Douluo Dalu: A Martial Soul Egg That Hatches with a Drop of Blood

Why did Chen Ze travel through time? Is he live broadcasting in Wuhun Continent now?

I had an idea before, asking a Blue Silver Grass spirit master to plant Blue Silver Grass on the island to transform the environment and let the Blue Silver Grass martial spirit evolve.

With the protagonist's current strength and identity, it would be ideal to cooperate with the Qibao Glass Sect. Without background and backing, I'm afraid he will be eaten up and wiped out.

To be honest, I don't understand what you want to do. You just take the blood and leave. You have to hang out in front of Tang Hao and show that you are the Blue Silver Emperor to see if he kills you, right? What do you think? Not to mention that Lan Yincao can only have one emperor, but if you steal the throne from his wife, what do you want him to think? You blocked Tang San's future path, Tang Hao didn't want to give you a blow? Forcibly lowering Tang Hao's IQ, the protagonist is really "resourceful"

Aren't you making enough money? Give up the idea of ​​massages and concealed weapons

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It was okay at first, but later on, everyone knew that Tang Hao was near Tang San, and he was still there forcing Lai Lai, speechless.

As I said in the comments before, I can't explain the poisonous aspects of these two chapters with just the 150 words in the comment area, so I'll just talk about them here. First of all, the protagonist is not stable enough. Douluo fans basically come to see the gang of Tang family and Yu Xiaotan suffer. Therefore, Douluo fans basically have a default rule, that is, the protagonist must crush the opponent, even if it cannot be crushed by combat power, it must be crushed by IQ. Author, you have limited the protagonist's combat power in the early stage. The poisonous point in the next two chapters is the group's intelligence reduction. Although it may be because you are not good at writing storylines other than the plot, so you instinctively follow the plot of the original work, but forcibly writing the plot for the sake of the plot is a taboo in writing novels, and it is also a poisonous point that many people cannot understand. The personalities and psychological activities of Yu Xiaogang and Tang San actually do not need to be forced to change by scripting the plot. Yu Xiaogang himself is an abandoned son, his nature is weak, and Tang San is a hypocrite. You have to understand the meaning of hypocrite. In the early stage, he was just a man in sheep's clothing. Wolf, so he pays great attention to the interest relationship in the early stage. After learning that the protagonist has a mysterious skill and there is no conflict with Tang San in the early stage, the normal plot should be that Yu Xiaotan goes to show off his theory, is pointed out by the protagonist and becomes angry, and then Tang San demands an apology from the protagonist, and finally turns against him. The tone of Douluo's book is also relatively clear. Soul masters have a very important position in the civilian community, so the guard office in the original work is actually a poisonous point. Generally speaking, fans need to avoid the poisonous points in the original work as much as possible, and your writing amplifies the poisonous points in the original work, which leads to a serious personality split between Yu Xiaogan and Tang San, and they forcefully create conflicts with the protagonist. This shows that the protagonist himself does not have his own concepts, and does not conform to the sense of maturity of the two reincarnated generations. The whole process feels like a child playing house. These two white-eyed wolves forcibly created the plot for the sake of the plot, while the protagonist forcibly changed the tone for the sake of fabricating the plot. Later, it led to a conflict between Tang Hao and the protagonist. In the previous two situations where the plot collapsed, no matter how good you write Tang Hao's plot, it will still make readers feel awkward, which is also a poisonous point. If you want to position Xiao Wu as the heroine, then you should not conflict with Tang San at this time. Instead, you need to create conflicts in the later stage to improve the protagonist's social status. The place where the conflict is created needs a "life and death crisis" to reflect it. This plot can be assigned to Er Ming, and it also provides a long enough plot logic for the protagonist's growth value. But the protagonist is too weak. When he was weak, he did not temporarily avoid Tang Hao's thoughts and insisted on saving face. This became a manifestation of "childishness". Don't you think the protagonist's [character that serves the plot] is extremely explosive in the novel? If you don't want to be a heroine, or want to open a harem, then you should let the protagonist go out alone in the early stage. With the funds earned previously and the Wuhun Palace subsidy, he needs to go out alone in the early stage to temporarily separate the relationship with the Tang family and Yu Xiaogang. You didn't achieve both endings. The plot of opening a store can be said to be impossible in the first place. It was written a little badly from the beginning, and you forcibly created conflicts in the middle that made the plot deviate from the plot, and the poisonous points naturally emerged from it. Author, if you have nothing to do, you can read these two chapters by yourself. You should be able to feel the contradictions. The two plots of Yu Xiaogan [who suddenly stopped being weak and became tough] and Tang San [who stopped being a hypocrite and indirectly became a thug] led to the change of the protagonist [becoming an honest person who was bullied]. You have arranged such a very poisonous NPC plot for the protagonist, which is really fatal. It is impossible to change it. If you change these two chapters, you may have to change everything later. . .

The power of the Golden Holy Dragon must be expressed. Don't just look at the elements. Gold and silver have special meanings in Douluo Continent.

It's all poison. If you haven't seen it, run away!