Douluo Dalu: The Fire That Shines Bright

Aren't these fanfictions portraying the Spirit Hall too favorably? The Spirit Hall isn't actually good to ordinary people, but rather to ordinary spirit masters. Spirit masters are the ruling class, so this is simply a way to appease them, much like how ancient emperors and officials appeased the gentry.

Everything else is alright, but the soul skills seem to be randomly added. A martial soul with a strong offensive advantage has been turned into a hodgepodge. The first soul skill is support, the second is control, and the third is defense—it's unbelievable.

Most Douluo Continent fanfiction these days is romance, featuring a hypocritical, two-faced Tang San who takes any woman he sees. I hope this one won't be like that.

I feel the protagonist no longer needs the elementalization skill for two reasons. First, elementalization primarily provides immunity to attacks, which overlaps somewhat with the function of the third soul skill, Fury Guardian. Second, elementalization of the martial soul should be present from the martial soul's true form; consuming another soul ring would be a waste.

This book is ruined. What about the protagonist? Yu Xiaogang killed his only relative, and all he did was strip him of his spirit and let him live as a commoner, supposedly as punishment. It's ridiculous. The Grandmaster wasn't famous as a spirit master; he had no future in cultivation. Whether he could cultivate or not was meaningless to him.

They even said the lowly scoundrel in the original story tricked Dugu Bo, but I never saw you give them a single plant. Frankly, everyone's a hypocrite; some are just so good at hiding it that you can't easily see through them. And this is the first time I've seen Dugu Bo so easily fooled; a few words and he's completely swayed!

If it's fire, is there a chance for a Blazing Asura Fire to burn your eyes?

The author wrote well in the early parts and was willing to listen to readers' suggestions, making him a good author. However, the writing completely fell apart later on. Here are my personal opinions: 1. The fact that the Spirit Hall deacon recommended the protagonist to the Heaven Dou Royal Family is problematic, but not a major flaw. 2.

Why do Douluo Continent fanfiction fans like the Notting City starting point?

Regarding innate soul power, besides the soul power attached to the martial soul, let's borrow Yu Xiaogang's words. But who is Yu Xiaogang? Is it really the quality of the martial soul that drives innate soul power? Another theory suggests that one's own aptitude affects the quality of their martial soul.