niu Niu Niu

The book is a good book, but it is not recommended. There may be something wrong with the title. Also, Lao Zhu, this B update is too weak!

I just like the eight flowers and the cute ones. 😁😁😁

Don't finish the work, author. If you have ideas, write more quickly. If you don't have ideas, write slowly. Don't finish the work. This is the only amount of mental food I have 🥺🥺