West 1899: Wilderness Exorcist

It's okay, although the combat power rating system doesn't satisfy me, but overall it's still above food and grass. In addition, the author is so short, I feel like I will feed him to death. If I don't recommend it, I will be killed by the Qidian mechanism.

The writing is very good and the characterization is good, but the plot is too confusing. The protagonist is completely pushed around and very passive. I haven't released my instincts for half of the time. I am still describing the hours before the explosion. You have barely beaten the monsters and you have no ammunition. You are so poor that you don't take the initiative to do something. The initiative of the time traveler is not shown at all. It is very uncomfortable to watch.

I'm just curious that you don't like America. Then why did you set the background to the United States?

Currently there are two updates per day, before 9 a. M. And before 5 p. M. The manuscripts are sufficient and the updates are stable. Welcome to join us! 🌹 The motivation for writing this book was a game called Hunt Showdown, which this year was linked to Let the Bullets Fly. The bandit wearing a fortune mask traveled through the west, hunting all kinds of monsters. Before this, I have always wanted to write about the West + Cthulhu. I like both themes very much, but there are too many gems in the front. Whether it's the movie Red Dead Redemption, the Rockstar game of the same name, or Quentin's The Hateful Eight, Django, or even domestic movies like Two Flags, they are all excellent. At sunset in the wilderness, a wanderer rides a skinny horse in the wind and sand. The road ahead is full of monsters and monsters, but he lights up a cigarette without caring, and the revolver around his waist is stained with rust. If I could write about this awesomely handsome tough guy feeling, it would really be a worthwhile endeavor for me to do this job! As for Cthulhu Xiang, he is even more like a senior. Lord of Mysteries, Whispering Psalms, Mysterious Earth Sea, Demon Hunt in the Fog City... It's almost like a great master is ahead of you! So, I have never dared to touch on this subject, for fear that I might not write it well and make people laugh. Before I started writing, I talked with the editor about the outline, the plot structure, the characters, and I played Cousin 2 again as a way of collecting stories (actually I am a game addict) 🤭 I was well prepared and wrote a lot along the outline. At least for now, I don't feel like I'm writing too much. As for how it is, it depends on whether you like it or not.

The bullets were all used up, the special weapons were scrapped, and it was just like nothing happened. There is also memory, it seems that the memory has been completely absorbed, and the memory seems to have not been absorbed at all, it is very fragmented. Reality does not need logic, and the novel has no logic, is completely mechanical, and has no sense of substitution.

I have been interested in the Western Shadow theme for a long time. Basically, I have to give it a try as long as I have some exposure to it. For authors with certain potential (@北海 Mujing), I will even ask if it is a Western Shadow theme every time I open a new book. However, the quality of the books I have found so far is very few, and the remaining ones basically cannot grasp the scale of reality and extraordinary. Either they are overly realistic and become historical novels, such as "New Gods of North America" ​​(this book is actually quite good); Although this book is just the beginning, the overall look and feel is interesting, and the reading experience is interesting. The arrangement of the protagonist's predecessor can be seen that the plot is also planned, and the subsequent development is worth looking forward to, such as gangs, duels, aborigines, canyons, train robberies, bank robberies, gold rushes, hurricanes, voodoo... Will these elements appear in the future? Let me talk about some personal expectations: 1. I hope that the characteristics of the subject can be fully utilized. Many works with similar themes are pure gimmicks, that is, the place names are changed, and even the monsters are still the same as the bad streets; 2. The author's original intention of writing about the atmosphere of the Wild West is good, but the readers are not from North America after all. While showing the characteristics of the former, the latter must also be considered. The degree of acceptance, the scale of which needs to be carefully determined by the author; 3. I hope the author can reasonably control the compatibility between the protagonist's ability and the intensity of the plot. In order to attract attention at the beginning, the protagonist is involved in a major event that is far beyond his ability. Later, there are big problems with rationality and the story collapses. I have seen too many works. In this book, the author left a hidden line of the protagonist's original undecrypted memory, which is a softer approach. I hope the author can continue to be patient. Finally, I sincerely wish this book will get better and better!

I was so tired from reading it that I wrote more than 200 chapters in the protagonist's novel in a few days. The psychological changes of the characters and the changes in the plot are quite rapid. There is no foreshadowing for the drastic changes in the protagonist's abilities. Adding a system is more like an amplifier. It would be better not to have a system.

Isn't this author the legendary bad guy?

The part about resetting the world is actually pretty good. It has a sense of mystery, but it's too fast. It should be placed in the second half of the novel. Now it's time to solve more crimes and fight monsters. It's right to jump over and start fighting the circus! The character of the protagonist is well portrayed, like Yan Shuangying. The pretentiousness looks comfortable, and the skills are cool. Whether it is a revolver or two transformations, it feels good, but there is no fighting and various side plots with different faces and faces, which is wasted. In the first few hundred chapters, we will cycle through fighting, and then we will expand the world view, come on!

Is the protagonist's first elite monster a Wendigo? If it is written according to the characteristics of hunting duel, the characteristics will be extracted after hunting. If it is more realistic, the Wendigo's most representative head can be made into a helmet with antlers. Combining the Wendigo legend and the mental illness born from it (Wendigo Psychosis), combined with the design features of hunting duel, and the optimization of bean bags, my design is a trait (Wendigo Soul Erosion) and a prop (Cold Deer Bone Helmet). Official trait entry: Wendigo Soul Erosion Trait Type: Passive Curse Aura·Mind Infection Carrying Limitation: Only carried by 1 hunter, cannot be superimposed with similar mental curse traits Exclusive bonuses in dark environment and night state Basic Effect of Trait The carrier generates a 15-meter silent curse halo around the body, with no visual effects or prompts. It only produces a progressive mental infection on all enemies in the halo. The infection progress continues to accumulate with the residence time; after leaving the halo, the infection progress decays by 10% every 2 seconds, and the decay rate doubles when returning to a safe area (bonfire, indoors). Exclusive immunity for the carrier: Completely immune to all mental alienation effects brought by one's own aura. In cold, rainy, snowy, wilderness, and dark environments, the sound of one's own footsteps is reduced by 30%, and the movement stealth is improved. Exclusive bonuses in the dark: the range is doubled, the penetration speed is accelerated, the night vision is enhanced (awakening low-light vision), the sound of footsteps in the dark is reduced and almost disappears, and those with hearing specialization can determine the approximate direction of the carrier when moving. Spiritual Marking: Those who have been active for more than 20 minutes within the scope of the trait will be marked (specifically whether to mark or not is up to the trait carrier to choose). After marking, the trait will have an exclusive influence that will last for five days, and the marked enemy will be positioned in a mystical sense by the trait carrier. The farther the distance, the more blurry the location. (Escape as much as possible, otherwise the cannibal nightmare will appear next to you) Due to the addition of myths and legends, the Wendigo's characteristics will attack humanoid creatures. The more developed the brain, the stronger the impact. Third-level mental alienation mechanism (exclusive for the infected) First-level·Cold Nightmare Invasion (30% infection progress) 1. The whole body feels a biting chill, the movement speed is reduced by 5%, and the stamina recovery rate is slowed down by 15%; 2. It falls into a state of lethargy, the aiming stability is reduced by 20%, and the breath-holding time is shortened by 25%; 3. The screen triggers a cold color filter, and when you are temporarily absent-minded and switch the perspective, there is a small chance that the ice and snow wilderness screen will be flashed, a giant elk is staring at the shadow, and there is a high probability of triggering low-frequency tinnitus, amplified heartbeat sound effects, and full mental stress. But when awake, being in a mental safe zone (around teammates, at home, after thinking you have escaped pursuit, etc.) Will slowly reduce mental erosion and restore sanity. Exclusively for those with mental markers; when sleeping, they will stand alone in the wilderness of ice and snow, and they will see giant elk. In this state, the negative effects are permanent and strengthened Note: When being explicitly hunted by the ability carrier, the psychological safety zone does not exist! ! ! Level 2·Hungry Soul Approaching (infection progress 60%) 1. Trigger the Curse of Endless Hunger, slowly losing 1 point of life per second, and the blood regeneration effect of all life supplies is reduced by 40%; 2. Insomnia symptoms appear, the afterimage of a deer-headed and human Wendigo continues to flash at the edge of the vision, and the crosshair shakes slightly uncontrollably; 3. Alienation in the dream: the Wendigo shadow in the ice field continues to approach itself, and in reality, accompanied by auditory distortion, the direction of gunshots and footsteps is misjudged. The mental safe zone will become weak, and safe areas such as home, around the campfire, and around teammates will frequently feel unsafe, especially when just waking up. Exclusive for the marked person: It feels like the Wendigo is sometimes standing behind you. After re-entering the influence of the trait carrier, your spirit will be affected. This is manifested in the fact that the environmental cognition is forced to be replaced by a cold climate and the vision is dim. The body feels cold and easily shudders. For example, in the wild environment, it is forced to be replaced by a dim environment of ice and snow (but it will not affect the position of people and objects in reality). Teammates are often recognized as enemies in the vision and miss attacks. Or in team battles, you think you are attacking an enemy but actually attacking a teammate. Level 3·Soul-Eating Frenzy (infection progress 100%) 1. The mind is completely broken, and the illusion of a complete deer-headed Wendigo in the human body is permanently present in the real field of vision, and it is believed that oneself has been alienated into a Wendigo; 2. Completely unable to hold the breath, unable to enter a resting state, the field of vision continues to shake, and there are irregular small deviations in movement; 3. Forced to turn on friendly fire damage, high-frequency active attacks Hit the friendly units around you and fall into a violent state. The melee damage is increased by 15%, but the damage received from all sources is increased by 20%; 4. This state is indirect and continuous, and the sanity judgment is constantly made. Once the judgment is negative, these three effects will continue. If the sanity judgment is positive, there will be 20 minutes to return from the third stage to the second stage. The mental safe zone is weak. If treated by a person with mental abilities, it can recover but the recovery rate is slow and requires continuous treatment. If not, the state will remain permanent (after all, it is already a quasi-psychotic state in this state) Exclusive mental mark: During these five days, three stages and three characteristics will be permanent. The psychologically determined safe zone will be usurped and deemed no longer safe, so the erosion state will not be alleviated. Trait restraint mechanism 1. Using calming props (strong) can directly clear 20% of the current infection progress and relieve symptoms of drowsiness and tinnitus (only for the first and second stages). For the third stage, it can only have a sedative effect; ineffective, it can relieve and accelerate the recovery of sanity points. 2. When attacked by a third-level alienated teammate, you can directly injure the opponent, causing the opponent to feel intense pain and forcing him to exit the berserk state, but he can only retreat to the second stage for twenty minutes. Trait Negative Price 1. The bearer cannot use any calming or mental soothing props; when he is damaged by fire, the curse aura will be temporarily ineffective for 8 seconds; Received fire damage bonus Trait adaptation scene Applicable to wilderness, cold weather, and forest maps, focusing on covert range interference, disrupting the enemy's team coordination, and triggering internal strife among the enemy. It is suitable for ambush hunters who roam around to ambush and delay the battle. Exclusive helmet prop: Cold Deer Bone Helmet Prop Type: Head Armor Binded Trait: Only wear the [Windigo Soul Erosion] trait to take effect. Wearing other traits only retains basic protection and has no special increase Positioning: Strengthening the spiritual domain, accelerating infection, amplifying third-level suppression, and increasing night capabilities Basic armor attributes - Head damage reduction: greatly reducing sniper attacks, minor headshot injuries - Durability: Higher than ordinary leather helmets, slightly head-explosion-proof - Appearance settings: Made with the skull of a moose in the North American cold zone as the main body, inlaid with dead wood, animal bones and ice-grained tanned leather, with a light blue cold mist condensing in the eye sockets. The overall desolation and mystery, with its own rotten air of ice and snow, perfectly fit the legend of the Wendigo wilderness. It has resistance and warning effects for mental attacks Exclusive passive (with Wendigo Soul Erosion, full increase) 1. Strengthening of the spiritual field 1. The original curse aura basic range +5 meters 2. Enemy infection accumulation speed , enter the first, second and third level alienation faster 3. The infection attenuation speed after leaving the aura is halved, and it is extremely difficult to get rid of the curse mark 2. Nervous reaction amplification (the carrier itself) - Improve one's own concentration, neural reaction, aiming stability, breath holding duration, and movement speed all slightly improved - The resistance to flash, tinnitus, and mental debuffs is greatly increased, and the interference of enemy mental items is reduced - Move and turn, speed up close reactions, suitable for sneak attacks in the dark 3. Exclusively enhanced in the dark After wearing the helmet, the night state is additionally superimposed: - The halo's night range is further expanded by +3 meters - Self-dark stealth is completely silenced, and there is no sound of footsteps when walking, crouching, and climbing - In the dark, the distance of the infected enemy is farther and the outline is clearer 4. The third-level alienation effect is upgraded Once the enemy enters the third-level soul-eating confusion: - The size of the illusion becomes larger, and the blocked field of vision doubles - The tinnitus and heartbeat pressure become stronger, and the screen's cold color filter becomes darker and darker - The enemy's stamina continues to decrease, and it is difficult to maintain even running and transferring 5. After hunting and marking the enemy, crush the enemy's heart symbolizing life and let the heart blood infect the helmet. The helmet will be repaired in a mystical sense (want it to be completely repaired? Then kill a few more enemies) Negative Balance 1. The helmet is afraid of fire damage. When hit at close range by torches or incendiary bombs: all amplification effects are temporarily lost, lasting for 6 seconds 2. The appearance is very recognizable, and it is easy to be recognized as a Wendigo system hunter from a distance 3. Receives fire damage bonus. Adapted gameplay With the soul-eating trait of the Wendigo, you can stay in the dark night, wander in the wilderness, and use mental suppression. You can rely on the helmet to enlarge the aura, speed up erosion, and lock the enemy's audio-visual aiming. You can hide in the darkness and harvest silently. It is extremely powerful in single combat, point control, and disrupting the rhythm of the entire team. Specific applications can be deleted.

I watched this episode when I was a kid.

The background of this book mainly uses Big Cousin 2, with slight modifications in details, such as merging West Elizabeth and New Austin, and the port of Blackwater Town is in Quaker Bay, which is closer

After reading a few chapters, the pacing and writing are okay, and it doesn't sound like a complete newcomer. The writing is also quite interesting. It should be the new account of some old man who was reincarnated and rebuilt 😎

In the early stage, the protagonist's high status and the intervention of high-level forces that are difficult to control were shown, which gave me the feeling that no matter what the protagonist does in the future, he will be led by the nose. This kind of writing method breaks down very easily. One difficulty is how the protagonist can reasonably develop until he is evenly matched when facing an enemy that far exceeds his own strength. As long as the high-level power is written stupidly, the plot will collapse, which is very difficult to balance.

It's okay, passable, but it's just not my favorite type. There are too many surprises, and the plot is too urgent. I feel that the protagonist is pushed by events, always wandering on the edge of life and death, and survives every time. It's okay once or twice, and it happens every time. It makes me feel a sense of unreality. I always feel that the author's hands controlling the plot are too obvious, and there is no natural feeling. This kind of incident chasing the protagonist's path used to be okay, but now it may be because reality itself has made people feel insecure, causing the novels they read to tend to take a steady and steady path.

When I first started reading it, I liked both the writing and the plot. Is it really interesting to start a novel that requires a price and a constraint to start a plot? It is said to be the protagonist, but he is just a puppet. Not many people like the plot to kill the plot if the mission fails.

Has the author ever considered forming a book club?🙂

The flavor seems right, but I don't know if the traffic of this theme can be sustained. .

As the nature is upgraded, the appearance will also change. Currently, it is the most basic appearance.

The protagonist and the two detectives are both infected by the so-called mutilated nobles, but they seem to be okay? And you're not in a hurry? Even if they are fine, there are still dozens or hundreds of ordinary people who are being quarantined, but the protagonist is going to fight in the jungle and help escort, and the other two don't look anxious at all, is that right?

It feels like something is wrong with the upper-level forces in the entire world right now in the book. So I am very curious about what the situation will be like in the East. In this book, after all, the author mentioned that there is a big problem in the East. At the same time, the protagonist himself is from the Qing Dynasty. Will his hometown be described in the future?

Advantages of this book: 1. The Western Phantom theme is undoubtedly a more innovative background. Most of the Western fantasy works currently written on the Internet are at the core of European mysterious culture. Your book belongs to a very small number of American mysterious cultures, so it is naturally more fresh. For decades, it has been the elves, dwarves, giant dragons, and I am tired of aesthetics no matter what. The first section of the book that impressed me was when Tesla carried an amplification device full of knobs and instruments and used special gloves to release an electromagnetic storm. It was completely different from the tired robed mage holding a staff and firing fireballs. It was very impactful and allowed readers to feel the core of two cultures at once. The difference; 2. It can be seen that the author has a lot of plans for subsequent content, such as Color of the Star, Dark Side of the Moon, Polar Cross, Gate of Allen, Roots... It is conceivable that this book will not be boring even in the later stages of writing, and it will fall into the endless repetition of changing the map without changing the content. The strange circle of literature, an author with sufficient knowledge reserve, imagination and planning ability can keep readers fresh and curious; 3. The author's design of various organizations conforms to the general impression and is well differentiated. For example, the government fully reflects the scale, size and resources. With source advantages, if you have more money, you can naturally make long bets. The quantitative advantage of directly managing ordinary people also makes it pay more attention to projects with batch, scale, controllability, and repeatability; Pinkerton Office is a purer extraordinary organization, and its core Allen Gate and founder are very mysterious. Disadvantages of this book: 1. The content of riddles is too high, and new clues appear from time to time, making it difficult to clarify the clues. All kinds of information are complicated and often only half of them are explained; 2. The background of the protagonist is too big and complicated, and it is not even possible to see what the protagonist's true power is. Just like everyone else, they all belong to the traditional upgrade style, only the protagonist seems to have wandered in from the mysterious world of resurrection, busy balancing multiple evil bosses in his body... 3. The world background is too desperate, even asking a question or taking a second look at your own base camp may cause big troubles, and frequently get involved in troubles that are far beyond the scope of your abilities. Based on the above summary of advantages and disadvantages, I personally hope that the author's new work can continue the advantages while improving the shortcomings. For example, continuing the western ghost theme, train robbery, cowboys, duels, voodoo, tornadoes, deserts, canyons, gold rush, and gangs are all interesting elements that can create a sense of picture. If used properly, they should be very attractive; On the other hand, it is recommended that the author can improve the plot and reveal settings. It is a safer way to go step by step and focus on the protagonist to steadily fight monsters and upgrade and gradually unlock higher-level content. Many readers have a stereotype of western stories as simple and crude, and they will just pull out a gun if they disagree. However, too many high-level influences are introduced too early in this book. Another point is that the character design of the protagonist can reflect some American characteristics, but after all, it is a web novel in a Chinese environment. It may be more appropriate for the protagonist to conform to the general situation of web novels. This is also one of the meanings of time travel. Finally, congratulations to the author for becoming a father during the serialization of this book. Personally, I had a daughter in 23 years. I admire the author for having the courage to make bold statements and keep updated while taking care of a newborn🐶 In short, I hope the author's next book will be more exciting and successful!

It's too stagey and too slow, the acting is too heavy, the twists are too blunt, and it's obvious that the writing is not good enough. Take the first hunt for example. The plot states that the male protagonist committed suicide before traveling back in time. After traveling back in time, he collected clues and killed the first prey. However, overall, the protagonist has not grown at all in Blackwater Town. He is sloppy and not cautious at all. According to the dark creatures crawling all over the floor, the protagonist has died countless times while collecting clues in this sloppy way. If the clues were not collected by the male protagonist, why would the original person commit suicide? The protagonist doesn't think at all. It's obvious that the first few chapters feel awkward. You can read it without thinking. If you think about it carefully, there are a lot of bugs

The writing has been pretty good recently, and I am looking forward to the next battle and the explosive update plan that the author mentioned before. It would be better if it could be restored to the previous six days.

Today, these two chapters have a relatively good amount of information, and I finally have a positive look at the content of the protagonist's hometown. I hope the author can continue to maintain his status. It would be better if he resumed three updates. Expect the guaranteed supply mentioned earlier. I also hope it will start as soon as possible.

Are you still updating today? The writing is quite good, but I feel that the update time has become late again recently. In July, there was a promise of explosive updates, so why has there been no explanation yet?

Why didn't you publish it yesterday? Could it be that you want eunuchs? 😱

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Does the author really not consider opening a fan group?

Is there still an update plan that the author mentioned before? Is it expected to resume three updates in the near future?