Eastern Jin: My Father, the Powerful Minister

It's not that the author is historically illiterate or a historical optimist. The male protagonist promotes the examination method... Why should he? On the basis of your own bad life? The author would not be so naive as to think that all the reforms of later generations can be moved forward. The Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties were the stage for the aristocratic families to sing their songs and then I would appear. If you try to make a law, who would agree with it? If the minister doesn't kill you, they are slow to act! Writing time-travel historical articles, you must at least have historical materialism, and Wai Wai also needs to have a degree😦

It is recommended to include the heroine Xie Daoyun in the introduction. The character list needs to be made. Otherwise, many readers will take a look at the introduction and see that there is nothing there, including no task list, and will not click in at all. Because he is a top-notch poor scholar, there are quite a few readers who like Xie Daoyun. In terms of arrangement, the collection definitely grows quickly. The quality of the book is good, keep up the good work

To be honest, what this author writes really has no details, you know. There is no detailed description of the war, and there is no detailed description of politics. It is all written in one stroke. As a result, although it seems reasonable and the pace is fast, there are always big shortcomings, which completely makes the reader feel bad. I can only say that this book has a shell but no internal organs. I hope the author can learn from experience and bring us better works next time.

I don't know if it's because I've read too many books about Shui, or because this is progressing too fast Generally speaking, according to this context, from the battle to become a Han Dynasty to the subsequent governance of Sichuan, other books can basically write 200,000 words? Da Cheng Han writes about several waves of battles and the governance of Sichuan. It is mixed with water and describes the interaction between the protagonist and several subordinates. It is just one volume. Disaster relief, planning and construction, and the application of new systems will be written from some civilian perspectives. But the Sichuan governance part of this book is relatively fast... The interaction between several subordinates is still Not enough I can't tell now whether I read too much about hydrology and my thinking has been domesticated, or whether it's just because the book progresses quickly and lacks details In general, it's good. Please pay attention to the pacing. The Han Dynasty and Sichuan farming were wiped out so fast. Fu Jian's stories are probably also fast. If the Northern Expedition goes too fast, it's easy to run out of things to write.

Is this writing without writing, forcibly suppressing the protagonist and exalting the opponent? Not to mention the protagonist's father's strength, the protagonist alone now has the entire Northern Zhou Dynasty + Hehuang. What does the Murong family have? Even Hebei has not been confiscated. Counting the wars every year, it should be said that the family has been emptied out long ago. He actually has an advantage over the protagonist.

Emperor Taizong Gao, Emperor Huan Wen, Emperor Taizong Wen, Emperor Huan Xi. The protagonist will become the only Taizong in history who succeeds to the throne normally🤓.

No modern person is as good as Shi Ran who knows how to treat foreigners, old and weak, and kill them all.

You have already revealed your cards, but you still let Fu Jian take the position. Do you think you are not in trouble enough? Do you still want to dominate the world in this life? Besides playing with women, what else do you do? Waste

Let me express my feelings objectively and without malice. It's not that cool to say that the protagonist of this book is invincible at the beginning. Even before it's released, it's already being assisted by Yongliang King Meng. Even if you break the game to this extent, you can complete the save by pushing all the way. 🤫 The starting point of the protagonist of the historical article is too high and there is really nothing to write about. Not every author is a wolf in the history department.

Because I don't have time to do it, I pulled two maps with clear state boundaries online for your reference