Gou Becomes a Heretical Stargazer in the Magical World

It's not as good as the princess who is really ugly. Her parents got married to incest and you were a sideline. In the end, the country was ruined and the family was destroyed. You devoted your life to magic and adventure.

When I saw the third chapter, I frowned. The 12-year-old son of a duke and the grandson of a butler, the son of a knight is such a bear? Judging from the first two chapters you wrote, the Duke is not that kind of villain, so he ended up teaching this kind of thing? Bro, you can persuade a lot of people with just this plot. It would be too embarrassing for you to use the routine from ten years ago. It is recommended to change.

That [Star Observation Technique] might as well be called [Astral Observation] I feel like the writing style is Western fantasy, so I'd better start something nicer It's too dramatic You even mentioned that the world is suppressing other magics and only pays attention to the magic of mind and so on. Then why can't the flowers bloom bigger? For example, the protagonist's plug-in is related to stars and the like. Then why can't we just use [Star Travel] as an introduction in the mid-term or even early-stage? Since this world cannot allow me to develop well, then I will go to other worlds to develop and then kill back. And the subsequent cool points can be brought to you without having to fight monsters all the time. Can't magic be studied? Even a little "Oops, I got it" is fine. Since the system has given a seed, can we operate it? Even if the protagonist doesn't have that talent, he can still get someone else's for free. As long as it is written reasonably and well, it will be fun. As long as the protagonist takes control of this [Comet Magic], which is also [Star Magic], there is a backdoor. It's okay for everyone to be their own leek. Names such as Xingyao, Xingxuan, Nebula, and Sunyao all sound better when used directly above [Stargazing Technique]. As for the plot, here are some suggestions. If everything about the starry sky is blocked by the so-called gods. Then you can write that the protagonist finds a way to take advantage of the loophole in the mid-term, and then runs out to gain energy. Then you can also directly let the protagonist go to the stars to obtain some energy from this planet. Aren't they all good? We need to take a bigger step. Since it is related to the starry sky, you can even drag a star down in the later stage to smash this road. You can even write about finding a way to become a god in the mainland or outside the mainland and come back to solo with the local god.

In a trance, I went back to more than ten years ago. At that time, I was in good health and did not have this problem.

😅 Can the author study the terminology of Western fantasy novels? The more I read this book, the more awkward it becomes. The theme of Western fantasy, but the words and sentences are all full of fantasy, like a European priest reciting Amitabha, which is very inconsistent.

Brother, I really can't help it. The thick fantasy process of the previous thirty chapters is all about killing monsters in the xx forest and xx mountains, digging for heavenly materials, and taking a bite to upgrade, and then fishing for pets with great backgrounds, and some grievances and alien complexes.

If the protagonist really becomes a god, he will continue to be a loser. That would be disgusting. It would be better for this kind of licking dog to die as soon as possible. Otherwise, you will not only delay yourself, but also delay your other half.

So retro. Upgrade to fight monsters, and the children's level division dream goes back to 20 years ago.

It still has the beauty of classical online writing. . .

If you don't write something new, no one will read you and you won't be able to persevere.

Yeah, yeah, yeah!

You might as well write serious fantasy classic novels. These plug-ins look at the actual FW of NPCs. It's not that cool.

I've been a little busy lately, so I'll slightly revise the publishing time.

I have just read one chapter and asked when the protagonist will become an adult. I don't like watching dramas about children.

Perfect boxing skills, spiritual flowers and spiritual fruits, this is fantasy. Farming in a western fantasy territory, fantasy magic conferring gods, your background model is not quite right. The introduction is also like a light novel, which is not suitable for the content of killing monsters and upgrading.

Seeing illegitimate children and marriage, This should be a fantasy novel After all, illegitimate children are not qualified for marriage.

The princess has not been able to see anyone for 20 years. Counterfeit and shoddy products. It will be all right

A very good novel that makes me feel young 🙂 Love Comes from Porcelain

A routine with a new skin is a new novel

The update four days ago was too late. In fact, I originally wanted to complain about this hostage issue. Except for China, how do illegitimate children in other countries get the right to inherit? This is not sending hostages, but declaring war 🥵