Immortal Destiny: Beginning with a Fateful Bond with a Fox Maiden

It's written strangely, somewhat reminiscent of the early stages of "Rotten Chessboard," but the writing style feels a bit weak. It always feels like some parts lack depth, like you're hesitant to exert force when you're taking a dump.

As the title suggests

This book reminds me of *The Chess Master's Tale*, both possessing a somewhat elusive, ethereal quality. I remember someone saying *The Chess Master's Tale* was overhyped, claiming it lacked a clear system of realms, being too chaotic and vague. I can only say, if you followed a clearly defined system of realm upgrades and battles, wouldn't that just be leveling up by fighting monsters?

This is really well written. Could it be that it's some old eunuch reincarnated?

Well, the writing style isn't meant to be divine, but it's too saintly. Perhaps a proper explanation is needed: harem novels require a certain awareness of the harem dynamic; we're not here to be sages.

Wow, who are you, father-in-law? How could a newbie write so well?

First, it's not that your writing is bad, but if your writing style is so affected and pretentious, and mixed with contrived romance, why not put it in the light novel category? Why are you in the fantasy/xia category? Secondly, the selling of sex appeal is too blatant and the connection is too far-fetched. There should also be something closer to the surface, but...

A girl lay in a pool of blood, her hand, stained with blood, trembling as she raised it. In the dim light, her expression was one of intense pain, her eyes devoid of their former sparkle. With her last ounce of strength, she forced out a single sentence through clenched teeth: "Quickly... Update…"

The author isn't a big name; if I had to categorize them, they'd be considered a small-time writer who's finally made it big. They were previously struggling in the industry, but they've never really wanted to write borderline fiction, even though they enjoy writing it and their readers like it… I've read everyone's comments over the past few days, and the author is reflecting on it.

Does it have a harem? If not, I won't read it. I don't read stories with unfinished episodes. And don't say it does, then mention it a few hundred chapters or near the end, and that's it.