Wizard: Become Stronger by Drawing Cards from the Potions Variety Show

It is a replica of a foreign show Hell's Kitchen. The characters, both Eastern and Western, all have modern Western-style translation accents. The protagonist speaks in ancient ways and in modern ways. The plot is average, the plot is a bit bloody and the character conflicts are blunt. (Not a big one) has been shaped into an arrogant, shirking of responsibilities, and a weakling who loves to step on others to create conflicts. The barrage clown comes out from time to time, which is purely disgusting. In terms of the world view, I thought it would be grander, but the result is a piece of shit. Confusing magic potion and cooking is quite speechless. You can eat rice indiscriminately, but can you eat potions💊 indiscriminately? There is also the problem of materials. High-end materials such as dragon's blood can be wasted at will. Just make a variety show. If it is a HP world view, the author himself has written a multi-dimensional space world view. The result is this? 💩Shit, if you like to watch modern urban literature, variety shows and no-brainer writing, you can watch it. If you are looking for novelty and want to watch western fantasy and fantasy, you don't need to watch it.

I can't stand it anymore. The variety show part is very interesting. After the variety show is over, a sense of fragmentation appears. As written by different people, I was really speechless when I saw the part about the fog game. The constant reversal and reversal to forced echoes are really boring to read. The settings are rich but the plot is cliché. There is really no need. It is better to write about the potion culture and customs of different regions. It really feels like an Internet celebrity when writing this

I think the first volume is really good, but my friend, I feel like you are standing on the shoulders of others. Your frame, rhythm, and shots are all from real shows. Reality shows have very mature scripts and emotional bombs. As long as you follow this rhythm, you really can't go wrong. There are a lot of minor flaws at the beginning. To be honest, they are all taken care of by the intense rhythm. But if you don't learn the true essence of a reality show script, it will be difficult to write later and it will be easy to split. But I liked your first volume very much, as if I was watching a magical reality show. Not bad, it depends on how you behave later.

The writing is very innovative. Come on, the author. It doesn't matter if the routine is cliche, as long as it's good-looking.

There are so many characters, and each one is emphasized. In fact, readers can only remember the main characters. When the names of the secondary characters are mentioned, many readers will actually forget them. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. It's up to the author to decide how to write it. So far, it's very interesting and to my taste, but the family is a bit awkward. Come on, I think your book will be popular. The writing style and creativity are both good. From just a few words, I feel that the world view is very vast. I look forward to its further development.

Damn it, who is so fast

The content of the variety show at the beginning is quite interesting, but once you enter the investigation bureau, the content is very embarrassing. The plot design is a bit low-level, the characters are not as clear as before, and some of the twists are a bit inexplicable and seem to be forced to explain. Moreover, the improvement in strength of the system can no longer be seen, and it is a bit of a behavior of resting on one's laurels. I think the purpose of joining the Investigation Bureau is to improve his strength. Shouldn't we develop more of Dumbledore's characteristics instead of focusing on the development of potions? Now that potions are used as an auxiliary means, the improvement of the protagonist will be more obvious, right?

It's very fragmented. From the variety show to the residential masterpiece, it can be said that there is a connection problem. After that, when I came to the mysterious world, I felt that the fragmentation was very serious. It would be better to write another book like this. There is obviously a lot of the alchemy school system constructed earlier that can be written. I don't know what the meaning of writing in the mysterious world is. What is the setting of the protagonist? Or does it flesh out the protagonist or satisfy the author?

1. Your coding speed is a bit slow now. You want to improve it this week, at least 10,000 codes per day. Did you do it? 2. Will you continue to revise the text of each chapter to make it the best possible?

The content is quite unique, but you still have to add settings later because it is just an imaginary world view now. We don't know exactly what it is like, the differences between wizards, who they are fighting against, the levels and classifications of potions, what kind of world of magic and science is it outside?

I have read Chapter 16 and it is very interesting so far. The variety show should be a reference to "MasterChef". It is easier to write before the end of the show. However, how to develop after the end of the show will test the creativity of the plot.

The feeling of fragmentation is too strong, I have no desire to watch the potion variety show anymore.

Before the limited release, I just ordered seventy chapters. 🙂

The plot after the variety show is similar to that of Investigator. It has a completely different look and feel. Goldfinger seems to be there but not there. It seems to be written by another person.

The part about the family in the middle is a bit confusing. I can understand that I want to widen the latitude of the entire wizarding world from the background, but starting with a bloody plot like a family running away is a bit cliche to be honest? Maybe it's because of my personal preferences. I like to watch things more relaxed. Potions are potions, and there's no need to be too involved with other things. . . . .

What's the point of hosting the game now? Why spend so much effort on this game? The more I write about the main line, the more biased it becomes.

It is completely separated from the previous story, and even the protagonist has been changed. When I saw the Another World Anomaly Bureau, I couldn't stand it immediately. When I clicked on the latest chapter, I saw that I was still writing about this different world. Author, you are murdering the book by writing this way. It is better to reopen it.

Daodu is new, so many people are criticizing the family, why doesn't the author change it? 😰

It was pretty good at the beginning, skipping the inexplicable undercover scene, and the assistant coach job was okay at the beginning, but then it became inexplicable. It's so fragmented, it really doesn't feel like it was written by one person. And there is no specific main line. In fact, as long as the book maintains the feeling at the beginning, and then develops the world view, it will be good to keep writing the line of researching the potion. Later, the protagonist will not know where he is. Just like the chaos potion school that appeared later, it feels like the author drank the medicine of this school, just like what he himself wrote in the article, chaos and disorder, as if he was taken over by this school of thought. 😅

You can definitely take the route of entertainment. Basically, people who read this book are also interested in this. Just have a little daily life and prepare for various competitions.

The foundation of this book is the foundation of grass jelly, but I have to say that there are indeed some problems at present. In the first volume, it can be seen that the author has spent a lot of thought and energy on the world view, and it can even be said that everything is meticulous. The names, principles, schools of potions, etc. Make people feel that this is a real world, with logic and immersion, and vaguely see the arcane throne. However, some problems inevitably emerged in the later stages of the first volume, namely the rhythm and tension of the text. Being too detailed can easily become cumbersome and procrastinating, and the amount of information that is too scattered can easily become without focus and highlights. However, the main plot is there, and the "core of crisis" of the results of each game is there. Although I did slide over some chapters at this stage, but it did not affect the experience and favorability. However, there are indeed some problems with several chapters in the past few days. The superficial reason is that the small contradictions broken down by the main plot are stretched a bit, but the actual reason is that the specific expressions and descriptions are not gripping, and the focus and picture sense are missing, causing the readers to lose emotional points and memory points. The creator is using words to describe the picture he saw, and the reader is using words to restore the picture the creator saw. Obviously, the information transmission is greatly distorted. The possible reason is that the author wanted to express and foreshadow too much, but his writing power failed to keep up. But judging from the first volume, the author's writing skills are not like this. It could only be that he wants to show us too many things, so there is no focus. Only giving opinions without giving solutions is a hooliganism. Personally, I suggest you make subtractions, highlight the key points, and leave them blank. Skill characteristics, destructive effects, offensive and defensive wits, emotions, etc. Can all be centered around a little brilliance. Significantly reduce the evaluation and dialogue from the third-party perspective. Personally, I estimate that reducing the text in each chapter by a quarter should be effective. Of course, leaving blank space will also have corresponding problems, that is, it is easy to leave little foreshadowing and reveal the evil spirit. However, the evil spirit cannot be eliminated without detail, and there is plenty of time to complete the whole picture of the world, right? 😁 Condensed the number of words, omitted to find points, dug holes and left blank, personal suggestions, for reference only. Wish you good luck, wonderful things, and be a god🤝🤝🤝

The previous writing is very good, and the rhythm settings are all based on fairy grass standards. The variety show Magic Potion is good, but after winning the first place, the plot completely fell apart. The foreshadowing of the Li family was just a fart, and after joining the investigation bureau to start a new plot, it was forced to go undercover. The other world is even more messy. Not only the plot is fragmented, but the characters are also wrong. The golden finger is never used, and there is no description of how many genius points are used. The previous genius point learning setting disappears directly, and the protagonist becomes a super genius himself. Magic potion refining is just a gimmick in the early stage. Taking it as the core rule to ascend the level means treating everything as potion. In the later stage, it is actually an early fantasy novel. I thought I was watching Coiling Dragon, but even Coiling Dragon was not well written. I had to add the game Alien Unlimited Stream which took up half of the page. All the potion friends were gone and only the heroine appeared. A different world has a lot of unknown reasons. After skipping a few chapters, there are a lot of people. It is really amazing that I can watch it without skipping. I stopped watching when I saw that there was another potion competition. I have been poisoned and died. I will leave it to Shennong in the future.

Entering the plot of the relatively traditional wizard, I felt a sense of gap after reading it. At the beginning, it was an entertaining variety show, and then it directly followed the typical story of the war wizard. It's not a question of good or bad, but a question of the overall writing experience. I've watched so many, but I've never seen anyone else write a variety show about wizards and potions. On the contrary, there are a lot of war wizards of similar levels. The former is unique, but the latter belongs to you. No matter how well you write it, I will read it or not. This gap is difficult to make up for. If you had asked me to watch this from the beginning, I would probably have gotten into it, but it turned out that there was a wizard variety show in the front and it was put on the shelf and then pulled back, which was very uncomfortable. If you break away from Zongyi, this book will be difficult.

A stunning start, although the plot is a bit draggy, but overall it is still very attractive. The second part of the plot started to become boring. Keep at it and see if it doesn't work, then withdraw.

It feels like multiple books written by multiple authors. The writing style and writing style have changed. I really don't know how to evaluate it.

I don't even like writing titles anymore, I'm afraid I don't want to be a eunuch.

In Chapter 30, in that kind of environment, the protagonist can win. It can only be said that the protagonist has a great halo. As for the subsequent plot, just look at the beginning and you can know that there is no twist at the end without watching the process.

The variety show is well written, but the backend is a mess. However, the author is very perseverant and can write more than 800 chapters with such achievements.

It was a masterpiece before the variety show ended, but I could barely watch it after the variety show, and the undercover chapter started💩

I remember this book started out very well, but then I stopped reading it after talking about weird rules and rules. Is it getting better now?