Rong Ge'er of Dream of the Red Chamber

This is a self-indulgent story. The protagonist starts by wanting to rebel, has virtually no political awareness, and constantly uses the phrase "sharp as a sword" to describe his character, employing it at least five or six times. He even fawns over "Grandpa Lai," calling him "Grandpa" with obvious affection. He's just a servant! And he even embezzles his master's property—you can call that blatant embezzlement? You might think he's cunning, but his actions are incredibly abstract.

Can we please stop having the main character constantly talking about rebellion? These things are all about taking things one step at a time. Even when Zhu Yuanzhang was begging for food, he never said he wanted to be emperor.

It's normal for a harem to appear in *Dream of the Red Chamber*, or rather, it would be problematic to write *Dream of the Red Chamber* without depicting a harem. However, it shouldn't be so indiscriminate, with all sorts of women appearing, like a dog in heat. You Shi is his stepmother. Even if you're a time traveler, didn't you have any other women besides You Shi? You could even have found You Erjie or You Sanjie, but finding Jia Rong's own stepmother is truly disgusting.

Reborn as Jia Rong and then making advances on Yingchun, Tanchun, and Xichun? Author, I can only say you're amazing, absolutely incredible! This is the first time I've seen anything like it in a Dream of the Red Chamber novel, I'm hooked!

Do you even know what it means to rob an official ship, author? Also, the plot here is incredibly weak; it's completely fooling the reader. An official ship with hundreds of people—how many pirates would that be? The writing is utterly disorganized; this novel is on the verge of collapse.

The protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life. Even after transmigrating, he doesn't have any special abilities. Where does he get the confidence to rebel and become emperor? With that kind of mind, survival is the priority. He only knows the useless plot points in the book, and some of those plot points will immediately change because of the protagonist.

I hope the author writes well and ignores the trolls' complaints. Continue with your ideas; good wine needs no bush.

What do you think of this book? I read *Dream of the Red Chamber* for its beautiful women, not some ridiculous novels that use it as a cover. For example, that one ridiculous novel that supposedly saves the world from collapse—how stupid do you have to be to reread that kind of novel?

This is so perverted! They even have sexual interest in a 6-year-old Lin Daiyu.

The writing is truly excellent, a rarity among works in *Dream of the Red Chamber*.