The Red Moon Returns

Prodigal son, prodigal son, there is really no need to insist on eating this bowl of Cthulhu. And lustful, greedy, this kind of character is really outdated 😅 This kind of person who has a lustful heart but no lustful courage is worse than someone who has no lusty heart, or has a lustful courage 😅 And it is too "two", so it is better to invest in the two-dimensional sector, so that more people may be on the airwaves. The Prodigal Son is still suitable for writing Western fantasy, and the Western fantasy story system is quite good. Of course, the Western fantasy combat power system of the Prodigal Son is too 'traditional'. Extraordinary power can often be blocked by mortal metal without extraordinary enchantment 😅. As a result, the combat power system always feels chaotic, sometimes extraordinary, sometimes mortal. 😥 At the legendary level of Yalari, it is exhausting to fight those beasts without extraordinary abilities. In Sunless Moon, the opening copy was almost wiped out by the physical rules of the 'mortal' level. Spore parasitism and the like may indeed be a catastrophe according to our physical rules. But according to the extraordinary system, there is really no reason why spore parasitism should be a disaster. Your shield can't even block out spores, and the poisonous mist and the like are simply invincible. 😅 Especially since the protagonist is the favored one of the gods. If the power of the gods cannot handle a few spores, then these gods are too weak.

I have been reading the book for a few years and now I have read about 50 chapters. Let me comment. The advantage of this book is that the description of the background of the protagonist and the background of the world makes people think about it. I could write 300 chapters, just like a tadpole looking for its mother I think the disadvantage is that the logic of the protagonist and the logic of the supporting characters are always a bit out of place. It feels like pebbles in shoes make people scratch their feet. The protagonist is now in his 20s and you describe it like a fourteen or fifteen-year-old child. This makes me feel out of place with some of the supporting characters. What makes me feel that the successful description is the protagonist's negotiation with some people. This kind of stability and naughtyness, and a little bit of my own inner excess. For example, you can control your own life. This has appeared in three or four chapters. I personally think that you should describe it and then control your own life steadily instead of jumping off and losing the sense of atmosphere from time to time on the road. The heroine is described in the first 30 chapters. She is also a person in her 20s. She has been a professional for several years and gritted her teeth when she saw a minor villain. Her veins kept popping out. Okay, some of these descriptions are like newcomers who have just started working one day, which is a lot different, and the emotional drama is too fast. The 50 or so chapters in the novel about 3 days gave me the feeling that I can shake my bed. Even if you don't have so many emotional descriptions and just write something cold and cold, I think it's okay. There are so many flaws that I don't know how to complain Let's summarize it I can only give it a 3.5 Out of 5 points. The character's logic is too different It's boring to eat, but it's a pity to abandon it.

This chapter has a very big problem. The woman just said that you should believe in signs. Even if you are over-sensitive a hundred times, you can't be dull once, otherwise you will die. Then the woman said, "Is it your illusion that he glanced in this direction?" Do you think her answer makes sense?

Natalie Angel

I'm speechless. Pig's feet are always setting up flags for me. I'm obviously a weakling. All kinds of monsters and monsters are setting up flags with pig's feet next to me? Is this a time traveler? Come on, as anyone who reads novels knows that as long as the flag is not set, it will be gg in the next minute, or it will be gg after a while! Many places are very unreasonable! Various explanations are too reluctant

There is really no need to write an opening bet. The main character's purpose is to survive, not to bet. This writing is a bit putting the cart before the horse. In addition, the previous dialogue of the female police officer gave the reader a good sense, but this bet directly lowered the senses, creating a sense of tearing. The female police officer should leave directly when the protagonist still wants to investigate, because the protagonist does not listen to advice, and death is a personal act But the female police officer bets with the protagonist. According to official rules, this behavior is enough for her to take off her police uniform If the protagonist dies or is seriously injured after betting, the seriousness of the situation is not just a matter of losing her job.

I think adding a one-month countdown at the beginning is a failure. From a psychological point of view, Zhang Chi needs to be moderate. If you let the protagonist solve the five-hour countdown, it is best to design a plot that can relax the reader. Either it is to fuse a certain contained object to obtain the burning ability, or to kill the villain. This is the climax design of many books. As a result, you immediately added a one-month countdown. My evaluation is almost good. I wouldn't be able to write without a countdown, right? In my opinion, writing a book is similar to making a game. On the basis that your writing style is difficult to change, the plot design should best meet the needs of human psychology. Immerse yourself in writing regardless of the reader's psychological feedback, and don't expect the reader to give you any performance feedback.

Chapter 19: The author and I have different views

But! The problem is that the author doesn't know how to write at all, which makes it very disgusting for the readers. In the early stage, the female police officer kept causing trouble. After the trouble was done, she was like a giant baby and couldn't solve it. It was all up to the protagonist to wipe her butt. The supporting female aristocratic lady is even more outrageous. She is a completely unfamiliar person and has even been met a few times. The protagonist accompanies her to sacrifice to the evil god to save her soul, and uses his own life force to heal her. I really wanted to throw up when I saw this.

Both the title introduction and the beginning are very attractive to me, at least to my taste. But the writing skills are very poor. It really ruins everything. The description of the environment is actually okay, but the characterization is really bad (The female voice of the system, the dialogue between the protagonist and the police are really awkward)

The Prodigal Son, when are you going to write a western fantasy? I have read Yala several times and I still haven't found a meal replacement. I particularly like this kind of adventure novel, just like watching anime. Unknowingly, I was immersed in a different world. There is no need to step out of the comfort zone 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

If you must read it, I recommend giving priority to chapters 17 and 18. The protagonist "Traveler, Can Become a Chinese" passed by a British urban village, and kindly helped a beautiful little girl who was bullied by seven or eight children. As a result, they teamed up to rob the protagonist and failed. Passers-by told the protagonist that the child was a habitual offender, but he only robbed 100 yuan in a sensible manner. The protagonist, who couldn't afford anything to eat, worked hard to earn 1,000 yuan. Now comes the exciting part. The protagonist has to repay evil with kindness and return the props related to Goldfinger that the little girl dropped. At the same time, he accidentally rented the little girl's mother's house and discovered that the girl's inseparable props were in the hands of the protagonist.

Diana

Your writing is a bit bland. The protagonist's ring is always just right, and it doesn't reflect the dangers of ancient knowledge, rare objects, ancient gods, etc. How many times have you worn that ring? So powerful? Can it be removed at the last second every time? Luffy has become the Pirate King. After finishing the third gear, he switches to the fourth and fifth gears. If he doesn't have the energy, he will lock the blood in the plot and take a break before playing again. At worst, he will play a Nika later and pretend to be stupid. Anyway, if there is a hangup, just don't panic and just play. Anyway, you won't die.

Impossible. After all, there was once a person who was second only to me in appearance, both handsome men from the north and the south 🤓

It looks pretty good to me, and I don't think the main character is the Holy Mother. Let's take the noble lady and say, you just fought with someone to fight the evil god, and they risked their lives to save you. This is a life and death situation. What's wrong with trying to save others? Besides, the murmuring poem, I don't think this one is good-looking. The murmuring poem is not as good as the previous book by its author.

Can the prodigal son turn back? 😭Stop working hard in front of the wall, come back and update, I can do anything 😭 Even if it seems like this, please post an obituary 😭

Ever since I read Lord of Mysteries, Adam's sentence "All gifts given by fate have already been marked with a secret price" has been deeply imprinted in my heart, so much so that when I read other similar novels, I will unconsciously bring this sentence to the protagonist. So I am wondering what Luna's purpose is. It cannot be just a witness as she said. Will she treat the protagonist as her own resurrection container like the Goddess, and completely replace the protagonist after the protagonist collects the authority?

If you don't call, just call the police. The sins of children are the most terrible. Because there is no importance or reverence. Steal needles when you are young, steal your life when you are big.

Are there any new books 🙂

Please tell me how to join the group. Please help the children.