I Craft My Own Heroic Spirits

The plot is not very coherent. A fighting plot can be mixed with two chapters of inner activities and memories, which captures the essence of the four battles in the later stages of Naruto.

That year was the day when human psychology was almost destroyed. At that time, I burst into tears when I saw the doctor passing away. At that moment, I thought that if I could become a heroic spirit, I would definitely win everything. Now that the cheat is right in front of me, I have to consider whether this will be my only chance in this life. I believe that human nature can be successfully saved, and doctors are indispensable. It is our duty to rebuild the glory of the Hall of Valor!

I have a question, why didn't the protagonist pull out Minato's hair instead of pulling out Jiraiya's? Minato was the 22-year-old Hokage, and Minato died when he was 24, so he could be summoned directly. Jiraiya lived in Konoha for more than sixty years.

The hydrology skills are terrible. Water for the sake of water, forced addition of modifiers, forced addition of explanatory paragraphs. Certain hydrology techniques seem to be taught by primary school Chinese teachers. Some students always have less than 500 words in their compositions. The teacher will teach a hydrology technique. This is the technique used here 🙂

Are you pinching the heroic spirit here or there? They were all anime characters. I thought they were original heroic spirits.

Blending backgrounds can easily lead to a bunch of unreasonable settings. It is easier to grasp the plot than actually traveling through a new world or connecting two worlds through a time and space tunnel.

The author wrote too quickly and killed Danzo in one fell swoop, and then had to strengthen the Third Hokage. The third generation asked his ANBU to kidnap Kushina, and sent Uzumaki Mito to the battlefield. The protagonist and Uzumaki Mito were clearly aware of it, but they didn't tell Tsunade and Kushina anything, and they were left to work for the third generation wholeheartedly. It was inexplicable.

I really can't stand this batch of water.

In the early stage, there were too many settings thrown together, a lot of mess, and a lot of inexplicable things. These things can be disassembled and used in the later plot. There was Akira Uchiha in the front. I skipped three chapters and there were still things that were thrown out of the setting. It affects reading too much. A lot of explanations are completely unnecessary.

There are too many narrative words, which affects the reading and makes the book feel watery.