Ace of Diamonds from Tokyo to Japan 1

It's rare to find a good text, and it's even rarer to write a good one. The pace and writing style of this book are both good. This month's monthly tickets and recommended tickets have been given. Come on, author, don't be a pigeon

The author can look at Taibao and moneyball. Some of the theories are true, but they are exaggerated in the drawings. These theories and data can be added to the content. After the protagonist becomes an ace and has achieved results, and studies with two talented catchers, training content can be added.

The author is a newbie writing for the first time. If you have any comments or suggestions, please point them out! If you have any plots you want to see, please leave a message! I really like baseball and I like to drill A, so I want to write better!

Although I also like to read baseball novels, I still really want to complain about the author. In the opening chapter of a junior high school baseball game, the pitcher throws a slider. This is a change-up ball, which is not allowed in junior high schools. If a pitcher throws a change-up ball in a junior high school game, the coach will be scolded to death. Come to Japanese junior high schools, unless they play exclusive league games, otherwise the game will use soft baseballs. If you throw a change-up ball to me, there are no seams and you can't hold it with your fingers. The slider that least hurts the wrist is to face the pitcher with two vertical seams on the front. Place the index finger and middle finger of the right hand to the left and right of the seam on the right side, and release the ball as a straight ball. However, due to inertia, the right arm cannot rotate counterclockwise after the release. The ligaments of the upper arm are under great pressure. I have been throwing change balls in the third grade of junior high school. There is no need to think about becoming a professional. It is faster to go to the hospital to register first.

The author has done a lot of research on Ace of Diamonds, the characters are not obviously OOC, the competition is very passionate, and it looks like watching anime, but it is recommended to start reading from Chapter 8. The protagonist time-traveled during the competition, and there is no sense of incompatibility with the original owner's friends, and there is no sense of time-travelling. It reads like a time-traveler who inexplicably became good friends with a stranger after time-traveling, and the character of the protagonist cannot be seen. It is better to skip the chapters before entering school and read directly the chapters after entering Qingdao.

People in middle age are troubled, but this book really inspired me at a certain moment, and I had a little spark again. The first day I read this book, I was busy doing research, and I passed three certificates after reading it 😂. As a reader, I hope more people will read this book, and I also hope that the author can write more good works.

It was my first time to read a baseball article, but I learned about rugby, soccer, and basketball through reading the article. I read dozens of chapters patiently, but I didn't understand anything about baseball. The entry barrier is a bit high 💀

The writing is good... But it's just a little short... I'll give you the last 3 monthly passes this month...

Now that you have won the championship, don't press the score or write about injuries. ps: Since some schools have won consecutive championships in spring and summer, and consecutive championships in summer and spring, Qingdao can also do it. It doesn't matter if it doesn't, as long as it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist and doesn't want the protagonist to be injured.

Will he break through 160 in his senior year of high school? After all, there are people who break 160 in their senior year of high school, so it should be okay.

I'm missing a book right now A comprehensive article about all the baseball characters (Drill A. Boomstick. Shigeno. Sunshine Motor. Amnesia Pitcher... Etc.) But money goes into the stadium.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good Diamond fanfic. It covers not only baseball, but also the ups and downs of baseball students abroad. The writing gets better and better, and the more you go on, the more you have your own style

It's very well written, even people like me who have never been exposed to baseball love to read it.

How about changing the cover to one with baseball elements or an A-level picture? Don't any of the covers that come with the system have baseball elements? Or can you try using AI to run one? Just a little personal suggestion

I remember that Chris was injured in his freshman year of high school and had already started rehabbing when he entered the second grade.

Is the protagonist an original character? After the decisive battle between Matsukata and Feng Xun, why not write about the protagonist's family background? Or simply write about it, Yuko is the protagonist's mother? Is Daoqing a normal high school? When you enter Daoqing, everything is about baseball. There are no students other than baseball. Why not start with the background introduction of this high school, and then go to the baseball club of the protagonist's class. Now it seems that this is an institution dedicated to learning baseball instead of a high school. To be honest, I thought this book was a youth campus sports fan novel, but now it lacks a sense of campus youth. I haven't seen the original and I feel a bit confused and a bit boring.

Next, Eijun and Fangtani are ready to play. Does the author plan to create a new first-year strong game? After all, there should be more powerful new students joining the Hagar Champions than in the original work!

Hagar is over... Let's take a look at the U18 [8 pitchers] Takeshin Manatani (3rd year = Hanamaki Higashi) Kadokura Ondai (3rd year = Sendai Matsuda) Oda Shoki (3rd year = Yokohama) Kobayashi Tetsusaburo (2nd year = Yokohama) Maeda Yudai (3rd year = Takaoka No. 1) Suzuki Yugo (3rd year = Chukyo) Sugimoto Masako (3rd year = Chiben Academy) Suekiri Roshi (3rd year = Okinawa Shogaku) [3 Catchers] Sugimoto Shogo ( 3 years = Omi) Kakutani Tetsuto (3 yen = Chiben Academy) Yamada Rintora (3 years = Tomben Wakayama) [Infielder = 5 people] Eita Iguchi (3rd year=No. 1 In Kanto) Shunyu Ono (3rd year=Yokohama) Eru Kawakami (2nd year=Yokohama) Seuma Ikeda (3rd year=Yokohama) Fukushima Harata (3 years = Tokai Okumamoto Seisho) [Outfielder = 2] Ishida Yuhoshi (3 years = Kendai Takasaki) Kajiyama Yuzu (3 years = Kamimura Gakuen) Both Koda and Riku Takabe were not selected... Only 2 people were selected from the outfield It's great to see Kakutani, I hope he's in good health after the heatstroke I was expecting Ariake's Nagata to be able to enter. It seems that it's still difficult for a strong school.

I see that the wiring of this book has not been adjusted at all. The protagonist's striking strength is actually 6 sticks

Mengxin's writing is so good, but one update a day is not enough. Come on,

I feel like the dozen or so pictures that follow are a bit too cliche.

How many years do you plan to write? Will you write in detail?

I read two chapters and can't understand

It is completely unreasonable not to add some new characters... The previous national championship title is completely useless!

It's so funny, can a battle be so exciting? Yokohama VS Oho?

Every county meeting has started Is anyone discussing it?🤭