Immortal Destiny: Beginning with a Fateful Bond with a Fox Maiden

The writing is very strange, a bit like the early stage of "Lanke", but the writing style is a bit light, and I always feel that some parts are not implemented properly, and it feels like I don't dare to use force when shitting.

Like the title

This book reminds me of Lan Ke Qi Yuan, which is the kind of fairy spirit that is somewhat unpredictable. I remember someone said that Lan Ke Qi Yuan has been exaggerated, saying that it has no clear realm system and is too messy and vague. I can only say that if you follow those clear systems to upgrade realms and fight realms, wouldn't that be upgrading to fight monsters? Where does the fairy spirit come from? Lanke also has a realm, but it is indeed vague. This also makes it a fairy spirit. Although the quality of what is written later is down, it is undeniable that it really has a fairy spirit (a touch of pretentiousness)

The writing is really good. Could it be that some old eunuch was reincarnated?

How can I put it, the style of writing has no intention of becoming a sage, but it is too holy. You can explain it appropriately. Harem writing must have the consciousness of the harem. We are not here to be sages.

Awesome, who are you? How could a newcomer write so well?

1. It's not that your writing is bad, it's that if your writing style is so pretentious and mixed with romance, why don't you classify it as a light novel? What are you doing in the Xianxia category? Second, selling meat is too obvious and stretched too far. There should be something close, but what? What kind of feeling does this give people? It's the kind of short love story serials sold in bookstores in junior high and high schools that girls love to read. But it's not quite enough to have the kind of love and hate that lasts for a thousand years. 3. If you want to write something marginal, of course you can, but don't be too far-fetched. For example, your hanging settings are simple and powerful but very vague. Vagueness means that readers don't know how powerful you are after reading it. We can't let readers predict and give everyone a feeling. That is, it doesn't matter who the opponent is or what they will encounter, the author will cheat him. If he doesn't cheat, he will reverse it. 4. The plot you arranged may appear to you and not come to mind. First of all, it is said at the beginning that a fox can live for ten thousand years. After receiving feedback from the tree, his life span will be increased by a thousand years. Isn't it obvious that you are talking to yourself when you say that the gap between you and the fox is too big? Is the protagonist brainless? What's the difference? The protagonist has this kind of problem. It can be expected that there is no need to go to the immortal. He can just rely on the protection of the fox to develop a relationship with her or something. But you also want to make the protagonist have a brain, and turn it on when needed and turn it off when not needed? In short, there are many places, but many people have limited personal abilities, so I won't mention them one by one. 5. What is our goal in writing this? I just want to write what I want to write. There's no need to say more, I can only rate it as cool! If you want to write a fairy tale category, you also want to make some money. Then you have to upgrade the flow to be closer to the traditional Xianxia. The latest writing can be copied from a fast food restaurant. It doesn't mean whether they write better or worse or not. Is the type. That type definitely has rice to eat, but it must be of a certain level. And if you just want to make a lot of money and don't want to make a small amount of money on the sidelines of romance, then you have to write some epic novels or humorous novels. The epic novels The Devil Comes to the Sky with a Pure Heart are all of this type. There is so much rice written that you dare not even think about it. There is a market for humorous ones but it's not very clear. The second is to create your own genre. What mysterious resurgence of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, the Lord of Mysteries. 6. The above talks about what kind of article to write, but this one talks about how you need to understand your readers. What do we like to watch and how to write about it to increase the viscosity and make us feel refreshed and comfortable at the same time. There is also the need to cater to your audience readers. When you choose the Xianxia category, you need to know what kind of readers are here. Each of your settings is to select readers separately. What is poison is actually something that most readers who clicked in to read or are currently reading find it unacceptable. The difference is if your writing is good. Everyone can bear the small poison, but every thing that is different from your mainstream readers' novel reading habits, such as setting the world view, plot, etc., Will reduce the readers' desire to read further. 7. The reason why I say so much is that I feel like you have something but not much feeling. It's like you didn't write fairy novels at Qidian before. You are like the kind of romance novel website or the bloody novels serialized in some short magazines. It just gives people the feeling that you have your own set of fixed routines. In short, today when there is a shortage of online literature, readers are increasingly fond of reading high-quality novels. When you meet an author who hopes to write a high-quality book, you should comment on it and provide an opinion. The author may disagree or object. In short, it will provide you with an idea. It is good for you. It's also good for us. Hope to see you in the top ten of the monthly vote list in the future. Hhh slipped away.

A girl fell under a pool of blood, and her hands stained with blood were raised tremblingly. Under the dim light, the girl's expression was very painful, and her eyes were no longer as bright as before. She used her last bit of strength to squeeze out a sentence from between her teeth: "Quick... Update... New..."

The author is not a great writer. If I must say it, he is a small writer who came ashore. He was at sea before, but I feel that marginalia has never been what the author wanted to write. Although he likes to write it, readers also like to read it... I have read everyone's comments in the past few days, and the author is also reflecting on it. Some words are indeed too pretentious, and the author will gradually change. New book issue, reading is really important! Please read! If you think the book is good, you can catch up and put it on the shelves, and then save the book later. By then, the author will update it faster. The new book issue can only have two chapters a day. Thank you for your support, thank you everyone!

Is there a harem? If not, I won't watch it. If I don't watch the eunuch, don't say there is one. Then if you mention it after a few hundred chapters or near the end, it will be considered there.