Across the Heavens: a Dream of the Divine Sword

Don't post the chapters until they have been updated. If you want to read new chapters every day, you will see that they are being updated. It is better to stop updating for a few days. The effect will be the same.

How to put it this way, I feel that the protagonist is a bit weak, which seriously affects the feeling of this book for me. It is quite boring and uninteresting. The protagonist has cheats from the beginning, and the description is quite strong. The protagonist has also practiced swords for more than 30 years. In the end, he beat 4 unknown elders in the book. Even if he was not injured, he only caused damage to the opponent after using half a stick of incense? I don't even want to say that the protagonist suddenly owes a favor is disgusting and blunt. With the protagonist's strength, after practicing for so many years, I thought the protagonist was at least as strong as Hefeng Qingyang and Dongfang Bubai. Now I feel that I am not sure I can win against Ren Woxing. I have been using cheats for so long and I am still so good. In the book, Linghu Chong felt like he could beat the protagonist after a few years of training.

I just want to say that the plug-in is on the dog.

It's nothing interesting. The protagonist can't defeat others even though he's cheating, and he especially likes to get engaged for others, which is called being loyal to the original work. I've seen both worlds, and they both like to decide marriages for others. They also say that the original work is a couple, and they will be happy after marriage. It's so disgusting.

Every world is forcibly suppressing the protagonist! Even if it's not about combat prowess, it's still about how well you do things. In the third world, I have lived for at least more than 100 years, and I can actually say that my experience in the world is not as good as that of someone in their thirties. . . The martial arts in each world are the same as those that have never been practiced before. I have to re-practice step by step and the speed is still very slow. I am ready to go to the rivers and lakes to rescue my senior sister, but because I am worried about others being suspicious, I do not practice the powerful martial arts in my previous life, forcing myself to suppress my combat power!

Let's not talk about the combat power. It's very rare that the original characters are not belittled or contain personal information. Many authors and netizens are very good at it! The author of this book has a very good evaluation of Yue Buqun and Linghu Chong. Both of them have problems.

The writing of this book is okay, but the plot can only be described as baffling. The protagonist accepts Lin Pingzhi as his disciple for no apparent reason. After accepting his disciple, he also makes Lin Pingzhi worship Huashan. Are you asking him to learn from Lauderno and be an undercover agent or something? The protagonist traveled through time and stayed at home for more than thirty years, and then went out to travel in the world for no reason. Is this to forcefully advance the plot? I can only say that the writing style is okay, but the plot logic cannot convince readers.

There is no one else who can still be this bad.

I bought them directly for 158, 159, and 160. You look like this now, don't you look too ugly? If you can't write it or the anti-theft chapter, I can bear with you for a while. Now I really want to give up and wait for your reply

The format of Gu Long's novels is too small, just like writing about gangs in Taiwan and Hong Kong, where you kill me and I kill you again.

Can any book now have the word "Zhutian" in it? The title of the book is attractive, but Goldfinger is so rubbish!

There is an old comic "Bad Sword", and the depiction of the sword is very amazing! There is a character in the comics named Hengdao - he seems to be the God of Swords. I vaguely remember that the characters in the movie Sword and Sword are somewhat similar to those in the Ba Dao comic series, but I can't remember exactly!

Here we go again? ? What's going on? Either stop updating, or blow up and cheat

Getting married suddenly, I don't understand

This update is a bit disgusting. It will be changed tomorrow. You can forget about it once. Now you play like this every day. It's too much.

What are you doing? ? ? What are the updates?

Is it too late for rescue now?

Brother, if you haven't finished it, you haven't finished it. Why do you keep talking about revising it? This is quite disgusting. Writing one chapter and sending another chapter is better than anything else