I Seek Immortality by Chance

Overall, this book is truly a masterpiece and worth reading. Maybe the plot is not as good as some fairy tale masterpieces, but my requirements when looking for a book are not that high. I just want to find a more traditional fairy tale with a normal protagonist and acceptable writing style. After searching for it, I finally found this unpopular novel. Let me talk about my personal impressions in detail. The advantage is that the outline is very good, the story develops logically, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are not outwitted. The writing is not the best, but it is enough to tell the story clearly. The plot is a bit bland, but as a traditional fairy tale, it is considered normal. Even though the progress of the Immortal Realm chapter is obviously very fast, and various opportunities are just enough to strengthen the protagonist, and it is obvious that the outline is already being drawn up, the interplay between the various immortal seals can still be kept intact, and there is even a foreshadowing in the end, and the gray line of the grass snake lies thousands of miles away, which is exciting. Secondly, I think one of the major features of this book is: fighting skills refining qi to fight spiritual water, building foundations and forming elixirs to fight real pictures, Tianling entering the dream, Tianling late stage fighting Mahayana backhand, Mahayana and above are all mechanical monsters, and Yuxu are all concept gods. It is true that each level has its own characteristics, rather than simply comparing who can send the bigger wave. The disadvantage is that I listen too much to the readers' advice. 1% Of the readers make 99% of the voices. In fact, in many places, the author originally wrote well, but some people questioned it. The author just explained it and made a patch. For example, quarreling with a little naughty insect seemed quite relaxed and enjoyable, but in the end, this little fun was killed. In fact, some of them are the author's characteristics. You can just do it at your own pace. I don't know if the reason why the progress has been accelerating in the later period is because everyone has always complained that the progress is slow. I read it after it was completed, and I didn't feel that way. The progress started from Tianling and Entering Zhongzhou, and the reading became less immersive. Another big drawback is that the path depends on fighting skills, which is what I feel most obvious when watching it - starting from the middle and late stages, there are basically no decent "battles", almost all "fighting skills". The point in the code is to fight for a treasure, or open a dungeon, which happens to be the protagonist's level to participate, and it is basically one-on-one. Even the several battles in the later period forcibly create a one-on-one fighting situation. This is a war, and there is not even a melee? In front of the battlefield, you are playing a turn-based game and I am playing a turn-based game. No matter how many settings the author arranges to create this situation, it itself is unreasonable. It feels like it's trying to forcefully drag it into the author's comfort zone in describing "fighting". Fortunately, it ended safely in the end. I hope the author can write better and better in the future and achieve greater success!

The only pity is that the word count is a little short. I only read the latest chapter after three days of reading. It's too difficult to find books at Qidian. The rankings are just a bunch of stuff and not interesting at all. You can only find it by fate. Come on, author, keep writing, and I'll give you the monthly ticket!

Completed it and read it in a few days. This is my first completed novel this year. Write some of my views and opinions and recommend it to book friends. (1) Novel setting: The biggest feeling that this book gives me is that the setting is very brilliant, not only in refining the seals to perform magical powers, but also in various aspects such as the use of spiritual consciousness and golden finger settings. Especially the golden finger setting is of the type that helps promote the plot rather than adding unnecessary points. I like it very much. (2) The rhythm is lively and the fighting skills are exciting. Nowadays, many cultivation novels drag on the pace and are more perfunctory in the description of fighting skills. This book does a good job in this regard. Finally, a little suggestion. Now that the protagonist has formed a pill, the plot has slowly begun to reach its climax. I hope the author can control the pace and describe the storyline in more detail. After all, Golden Elixir and Dao Fei are already the mainstays in this book. In addition, I hope that the refining of natal magic weapons, elixirs, etc. Can be described in detail, just like ordinary people develop plots around elixirs such as Jiuqu Lingdan, Huiyang Shui, and Tenglong Dan. Finally, I hope that the background setting will not be limited to our own big world. It can be seen that the channels for becoming an immortal in this world are too narrow. I hope that it can be completed in detail later. Overall, this is an excellent cultivation novel with a novel setting and clear rhythm.

This book has great stamina so far, and the more I write, the better it gets.

It will be interesting when monsters can use human bones to practice. You take my magic pill, and I take your bones. Humans cannot take all the benefits. Everyone is a resource for practice 😁

Talking about the surface and the heart

In fact, there is not much plot, and the main word count is used to introduce various seals, but there is nothing poisonous enough to finish reading.

The author's writing is good, and it's very smooth to read.

I looked at the character sheet and thought there were multiple female protagonists, but after looking at the previous part, it seemed like there was no female protagonist? The protagonist keeps shouting that if he can't achieve the great road, why should he marry a wife? He is like a training machine without emotions. Even if he can achieve the great road and live forever, what's the point? What's the difference between a heartless person and a stone on the roadside. What's more, the road to Taoism is so difficult. Even if you have a golden finger, you will definitely be able to achieve Taoism? Once you die in the middle, you have been cultivating for a lifetime, suffering for a lifetime, and enjoying nothing. It is not a loss to your grandma's house. Moreover, a woman can influence the Taoist heart and the path of Taoism. People who are afraid of wolves before and tigers behind will be able to achieve Taoism. And judging from the performance of the book, both sides often fail to please both sides. If you look at the ones at the top of the monthly ticket list, those with a harem are not sloppy, and those without a heroine are not ambiguous. If you want to eat both sides, you often can't get it.

Master Sword Fox

To be honest, I don't understand why the ancient one from Laoshizi can live longer than half of the Immortality Seal. It feels like a villain who was forcibly added to the mix.

The advantages and disadvantages of this book are quite obvious; the writing is fluent, which is basic and there is nothing to say Advantages; 1. The handling of some stepping stones in the early stage has always been dealt with, which I like very much. Unlike other authors who can write at least a chapter and a half, what should be omitted is omitted. This is an advantage; 2. The protagonist is pushed almost all the way, there are almost no setbacks, the Taoist heart is extremely firm, growth? How can you grow after reading cool articles? There are three signs of signing at the beginning, crisis → lead to the golden finger → find hope → escape and join the big faction of the novice village. It is a climax process and a great enjoyable article. It is enjoyable from beginning to end; Disadvantages 1 The data is extremely imprecise. I don't know if the author just turned around and forgot about it after writing. What I see is that the sense of fragmentation is quite serious, especially the numbers. A million, then a million, and finally a million 2. Realm settings. After starting from the golden elixir, the gap between realms has not changed qualitatively. It is all about accumulating mana and quantity, especially when reaching a million golden elixirs. This is most obvious. The performance of the protagonist at a low level and at a high level is obviously inconsistent with the protagonist's expressiveness after reaching it. Is the author afraid that the combat power will be too high and it will be difficult to control the situation? The plots of 3 dungeons are seriously homogeneous. They are basically the same template over and over again. After reading too much, even the cool articles are quite dull and boring. The one about slaying demons and slaying demons is slaying demons → modifier upgrade → pretending to be cool → slaying demons again. It is quite boring after reading too many times. I thought it was just a Wanding level. I never expected the results to be so good. Unexpectedly, the only notable thing in the dungeons is the Xuanfengjie dungeon. In the early days of Tianling , and then the two armies faced off, basically just a few reversals and reuses, and then entered the Xuanfeng Realm and slowly developed, and then Mahayana defeated the Demonic Way and became the only winner. It was very fun here, but other copies were just average 4 The emotional line was very bad, I know that 99% of male authors are terrible at writing emotional lines, but I had a little expectation, but nothing unexpected happened, it was really bad, abrupt and blunt Summary, In fact, there are still a lot of small poisonous points, but I know that this is a good book, so I skipped over them when I saw them, otherwise I would have run away. As a good book, it is qualified, but it is still the same old book, there is no innovation and it does not deviate from the original routine. It just caters to the fun points of the current market. The protagonist is no longer the same as before, like a rat crossing the street, everyone shouts to beat him, and when he reaches the top of the map, everyone changes to an advanced map. Shouting, this is almost a routine of Shuangwen in recent years. I read that the author basically updates it every day, so it is not surprising that the results are like this. Only Shuangwen is powerful can do miracles. If you grind on each page every day, and there are also a lot of little poisons mixed in, it is normal for your grades to not improve. If you can update 10,000 or more per day, and polish it a little more, I personally feel that your book will be better than the one on Slaying Demons

I started reading books on Qidian. Com in 2008. I can no longer find the account I registered before. The books I have read over the years must have more than a billion words. This book is definitely a top-notch book in my eyes. When I saw this book being criticized in the comment area, I couldn't help it. If it is really bad, it would be fine. I really don't understand why someone criticizes such a good book.

The plot is so-so. I can't chew the meat. I don't see a supporting character with any brains. I fight and kill. I level up and find an opportunity to kill again. I will win every time. Every fight between the monsters and the chance are just right for the protagonist's level. It's too bad. It feels like there is no outline. I write it wherever I go. How can I continue reading after 100 chapters?

Immortal cultivation and martial arts literature often change the map but not the medicine. For example, Nascent Soul Tribulation and Martial Saint Tribulation Cultivator have no strong demeanor at all. This book is very good. The Mahayana in the human world is full of celestial beings. After ascension, it is also full of fairy spirit. When you reach a high realm, it will be good without the petty mentality. The setting of the Eight Meridians Heavenly Palace is also very good. The backer is strong and unique, and there is not much intrigue between them. Of course, it may be that the protagonist upgrades too quickly and is skipped. Compared to changing maps and changing sects and forces, it's like an assembly line, and it's very routine when you see it later. It's just slower, and the pace speeds up in the later stages. But this is not a bad thing. Although the update is slow, the quality is still guaranteed and the completion is accelerated and can be completed smoothly. There are many books that are unfinished after being delayed for a long time.

Before the protagonist breaks through the golden elixir, no one in the Taoist Academy can break through it for 500 years. The golden elixir is difficult to reach the sky. When the protagonist breaks through the golden elixir, even cats and dogs can break through. If Tao tires are everywhere, the golden elixir is not as good as a dog. .

Have you ever practiced immortality? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted 😥

It's too fast, I feel like it's ripening 😅, entering Mahayana from the early stage of Tianxuan in 3 months. It would be better to write about the opportunity, go back to the sect and retreat for a hundred years to sort out the system, and then enter the Mahayana. In fact, Zhang Xuanzhou's character design is quite good. He has been practicing for more than 2,000 years, and has gone from the lower courtyard to the upper channel step by step. I suspect that the protagonist's ripening speed is a pig deliberately raised by someone to be a chess piece for reducing and emptying. Either he is still in the inner demon tribulation, and the rest is his own adultery.

My friend has been reading novels since he was in elementary school, and it has been at least ten years now. There may be a big difference between the perspective of appreciating novels and that of ordinary readers. To be honest, there are many problems in this book, big and small. I had to dissuade me in the early stage. For example, the names of the sects and exercises that appeared in the early stage seemed a bit perfunctory, but I still finished reading it in one day. As far as Xiaobai's writing is concerned, this book is passable in any case. It has a tight pace, rich content, and the main point is that it is not procrastinating at all. Secondly, the novel setting makes people want to watch it. It is no exaggeration to say that for the books on the list, I can memorize the end by reading the beginning. Of course, everyone has their own thoughts, but I think it's pretty respectable anyway. The purpose of writing this post is not to evaluate this book. Now, the protagonist of this book has entered the elixir formation stage. Anyone who reads books regularly knows that in most books, even many novels that were popular before, the plot begins to ramp up in the middle and late stages. In one chapter, you are just playing tricks, but in the next chapter, you may be completely devastated. I still hope that the author can bring more novel experiences to readers. Let's talk about the common problems in most books nowadays. They can be summarized into two types: one is the homogeneity of plots, and the other is the homogeneity of characters. After all, no one has ever cultivated immortality, and most authors subconsciously write that there is no difference between foundation building and Yuanying (of course, this book is not called this). Although it is always described how difficult it is to make a knot, in order to show the strength of the protagonist, the strength, experience or IQ of the supporting characters are not matched at all. If you don't highlight the supporting role of forming a pill in terms of plot performance, it is likely that readers will feel that there is no difference between building a foundation and forming a pill. Then he continued to increase his combat effectiveness and stacked boxes fiercely. It's nothing more than killing this today and doing that tomorrow, which gives readers the feeling that the plot of the novel has entered an infinitely repetitive process. I still hope to continue to see the author create interesting content, so I put forward the following humble opinions: 1. After all, novels are a genre that pays attention to storytelling and must be people-centered. It cannot be said that there is no content to increase combat effectiveness and change maps without thinking. 2. If you want to avoid homogeneity, you can use a group image appropriately. Even if it is a novice, it is not necessary to write all the same as NPCs. I don't know if the author has watched Mortal anime. For example, the clown supporting character named Jonggo in it can also make readers very happy. 3. As the strength has improved, you can introduce content through some weird ideas. For example, you can use the supernatural power controlled by the clone to write about the clown in the green turtle, and use the illusion to come true to write about some events that arouse curiosity. Even more cruel, you can write about the supporting characters who are appropriately abused, such as the one from the Luoxia Sect. There is no need for the protagonist to solve them all alone. Just imagine if he has always been disgusted with the protagonist, but his heart was broken when he was bullied by others (for example, he was bullied by a monster), and then the protagonist casually solved it for his mortal enemy. This is not only more real, but also more enjoyable! That's a lot to say. The most important thing is that I hope the author can have his own ideas and continue to bring readers a different experience. I'm really tired of watching the same stuff, so I really don't want to copy other people's content.

The plot copies have become seriously homogenized. They are basically the same template, and they are repeated non-stop. Although the characters in the map realm are different, the core has not changed. In essence, it is still a cool article that constantly changes maps and upgrades. After seeing the aesthetic fatigue after seeing it, it is a bit tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

Information revealed in the article 1. The ancients are the group of people who competed with the True Immortal and True Dragon for the Immortality Seal, and they still survive to this day 2. The master of Hongyun Qitian once accepted a shepherd boy before falling asleep (the time should be around the time when the True Immortal won the Immortality Seal), and the shepherd boy spirit has survived until now But the True Immortal and True Dragon who holds half of the Immortality Seal died Are they real deaths or fake deaths? If he died for real, wouldn't he become a pure clown?

1. The benefits of realms do not stack up, and the benefits are small. From the end of this realm to the next realm, it is still a son. As a result, the protagonist has never been able to crush the protagonist in combat, and the fight is protracted. 2. I kept talking about how strong the sword cultivator was, and beat each one without saying a word. Sometimes they were pinched, sometimes they were defiled, sometimes they were accused, sometimes they were not lethal enough, and they relied on other means to make up for the damage. The protagonist's inheritance was at least top-notch in the Nanshan Region, and the people he was fighting were also people here, and they were beaten like this, so they could only eliminate the mobs and be treated as equals. I don't know how other sword cultivators can survive. How can someone who loves swords and only has the skills of a sword cultivator survive? The realm in this book is king. Your realm is very strong, and other realms can be reached at will. It all depends on luck and fate. It is completely the halo of the protagonist. The protagonist has never had nb means, and it is not refreshing enough to watch.

It's okay if you want to write a big scene, but you have to make the protagonist have a sense of existence. After writing for so long, it's not very satisfying to reach the sixth level. All cats and dogs can interact with the protagonist. There are too many high-end combat powers in the battle. The sixth level of the protagonist feels like an ant.

Upgrading was originally slow, and he was a waste of training. He got so many opportunities and didn't add any qualifications, but added some combat power. He used three times the materials of others to build the foundation. As a result, after he came, the difficulty of upgrading became 3 times more difficult than the original one.

The quality is very high. I feel like there are almost no such good novels from Qidian nowadays.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I really can't stand it any longer... I seriously doubt that those who say the second part is good are just excuses, and only a few people say that the second part is good.

I've finished reading it. It's a pretty good book. It doesn't have a sadistic protagonist. I just like this kind of book with a bit of invincibility and not so much intrigue. Originally, I was like a bully in real life, but I still experienced the abuse of the master in the book. It's a good book, needless to say, it's better than many great and platinum books. Now I can only watch Chen Dong's fantasy.

It's very interesting. Keep writing and I'll get you a silver alliance.

If you like traditional fantasy and immortality, then this is a great book.

No new book yet, just wait and see. Immortal industry is updated too slowly, please come back quickly.