Mysterious Holy Spirit Fairy

Seeing that changing the map is like eating 💩. Others change the map because there is nothing to write about in the main world. What about all the things in your main world? No matter what kind of map it is, there is no foreshadowing at all.

The most annoying genius is that he made me go undercover

The cult is really a failure. It feels like the protagonist is stuck with a stick. I suggest you change it or end it as soon as possible.

Alas, I was attracted by the fresher worldview of the main world and ended up going through a long time travel. What a pity.

Originally, the writing was okay, but suddenly a new map was added, and the writing was verbose, and the cultivation level was also rising and falling. I really couldn't stand it anymore.

The main plot is very large, and there is no need for a small map. As for some standard plots involving how important "Earth" is and how it has big secrets, it is not indispensable. As for the sense of substitution, I think it mainly depends on the portrayal of the protagonist, and has nothing to do with identity or location. Although it is a fictional novel, the emotions between people are not limited by words, so why does it have to be related to the "Earth".

The current author really likes to bring in private goods. I gave this novel 90 points before the time-travel dungeon, and a maximum of 50 points after opening the dungeon. The theme of this book has been established at the beginning - modern technological cultivation, the Immortal Alliance Taoist school (the same school is more famous as "I Have "A World of Immortal Cultivation"), readers feel refreshed after reading this book. You jump directly and abruptly to a dungeon world without any foreshadowing. It is really very abrupt and without any foreshadowing. The golden finger in the early stage is just a martial arts experience to steal aura. Who knows that you can still travel through time? You don't write the plot of modern cultivation that readers want to read, in which the genius of the same generation pretends to be a cup. Instead, you jump directly to write about classical immortals. It is inevitable that this book will not do well. You are trying to sell someone else's head, isn't it? It gives people a very deep sense of separation.

I was really laughed at (I went to the Chiji comment section to recommend this book, and was mistaken for being recommended by the original author hahaha

Looking at the number of investors in other books over the same period, there were seventy or eighty people. This book is only in the single digits, and the title is not attractive enough.

It's good to get a new map💩. Can you go back quickly?

The main world is already quite grand, but the world transition in this copy is too abrupt. From the front, it looked really good. It was a book about food, grass, and fairy herbs. After changing the world, I didn't want to read it anymore.

Unlimited streaming, how many books have been ruined, short story gathering for short!

To be honest, the author's book has a good setting and writing style. The plot actually develops step by step. I have been watching it from the beginning and it is very attractive to me. However, when I saw the mysterious demon undercover, I suddenly felt a bit boring and boring. It is simple and there is no need to force this kind of plot at this time. The setting is originally to seize the time to practice. It is too abrupt and seriously inconsistent with the previous character. I originally thought that the protagonist would reject it.

I can't stand the social fight between a group of primary school students.

I opened a copy for no reason, it was smelly and long.

Sigh ❗The protagonist is six years old, and a group of elementary school students are fighting in a social circle. Sorry, I can't accept the logic.

It really shocked me. How could I only have 3,000 collections and my results were completely below the level? But I have to keep writing. I read Mortal Biography, Illustrated Book of Destruction of Luck, and Sky Survey before entering V. To be honest, my grades for these three books when I first entered V were very poor, but after writing two to three million words, my grades improved. You should also work hard and write. Even if you write too long and don't want to finish it, your grades will get better in the next book. Don't be a eunuch!

It's the same as 💩 after changing the map. Waste of money subscribing

Six years old is too embarrassing. Wouldn't it be better to be eleven or twelve years old? It just matches the advantages of a child from a family that cultivates immortality.