American Comics: Become a Superman Starting from the Motherland

The taste is a bit bland and the style is not clear enough. It is also necessary to use ready-made characters, otherwise none of the characters will be able to see the image. The logic of Uncle Ben's actions is not clear, and there is not enough description to reflect his textual image. For example, the protagonist wants to kill three bad guys arrogantly and domineeringly (the motivations of the bad guys are described, but only briefly) and Uncle Ben's resistance and opposition are reduced to an NPC who can only speak one line. To be honest, even if it describes that the protagonist can crush the Milky Way, it lacks details and story. The Milky Way is the same as walnuts, there is no difference.

What? In the second chapter, the protagonist was called three names in succession by Peter and Ben, Linn, Link, and Lynch.

In this book, Spider-Man is no longer Spider-Man, from now on he is called Airman

It's okay, but it has some flaws. The main character is a bit too pretentious.

1. Any suggestions for the continuity of the plot 2. Any suggestions for the next development of the plot Speak freely in this post No personal attacks, thank you