American Comics: Start by Copying Superman's Talents

I just came here to watch the plot of "Smallville", but the main character created by the author is tasked with teasing Superman and Batman. The main character behaves stupidly and preaches in various ways, which is extremely awkward. He insists on being an ideological teacher for others. He pretends to be stupid but doesn't pretend well. Without being polite, the biggest poisonous point is that the story is not pleasant. The world view should be based on Smallville, but the author pursues something dark, deep, and very funny. When describing the protagonist, he must mention his beautiful eyes. Is he a female author? Describe it this way. The image of the protagonist cannot be established, and the character image is empty. You just copied Superman's abilities in high school and defeated Lucifer in a one-on-one fight. This was too abrupt and his combat power collapsed. Why did Dr. Manhattan give him a mask? You also like to pull it off to look like a Rorschach mask. Do you think the mask is cool? Can Dr. Manhattan's abilities allow you to go to the world of "Transformers"? It would be difficult for God to do it, but if you say it's a system's ability, it's feasible. The author doesn't understand the DC worldview. He always emphasizes that you should buy DC comics to understand the plot. It's really funny. You can just follow the TV series and speculate on the plot. If you don't have the ability, don't write about other worldviews. I just came to watch the casual plot of "Smallville" to pass the time, not to read your chuunibyou fantasies.

It's a bit indifferent and chaotic.

This comment really hit the nail on the head. Chapter 29 is difficult to evaluate. It's ridiculously awkward

When did Lucifer become so weak? Not to mention you are not a superman. Even the golden super was defeated by Lucifer. It is not of the same magnitude. I don't understand how Lucifer, the number one person under DC God, can fight the protagonist back and forth. It stands to reason that you have to die eight hundred times if he blows a breath. And Dr. Manhattan, what qualifications does he have to intervene in Lucifer's battle? After only a few chapters, his combat power begins to collapse.

I don't know how to put it, but the Kryptonian gene is always awakening, but there is no super brain, so I won't go into it. How can a super brain handle complicated super hearing without a super brain? If there is one, why not use it?

The protagonist is a person with a defective IQ

After copying Lucifer, it is almost in the top ten of DC's combat power. Basically, DC can go sideways, restart the universe, travel through the timeline, and modify the rules. It's all instinctive. How come it took so long to fight without destroying a city? People of this level can destroy the earth in the first second even with fists, and spread to the galaxy in the second. It doesn't take ten seconds to restart the universe.

The shortcomings are copied. . . . After more than ten years, even the heat vision has not been awakened, so there is probably no biological standpoint. . I was given a golden finger and a yoke. .

To be honest, I don't recommend that you add any "anti-Japanese drama". If you prefer realistic historical war themes, this will be a plus, but this is a fanfic. The "China" in Marvel created by a group of Americans with obvious prejudice really has no sympathy. The only thing that the American Xiao Ming has in common with the Chinese Xiao Ming is that they are both called Xiao Ming. Besides, you are infinite. If this world is messed up, the next world and the next world will have to come too. The modern Yasukuni God's toilet in Japan is also worshiping. Why is the Transformers world so merciful? Just thinking about it, you have left a lot of holes.

The writing is good. I just want to write about some people who appear as saints and have the status of angels. They are so powerful. Think about what to do next. You can't stay in a small town forever, or build up a force to fight the new gods, have trouble with the old gods, and have fun. Come on, the writing is good.

It's so boring. The protagonist wants to become stronger, but in the end he keeps writing useful but useless things. He keeps letting kryptonite mutate people and then come to trouble the protagonist.

I can't understand, the protagonist is obviously on the right side, why every time the protagonist and Superman have a disagreement over their ideas and argue, the views expressed are so incomprehensible, and the angle of approach is even more unreasonable than the Yanbian Assassin? If it were me debating live, I would definitely be talking nonsense, mumbling, and not knowing what I was talking about. But as an author, you write novels. Don't you write novels without proofreading? What the hell did the protagonist say in these two disputes? ? ?

After reading Chapter 33, I only copied the cheat once. I don't know why other people came to read the book. I came here to copy the talent cheat. So far, this cheat has no sense of existence.

I have a question. The male protagonist is five years older than Superman. Why can they go to the same high school?

It's not fun enough from beginning to end. It's fun but not fun. It's so uncomfortable.

Have all the defects been copied ? ? ?

Didn't the protagonist copy Lucifer? He is one of the top five gods in DC, but he doesn't feel very expressive. This kind of being can at least travel across the multiverse in DC, and can extinguish the sun with just one look. He still feels like Superman. Can you use Lucifer's template?

There were many times when I felt that the protagonist was copying a fake Lucifer's natural abilities.

Dual protagonists? Getting boring

Emmm, how should I put it? I feel like the author treats me as a wise person. You are a capitalist, but you have to ask students at school to search on the Internet to find someone? The emperor plowed the land with a golden hoe, right? 🙂 Just treat readers as wise?

? Are you serious? The style of the American drama Eunuch was 5 to 8 years ago. Now people don't understand anything. To be honest, domestic dramas are not as conservative as this novel. And it is not very involved. To be honest, if you take the protagonist of the novel, will it have any impact? Don't say that you have to pretend to be a saint in front of others, but what the author wrote is another kind of Clark. Superman is a good guy and the protagonist is an idler.

You are the same as a book I read before. I forgot the name of that book. It was about Superman's younger brother. He drove high and low. It looked good at first, but then he kept encountering big events, without interruption or excessiveness. As soon as this big event passed, another big event came in the next chapter. Nothing else was written. There are only so many big events in DC, so you can write like this, but it is easy for people to read it like this.

Well written, very enjoyable to read

It sucks, it's really bad, the plot from the beginning of the multiverse is wrong, it's all a waste of my money

Started the first update? That's not far from the eunuch

No, this book only has more than 400 chapters in total, and the chapters are already 500.

Only then did I realize that the author actually used Chicken Brother's avatar, come on

The Cosmic Rubik's Cube is only useful in this universe, and is a stone in other places It would be better to have a template. I don't know what abilities the protagonist has The multiverse should not be traversable so early, otherwise it will be very confusing, and there is a wall of origin in DC that is not so easy to traverse.

The battle against Barbatos was a bit watered down.

Now, it looks good, keep up the good work!