Infinite Role-Playing, Starting with Eating

In Chapter Twelve, you claim to be a descendant of the late Tang Dynasty, yet you address Li Zhu by his given name. Even an idiot would know you're lying. In ancient times, addressing someone by their given name was a form of contemptuous address, a practice often associated with superiors. Calling the emperor by his given name was considered an even greater offense of disrespect.

Compared to Dungeons & Dragons, the infinite TRPG rules aren't really suitable for writing this kind of data-driven novel. Because the data in this kind of thing is inherently a mess...

The emperor's decision to appoint Long Ge'er as emperor seemed to pose a greater problem. His indecisive nature would absolutely lead the dynasty astray. Especially since this was the fifth generation! In other periods, it wouldn't be so bad. Forcibly supporting a weak ruler like Liu Bei isn't impossible.

Avoid repeating the same phrase over and over again, using phrases like "when" or "what it feels like," and avoid using the same descriptive words repeatedly in a paragraph, otherwise it will only give the impression of being verbose.

There was too much explanation beforehand, and then half a chapter of explanation was inexplicably inserted, making my veins bulge.

I have a suggestion for the author: after you finish writing, feed it to AI and let it rewrite it. Listening to your novel is torture. Every sentence uses phrases like "I feel xx," "It's like xx," "It's almost like xx," "It's practically xx." And then these kinds of sentences appear for long stretches. Even elementary school students don't write like this! Why are there so many verbal tics? Don't you ever read your own writing aloud?

I like the subject matter, but I don't like the book.

The whole thing is data; you're better suited to writing tabletop RPG battle reports.

I couldn't hold back any longer after Chapter 8, so I skipped through the later battle chapters and found that even up to chapter 60, every fight was just a series of additions and subtractions. The data calculations were supposed to be for battle simulations, but in the end, the actual fight scenes still relied on textual descriptions.

The various formulas and numerical values ​​feel disconnected from the protagonist's actions, especially during battles. The sudden insertion of various stats and formulas gives the impression that the protagonist has an omniscient perspective, knowing everything about the enemy.