Start from the Glory Martial Arts School

That's awesome. I won't say that I can forgive the original person after he was beaten to death. Later, I wanted to be his matchmaker and give him my deskmate to lick a supporting character who beat the original person to death. What a waste of pig feet.

To my surprise, new authors from Qidian follow the same routine. If you can't walk, you want to run. If you want to be sexy but can't, you still have to say a few words. If you are a novice, you should write like a character, one stroke at a time at first, and then write slowly. Don't just write connected characters before you have even started writing regular script. It's useless!

The writing is really messy, and the details are not appropriate. For example, when the basic boxing skills are level 5, there is a special effect selection. I don't write about the specific effects of the special effects, so I just skip it. It was originally a fun point, but it turned out to be a bummer.

The author's writing power is beyond words, and it is difficult to read smoothly and painful to watch.

I didn't even test the secrets of the human body when they appeared. I just skipped them. Most of the things that should be written were skipped and the plot was messy. Goodbye.

No, why is it pushed by ghosts? It's pushed by women. The protagonist doesn't have a brain yet.

Personally, I think there is a very poisonous point, that is, the original person was beaten to death, but he chose to forgive it casually on any terms. After all, the soul wore someone else's body, which is a bit disgusting🤢.

There is no logic, it often breaks down, and the writing is a bit messy. Some ideas, but not much

Now, there is indeed a reason for all the books that sink to the bottom.

It's such a mess, it's a martial arts gym and a school, and how do the classmates know that the protagonist has taken two pills to strengthen his body?

Telling the master that he has reached the highest level of level 5 is too much. How does the protagonist know that he has reached the highest level? Can he tell others? The sense of presence of the master is also very poor, and the logic often does not flow smoothly.

It has a strong sense of rhythm and is exciting. It's really good 👍

Not bad, he must be a new author, come on

The author first organizes his thoughts before writing. The outline is a bit messy.

Very creative, support the author, come on!

It's too bland, no fun, no crisis,

Good reviews. Write a mark in advance and like it.

This is the most ridiculous book I have read this year, and it is still childish.

It would be better if it wasn't so forced to show off.

The plot is quite good, with ups and downs and attractive

Wonderful stories are told eloquently, and they get better and better 👍

All I can say is that it won't look good when the monster comes out.

It's a good way to kill time🤓