Jian Zong Outer Gate

Tied in one breath To evaluate this book, I don't think it is necessary. Just read a story that is fascinating. The setting of the plot is just right for me, because it is a long novel and it is okay to upgrade slowly. There is no rush in the book to improve one's cultivation level, destroy the enemy, or practice one's own realm and sword cultivation inheritance step by step (the "right path" Dharmakaya does not fall off at one step). In short, this is a novel with a slow pace but enough excitement I have read The Book of Strange Monsters, and his last book (I can't remember the name), The Earthly Immortal Who Conquered the World in Shu, The Talented Man in the Demon Sect, The Inner Demon, The Half-Book of the Immortal Eater, etc. I can't even remember the books related to cultivating immortals if I go back further. The change from liking happy grudges and quickly upgrading to liking being steady and practical, step by step, is not only my personal growth, but also a glimpse of the changes in online literature over the years. You have to say that the setting of this book is very novel, but not that the moves are very nice. There are many people there, but it is still a "good story" worth reading. Jian Xiu may be a manifestation of paranoia and one-mindedness in online articles, but he also has the momentum to move forward without fear of danger. There is no shortage of adjustments in the article, and the love between men and women is also highlighted. It is not as secretive or affectionate as in other books. The presentation of nothing less and nothing more made me forget myself while reading. In my opinion, the author can already rate 85 in my mind. In my mind, the best immortal novel at present, Shushan Zhenshi Dixian should be above 90, a little worse but already extraordinary. What I like very much is that the general trend of "the world's talents are like crucian carp crossing the river, and our generation is competing to conquer the world" does not let the protagonist's luck dominate the whole story (although the protagonist and the people around him still account for a large part). In my opinion, the protagonist of the novel can be an all-rounder but not a unique talent. In reality, are there talents who can learn and excel in all fields? Yes, but the so-called limited life of human beings is not enough to make them appear so "amazing". After half a year, another generation will be born. There is no way to avoid the "genius disease" caused by long lifespan in novels about cultivating immortals. I actually read novels just to see the "invincibility" of the protagonist, but fighting between dragons and tigers is interesting, and life is about winning and losing. Even though the protagonist in the book currently has no defeats in the same realm, I will not feel that it is not to my taste. I want to win with reason and gain, and win glory calmly. Occasionally Having sex because of "emotion" is an emotional adjustment, but having sex again and again is a bit ridiculous. Reality does not require logic, but the story should pay attention to the perception of plot promotion. This book is very well done. My feeling has not stopped, and it has been tied for three days. I am willing to leave some of my trivial thoughts late at night, and I can recommend it to friends who like novels about cultivating immortals. This book is not to be missed and is worth staying up late to finish.

First of all, the writing style of this book is absolutely excellent. Not to mention those who are crazy about description, but 99.5% Of the authors have no problem at all. The writing is smooth, the words are used well, and there are no common sick sentences or misuses (this is really rare). However, there are occasional typos and extra words, which do not affect the experience. It would be better if they could be reduced. In terms of plot, this book has almost no major flaws. Occasionally there are seemingly unreasonable places, which are slowly revealed and explained as the plot unfolds. The plot line is also very reasonable, and it doesn't mean that everything needs to be changed if the copy is changed. In terms of characters, the protagonist and supporting characters have their own logic and style of action. Although it is not as terrifying as the first half of Xuanjian Xianzu (to be honest, it is almost at the level of serious literature), each character has its own merits and is by no means one-sided. More importantly, the whole book takes into account the multiple expressions of handsomeness, decisive killing, cuteness, and "immortal love". The author changes the style from time to time, which really makes people want to keep reading. But it is a pity that it seems that only the right path, or the protagonist's side, can survive for a long time, and the villains still come and kill them one by one. Personally, I'm still looking forward to a more charming villain. Maybe the author can try a little bit in this area? Looking forward to the surprises later. Of course, the immortal Yuanying who is not dead may be a person (it involves spoilers, so I won't say more) Every part of the "Short Story" section is very good, but some book friends feel that even if it is used, the name must be changed, otherwise it will be a bit embarrassing to read. I don't really care about this aspect myself, but it's always helpful to list it out. Generally speaking, if you pursue traditional immortality writing, this book can be rated as 95 points, a high-quality work in the new era, haha. As soon as I thought about it, I put it down and it's done. There are no modifications. If it offends me, I hope you will forgive me. 😁 {"TopicId":"575997904079290368","TopicName":"Xianxia"}{"TopicId":"771321454850736128","TopicName":"Good book recommendation"}

Seeing that there is nothing poisonous about the fifty chapters, I hope the author will keep writing. Part-time writing is not easy, and it is not easy to get results with online writing now.

Sword Cultivator, Lao Dei's Sword Cultivator trilogy, but it's a pity that the third part is not finished.

What a great book. It has a smooth and simple beginning, calm but with an undercurrent of vitality. It is neither exaggerated nor pale. Compared with those writers who are restless and eager for quick success, it can be seen that the author is indeed thoughtful and thoughtful.

Let's talk about the conclusion first, food and grass, 8 points There is no need to elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages, it can be summarized in four words Zhongzhengpinghe

After reading the story of Crow Strange Tales, I feel that the temperament of Wandering Xiao Song (dressed for walking in the mortal world) is very similar to the temperament of this white-handed Sanjue standing painting, but maybe not as strong and the clothes will be tighter

I have read more than 50 chapters. I really like this book. Everyone has their own destiny. There are thousands of avenues, but the protagonist only occupies one. It has written an interesting world of cultivating immortals. I hope it can be maintained in the future.

This is what I want to see in the All-Star cast!

Well written, it is Benxiancao. It also incorporates the features of many masterpieces, such as the classic counter-routines in My Life Simulator, the mirror call settings in Da Bong's Watcher, and the settings of the Little Green Bottle that are now released, all of which are quite good. And the male protagonist has a very good character, he is decisive in killing and humane. I like it very much. The character of Xiao He is also very good, which adds a lot of interest in addition to cultivating immortals. The plot is also relatively smooth. Each supporting character has his or her own characteristics. They are not just smug and have their own adventures. After all, the heroes in the world are like the crucian carp crossing the river. The male protagonist cannot be the only one who is beautiful. He can let others be strong. I can do my own thing. Each has his or her own style, which is the fun of cultivating immortality. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

When mortals want to become immortals, shouldn't the focus be on cultivating immortals? Emotional scenes and women are just embellishments, shouldn't anything be fine?

It's all booked, but I haven't looked at it since. It is indeed very comfortable to read. Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book: Advantages: 1. The writing style is quite good, and the names such as flying swords and exercises have a fairy-like feel and are not rustic. The pretense is fresh and refined, and the handsomeness of the swordsman can be fully reflected. If you like swordsmanship, just watch it. 2. There are many details and foreshadowings. It can be seen that there is a relatively complete outline, and it is very exciting to read. Judging from the current situation, the narrative method of the plot line of Ancient Swordsmanship has the feeling of a fairy version of Natsume's Book of Friends, which is very fairy-like. 3. Basically, the characters who appear have their own adventures and trump cards, and they are all well portrayed. When the stars of mankind shine. Classic speech: What kind of secret method is this? 4. Some other detailed settings are also relatively realistic. For example, surrounding small sects, forces and even individuals can turn to large sects to issue tasks and commissions. Each major sect does not become stronger the longer it exists, etc. In terms of poisonous points, there are currently no major poisonous points. Let's list the possible minor poisonous points so that all book friends can avoid their own minefields: 1. The protagonist is quite special and does not follow the path of spiritual cultivation. But except for the protagonist (and the school of ancient sword cultivation), they are all normal spiritual root cultivation. I read in the comments that some readers ran away when they saw the spiritual root. Such book lovers can consider their own preferences before entering the trap. 2. Escape skills. Just like the spirit root, according to the comments replied by the author, the protagonist's lineage is not a flying sword with feet on flying swords, but basically all other monks are flying with swords (things). Those who don't like it should be careful to avoid lightning. 3. Claiming to be a new author, the plot rhythm is not well grasped. The plot of the main plot is relatively compact, but the upgrade is very slow. When I saw chapter 80, it seemed that I had only reached the sixth level of Qi refining, which was still in the middle stage. I don't know if it will get faster later. 4. Too many foreshadowings and details are sometimes not a good thing, and make people worry about whether the author can handle it. 5. The author writes too little about settings, and some conceptual things are not mentioned, which is relatively vague. 6. All the characters are well portrayed, but there is a female monk named Qin Ying. She has a bit of a role, but she is very rigid, like a paper figure. I don't know if it is intentional or what. 7. This game has the power of demon cultivators. Demon cultivators at the base level (second level) can transform. Some special monsters (descendants of great demons, with higher talents) can transform as long as they are smart. I haven't thought of the others yet, I will add them later.

There is a new person in the world of cultivating immortals... (Everyone can set the character here, including name, origin, personality, major skills, and appearance method.) (Appear when the plot is reasonable)

As for reading novels, I think it's good to spend money to support the genuine version. Otherwise, is the author just doing it for love? But I have just entered the society and made a little money, with an average monthly income of just over 3,000. In reality, I have people I love, and I also want to satisfy other material desires, so I also watch pirated copies. But in the past two years, I have also been increasing my subscriptions year by year. In the past, if I didn't recharge, it would be free, but now I recharge 1,200 to Qidian every month. I feel very good about myself, so I won't criticize the author when I encounter a novel I don't like (unless the outlook is disgusting). I haven't read this book for a long time. I still remember that when I read this book, I also wanted to find a pirated copy and I didn't feel a little guilty, because I couldn't afford to spend three to four hundred a month to read books just for pleasure, but I did make more money since last month, so I can afford more. Another point is that someone in the book review I posted said that I have never eaten any fine bran. I still feel quite uncomfortable. I always feel that I am a big rat who eats his food in the works of hard-working authors. I really like this book, Earth Immortal. I don't have much desire to read it, and the same goes for talents. In addition to cultivating immortals, I also like to read some excellent books such as Western Fantasy, Infinite Flow, Candle Day, Non-Human Gene, Warlock Manual, and Residual Blood. Player, Corpse Retrieval, Cleaner, and even earlier, One Thought Eternity, Horror Broadcast, King Spare My Life (the first time I watched it was really fun without any brains), Delicious Food (the protagonist's surname is Yuan Xiang), Special Club (it's a bit too long, and the protagonist's role is a bit small in my opinion, I don't like to watch group portraits), Sequence Player, Player Train, Weird Life Simulator (Su Wu), Huaishi, Reincarnation, Mechanic, Thriller Paradise (an unforgettable work), the early works of Skeleton Elf (watching it now is too repetitive, but I was talking about it at the time), The Great Sage of Bones (it sucked later, I don't know how it is now), Dragons (I used to love it, but now I am not interested in this kind of protagonist), The Food Truck has the Eye of the Lord (it seems to be this name, I watched it too long ago, I loved it at the time but had no money to support it)... These dozen I have read countless online novels over the years, but there are not many that leave an impression on me. I just like to read the thrilling feeling of thousands of powerful forces coming together in one body. I like to read interesting but incomprehensible settings that are too lazy to use my brain. I like to read Rui Yi En. Qiu Zong indulges in the world, and loves to watch immortals and gods. In the end, he is defeated by his opponent. I have been reading for too long. At the beginning of the Internet, fantasy was the most prosperous, followed by supernatural beings. Later, there began to be more immortality, Western fantasy, unlimited streaming, game behind-the-scenes streaming, and live streaming. Without exception, opportunities, bloodlines, magic weapons, artifacts, and rules all belong to the protagonists. Some protagonists are compassionate, some are conceited, some are really villains, and some are hypocrites. I accept them all, and I have my own judgment on the quality of the book. I gave this book 85 points, which proves that I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement. I don't give any opinions because I fully respect the author's subjective writing ideas. I hope that the protagonist develops to a point I didn't expect, or it is to promote the plot that is routine but still quite interesting. I love it. I will also express my subjective feelings from time to time. I hope the author can fully conceive the work without worrying about reality, so that I can taste the extraordinary spiritual delicacy after hard work. Finally, let me talk about one thing I don't like about this book - it just absorbs other people's sword intentions. I haven't read it for a long time and I don't know how the plot has developed now. Although I may have forgotten what the protagonist is doing, I will continue to immerse myself in appreciating the fairy world that the author has created for us without thinking. But I still look forward to the day when the protagonist realizes his own sword intentions. After being born in the society, I feel that even if I am always "picking up people's wisdom", I can still live a life that most people would envy, so it is OK if I just "collect" and then "summarize", but just like I still hope that a pure and flawless girl will fall in love with me, this unrealistic fantasy, I am also looking forward to the protagonist awakening to his own "subjectivity". Regardless of whether the outer sect of the Sword Sect wants to revive the sect with many sword intentions, or whatever, this is a slightly flawed but good book worth reading. Just like the height of a mountain rising out of the ground is far less than the depth hidden in the ground, this is a piece of jade that still shines brightly under the mottled plain skin.

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There are always more people watching the harem than those with single/no heroines. The silent ones are the majority. The more they like to shout, the more it proves that there are fewer people. If there is one person, I don't know if there are ten people in total. In short, just let nature take its course.

I am still savoring the aftertaste of the first half of the chapter, but the second half has already knocked me unconscious. Others are too watery, but you have too much practical information in one chapter. The writing is indeed wonderful, but it would be more comfortable to watch if the pace was slower.

Author, your writing is pretty good. Turn off the anti-theft and let me take a look.

Come soon, raise books. By the way, I will record all the ancient swords and ancient sword stories of Xiao Song so far. 1. [Not tied to the boat]: The natal flying sword, Zhou Zi hides the three harms. 2. [Lian Li]: Childhood sweethearts, the swordsmith died for love and recast. Because it was bound to the useless sword box, it was given to his apprentice Xiaoju 3. [Sacrifice to Linjun]: Ancient sword repair to kill evil Lin 4. [Crying Moon]: Uncle Crow, a natural sword spirit 4.5 [Mirage]: The sword pill seemed to be transformed from the dragon ball of the old mirage, and later broke and turned into the sword intention seed of Jinghua Shuiyue 5. [Shufeng]: Immortal Qin Bai Qi, the ancient sword theater is linked to Butie Zhou 6. [Jin Guiren]: The third generation clan leader Zhong Min wore a sword when he was young. For the Jiang family, his son entering the sword sect to practice is as far away as the Immortal Dynasty of the Jin Dynasty 7. [Qiu Ren]: Using the body of the foundation to refine the magic weapon, the small theater is linked to Lianli 8. [Solo laugh]: The reincarnation of the immortal. Some third-grade golden elixirs are still improving after 200 years of death 9. [Yueyuan]: Yue girl A Qing. The Fish-Dragon Bamboo Stick, the first non-sword-shaped ancient sword 10. [Tian Xia Wan Wan]: A humble creature climbs the ladder, and the fate of mortals and immortal cultivators are connected 11. [Tai'a]: The sword is naturally created, and it is currently the only ancient sword without the illusion of swordsmanship. I don't know if there will be a follow-up Yes, you can charge the Liangyi Realm independently 12. [Three Thousand Realms]: The sword cultivator Shi Zixing in the Void Refining Realm sealed the two immortal continents Penglai and Fanghu, and used the sword element to connect the sky and sea to condense the clouds and water, hiding the sword spirit of Shi Zixing There will be new updates in the future

After reading the comment section, I saw that there was no need for a heroine and that single-heroine must-reads are now still interns and let the author go, but the harem party is still insisting. It is very interesting. Whether to write a heroine depends on the author's writing skills and the market. After all, the author wants to make money to support his family, not to please some people.

Open a harem, write more emotional dramas, and have more sex

The protagonist's friends from Dongyuan Sect to Junshan are all clearly understood one by one, and from time to time he can meet old friends in other places. The Taoist companions made in other fairy novels either did not find this person later or could not keep up with the progress of the protagonist. In comparison, it feels that the protagonist has never been alone, and his sect has always had a certain sense of existence, which is quite good.

It looked very comfortable at first, as if I was really cultivating immortality. The plot is also very smooth, don't be too eunuch.

Most of the sword cultivation articles these days are about a group of practitioners holding a sword-shaped instrument, and practicing several sword techniques is called sword cultivation. This author is the second person to write purely about sword cultivation.

First of all, let me state that I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said it at the beginning, I've never been an author.

Do you have any other recommendations? A fairy grass sword repair article like this?

After catching up with the latest chapter, what is the origin of this magical power? It seems that the level of golden elixir cannot completely measure the difference in strength between monks.

The rhythm is very comfortable, the plot is rich, and the characters have a strong three-dimensional sense. 20 Monthly passes are presented to you for added value.

I feel so emotional. I have voted for it 30 times since 25 years ago. I really like this book. If you come to the book circle to look for comments, just go and browse below. They are all very good and the author is also very active.

When I saw Chapter 500, it was really a bit ambiguous. Don't make Xiao He the heroine. I see her as my sister 😢😢😢