Heading to Hell

Disclaimer: I really want to read this book myself, but the main character has changed so much that it makes it difficult to read now. What I feel now is that the author of a character design cannot write without conceiving it for a long time. Therefore, if you have conceived it in the early stage, you can read it. In the later stage, when you are rushing to write, you will substitute your own personality into the protagonist. After his character change in the middle period, the protagonist has a bit of overlap with the "crouching dragon" (what's his name) in the protagonist group. Now there are two Crouching Dragons and one phoenix in the protagonist group. Now I don't know what kind of protagonist the author wants to write. From what he writes about the protagonist's pets and family, I feel that he wants to write a protagonist who is cold on the outside, hot on the inside, arrogant and non-mainstream, but he also wants to label the protagonist as anti-social, immoral, etc., Which leads to the separation of the characters. Moreover, as far as the plot of the novel is concerned, the secondary and popular characters have extremely low IQs. These characters will have preconceived doubts every time they see dark horses and sudden rises. This is a complete irony of the author himself and the readers in the context of the author's conception of a world where everyone is at risk of sudden death. Just imagine, in a situation where there is a time bomb around everyone, unity and prudence should be compulsory courses. After all, there are only a few people who are deviant and nonsensical. Then a lot of foreshadowing in the protagonist group has been left out for too long. For example, the life background of Wolong (forgot his name) in the group and why he wants to become a vanguard can be dealt with when he wears the idol jacket. After all, it is an important node. Then Paimon's (not) treatment is also far-fetched. You can't risk your life every day because your family expects high income. Even if the protagonist is carrying a gun, even if she really thinks so, big problems will occur sooner or later under high pressure. And regarding this issue, people who risk their lives in the secret realm often have their own pursuits and beliefs. You can say that the protagonist wants to reach the highest secret realm, you can say that Wolong wants to prove himself, you can say that Paimon simply likes the protagonist and wants to follow him. The author can definitely spend some time writing about it. So I feel that the author should really revise the writing method so that the characters can stand up. If they want to establish the characters, they should write some short narrative chapters and change the character labels. The most important thing is that the character cannot collapse and the background must be handled well. I read the book review section and basically complained about these points. I took the time to express my own thoughts, and the author's writing style is pretty good. ╯╰

It was quite evil at the beginning, but after teaming up, the protagonist lost his evil side, and the other supporting characters were not very impressive either. They were not as evil as Zhu Jue and Mu Susu, and were not as resourceful as Feng Bujue. They relied more and more on the system and had no own characteristics. Even if you rely on professional plundering fear to pretend to be a master and deceive the real master. As we all know, the master can plunder fear, but the master does not suspect that everyone is dead and there is no fear. He has been giving the master intelligence, and there is no longer the fear of ghost talk. The protagonist is not evil enough, he is just a chuunibyou who acts more radically. My preference is that if there is no female protagonist, the male protagonist must have personal charm. If there is a female protagonist, the relationship between the two must be emotional. If there are multiple female protagonists, it should not be yw or stereotyped. I really liked it before I entered the school, but the more I watched it, the more I disliked it. If there was no heroine, it would not have much impact if I deleted these female characters. If there was a heroine, these female characters are all thunderous, not to mention K and Princess Ba hugging each other, Yin and the male protagonist had no interaction after kissing, but interacted a lot with Ye, Ji had close contact with Ye, rode on the neck and played together, the protagonist was marginalized, Shiro and Nakata had a rough time, there was a master who fell in love with the protagonist but had been mentally controlled by a scumbag before, etc. I feel that Ye is handsome, rich and has a story. The women who interact with him are more like the protagonist. As for Li, he is just a tool to get through the copy. Anyway, he wants to die in the copy, haha. I hope that one day in the finale, the children of Ye Heji and Yin will take Li's relics to defeat the master Li has become, the greatest work after the giant! Generally speaking, there is no emotional drama, which is good for this book. It has eliminated some readers, but it is not interesting enough in the later period. In the later period, the protagonist gradually becomes normal, and he can run away when he sees it on the shelves, or use Ye as the protagonist, and people should avoid it. It is fun for the readers to see whether it is enough, and there is no whisper. It is a pure adventure in this genre these days. Chuunibyou should like the story, with a united team, a high-class male protagonist, a funny male protagonist, a female cosplay partner, reliable big sisters, and adventures in a weird dungeon, similar to p5, where the yellow-haired male protagonist interacts with women, the dungeon is touching and tragic, and the master is redeemed, etc., But p5 has more or less a love line. This is my first time writing a post, and I did eat history at the state banquet as a certain book u said. I will definitely not be able to bear it one day if I keep reading. It's a pity.

Next time, let's write a normal protagonist. This protagonist is so dark that he is not completely white and is uncomfortably white. I wanted to write a delicate gray but did not have the writing power, so the protagonist became a misanthropic misanthrope. But how many books does this author have without eunuchs? Can we still see the next work🤔

I know this is not a wolf spider, but if Meow Meow is like this, it is not impossible 🙂

Very good book. The shortcomings are that the character of the protagonist is a little broken or contradictory. Sometimes he is so unlikable that in Qingming Baoer's own words, he makes me sick when I watch it. The transition plot and connection are too bland and watery. Then the feeling of shounen manga became more and more heavy. However, the shortcomings do not hide the good points, and overall it is quite good. The script has a good story and literary quality. From this perspective, I think it is enough to crush the rankings. It's just that the market doesn't seem to like it very much. Anyway, I finished reading it with great enthusiasm. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update. Great book.

The look and feel before the first two dungeons was quite passable, and the personal design and plot content were quite consistent. However, after the second dungeon, the character design deviated, and the reason for the change cannot be seen. Could it be the influence of the second dungeon? I think it shouldn't be the case. Based on the comparison of the development of the protagonist's character and the plot, it is obvious that the connection is not consistent, and the only change is the author's writing style. Is the entry into the academy really just a bunch of fluff, using the perspectives of other characters to set off the protagonist, making readers think that the protagonist's strength has increased accordingly? I don't know if the author is confusing himself or trying to confuse his stomach? The most I can do is deceive myself. I can save myself from writing a few dungeons, but it can basically be seen that the difficulty division of dungeons has been broken. How about skipping level 2 to level 5? The difficulty level conversion is risky, but it can be avoided if you are a normal person. It's just that the nodes of the level need to be met on a whim to complete? This is just a way to give things to the protagonist. I can only say that the content of the first two dungeons is there, but the plot transition is abrupt and there is no foreshadowing. For example, the clearance node of the first dungeon does not show the content of the school regulations, so the answer is directly obtained, that is, the question is given based on the answer. If you write it yourself, you will definitely know what the answer is, and readers will be confused when they read it. The second dungeon was a little better. The content of the diary was used to pave the way for the second burst of the dungeon. However, the supposedly normal dungeon was ruined by the emotional connection shown in this dungeon. The protagonist's previous character setting was empathic with an unrelated person? And a cheerful big boy? Does this hint at the twisted opposition of your protagonist? The academy does start to feel a little more cheerful, but with these character labels (self-centered/secondary, cheerful, empathic?), You might as well not lay out so many character settings for the protagonist from the beginning. Starting from the academy, the content that should be condensed is not condensed. In fact, it is just water. This undoubtedly consumes the readers' patience. After reading half of it, I didn't see any connection between the content and the title of the book, it was just a gimmick. I deceived you at the beginning, and started to trick you in the middle. The content written at the end was written out after I thought of it, without thinking about it or thinking about whether the content is properly connected.

This book is like a parachute on the back of a heifer—it's so awesome that it's flying all over the place

You can say that this book as a whole is like a semi-finished product, but the chapters are very complete, the content is exciting, the emotions are well laid out, the characters are vivid, and each story is evocative after reading it. It is really good. I don't know if I will see this book reset in my lifetime. There are too many stories that I expected to happen that did not happen. This is my biggest regret.

As a book that can arouse my effective emotions, it is great! ! !

I read a few books on Mushrooms before and found out that you stopped writing books later to look for inspiration. I started reading this book and then I looked back and found that it was actually written by you. It's very interesting. Keep going. Recommended for both new and old readers.

Although it is a pity that the story is short, it is also a trip that leaves no regrets. (Ps: Is there any extra story? Still a little bit unfinished)

Good looking(*^@^*)

A very interesting novel, the protagonist has a very interesting character

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First of all, I would like to support you first. If I hadn't watched The Magic of Mushrooms, I probably wouldn't be at Peking University now 😃

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I don't know what you are thinking, I can't even contact you, what I know is that 452 days, 12 hours and 9 minutes, you are back

Last month, I read the latest chapter of Xie Bin and liked it. Now I am no longer ordering. Looking back, I think it's because the author wanted to create a supporting role with a clear image, but he didn't have the ability. However, I have doubts here because the author's early writing was really good. I strongly suspect that the author either doesn't want to use his brain to conceive of the plot and just writes casually to cheat money, or he is just trying to purify the fans. It seems that there are more and more purified online writers now. Is it true that the more pure readers will make more money than the more people who follow them? Don't quite understand. You can probably guess that what the author wants to write about is that each of the vanguard soldiers has their own persistence and ideals, and the decisions they make have their own reasons and considerations. Xu also wants to write about a very charismatic brainwashing oblique leader, with superb acting skills and superb speaking skills. His IQ may not be that high but he is extremely proficient in human nature, a villain like the Moon Worshiping Leader, but everything fell apart at the first stroke of writing. The character design created in the early stage collapsed, and the logic was completely inconsistent. K was a social (drunk) experienced high-IQ elite character, the ultimate genius who came out of a poor area, and the naive master. As a result, two people were eliminated by one person. A group of fanatics came out of nowhere to take control. They were highly praised in the early stage. Thanks to this fall, Xie Binren scored more than 90 points in the top grade. It was a rare year in the draft and the number two overall pick. It was quite as cool as 5t5 Yun Danfeng said "I will win". What is more concerning is the selection, selection and selection. None of the top elite academy soldiers screened out by artificial intelligence, AI, and layer by layer have been written well. They are all just to relieve sorrow. Four classic turtles, a double-standard "warm man" whose muscles have squeezed out his brain, and classics The sorrow caused by love and hatred makes the Holy Mother seem less shitty in comparison, and the two little days are still a bit interesting. However, this whole section, a large section of the plot completely collapsed, which I absolutely cannot accept as a follow-up subscriber. I paid the damn money, and you are going to serve me a plate of this? That's not to say that the protagonist group can't be deflated. The deflated protagonist group is gone, so how can others be deflated? The Dragon Balls, the demon from a hundred years ago - Piccolo, the alien from outside - the Saiyans, and the emperor of the universe - Frieza. The hunter, the grower eager to taste the fruits - Hisoka, the drunken gang whose human power rivals natural disasters - the brigade, and the escapees from the dark continent - ants. JOJO, Dio, the savior of vampires and villains, Kaz, the perfect creature who stops thinking, and Yoshikage Kira, the demon who just wants to be an ordinary office worker. Which of these villains makes people feel like Xie Bin when they defeat the protagonists? It will only make people exclaim, "What a wonderful plot." Look at our abstract villain, Brother Shit, who has been indulging in fantasies for more than ten years and squatting at home, but he still gets involved with his own body. Didn't he even let out a single fart? My beautiful mother, Pu Xin xxn, who is addicted to copper and suffers from mania, maybe you can add a full-fledged professional character with a lock and a shenghai. Betting on dogs to relieve sorrow, on the surface it is because of love and hatred, but in fact it is a coward. When the mysterious organization of deus ex machina takes action, it directly transforms into the organization's hook. They don't even give you a cent of commission, so you just trap your teammates. Teammates: "You have to scream when playing games." Play, I'll play with you, Minos! !!" It's not over yet, and the most abstract character of Diagonal Xu is not written at all. Who can be brainwashed by a leader who is so obviously selfish and very straightforward? Which great Shabo Yi can be followed? How could this be the reincarnation of a succubus? Are you completely seduced and obsessed with just one look? Or is it the projection of an evil god, with everyone subconsciously trusting her and eager to follow her? Actually, saying so much seems to make me a little excited, but the author did not write so abstractly from the beginning. The first copy and Mr. Sea Urchin Head are both written very well. Sea Urchin Head, I would like to call it the villain goat of this book, has full-featured characters. The image stands up, and the plot of the entire copy is also exciting. There are no Xie Binren supporting characters. There are small flaws, but the overall flaws are not concealed. I was deceived and bored. I thought, "This is the free version, and you can't go to heaven after spending money?" But I actually spent money and started to enjoy Akaashi directly. I can only guess that either the author's second personality woke up after it was released, and just sit down! Kaila! Either the author has started to refine it. No matter what the reason is, I will not order it again. The previous follow-up order should be regarded as giving it to Teacher Sea Urchin Head.

Ji Xiaoxiang

Suitable for the second grade of junior high school, everyone at this age can enjoy watching Yilin.

As far as this goes, I'm not too interested in debating with others. I mainly want to tell authors that those who really subscribe to your books, post positive and meaningless comments, or even don't post comments are the majority who like it. Write well and strive for 2 million.

Genius, the author is really a genius. I had read this book several times, but whether it was the explosive cover or the extremely addictive beginning, I lost the desire to read it. When I was bored a few days ago, I came across this book again. I didn't have any expectations at first, but I glanced at it casually. It was full of high energy, without any water, and the plots were interlocking. The author's description of the characters is also top-notch. There are more than 40 students in a classroom, and just a few chapters can give people a deep impression of the images of more than ten people. And it's cool to watch the protagonist act so natural and cool. The plot becomes more shocking as it goes on, and each copy can deeply remember several characters. It's a pity that such a wonderful novel still didn't make the list, and the author couldn't make much money. In the end, it ended hastily as a matter of course.

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I feel that the plot of the later stage is not worthy of this world view and setting. . It's so uncomfortable. It's obvious that such a meticulous world view was carefully thought out, but the plot is completely in vain. Like an identity jacket, in addition to the "guides, outposts, prisoners, idols" of the protagonist group, they still have a sense of existence. What about the other "monsters" and "masters"? The two women came out behind to make soy sauce, and what about the "scholars" like Shen Jian? My mother, I don't even deserve soy sauce. I don't know what the secret power is or what the ranks are! I don't even know the finale! To be honest, these should have been written when the author designed the outline, but they were not mentioned in the novel until the finale, and I didn't know what to say. I really think that after the forest and before the variety show, I need to hold back a few more copies to improve the world view and characters, so that this book can be considered complete. Even if I take a day off to hold it back for a while? Although there is a lot of information in the back and the plot logic is complete, it is really too jumpy.

I'm a bit confused. Nowadays, if the main character is not mentally ill, why can't he write an article about weird stories nowadays? After reading many articles, the author insists on writing that the protagonist is more or less mentally ill.

The draft is meant to be refined for the readers of this book 😂

I couldn't even make it through the first chapter. From a bystander's perspective, I couldn't understand the protagonist nor his classmates. Since you know this is possible, why not isolate yourself? There is no way to force the protagonist to leave through rules, so you can just leave by yourself. If you have to wait for death on the spot, the protagonist's second-rate behavior is even more incomprehensible and cannot be brought into play.

According to data released by authoritative departments, 6.7 Million words of this book have been saved, and the decision to publish the book will be made only after the daily average of 5,000 words has stabilized, so you can read it with confidence. Also: watch the monkeys in a civilized manner and please do not feed them.                                          ----

Li Qingming

If this doesn't work or that doesn't work, just find fault. Is there any book that 100% people will like? So many people are watching Secret, why haven't I watched it? Do I have to find fault with Mystery too? The mushroom style is like this. It has been like this from the beginning. Just be gentle with your mouth. If you spray the eunuch, will you write it for me? Do you know how long I've been waiting for this toilet reading? Do you know how important it is for a frequently constipated patient to read a humorous toilet reading for two minutes when he can't poop? Decisive killing? That kind of plot is something I never thought could be written by Mushroom. What do you mean the protagonist's character design is not good, he is crazy, and he wants to be seen as a normal person. Then you really haven't read any books about mushrooms. His protagonist has always been so unique. Writing about normal people encountering this kind of situation in the book, it is boring to upgrade and fight monsters, and intrigues. Don't you get tired of it? It can only be said that individuals have their own personal aesthetics. If you can't get it, is it not necessarily a problem with the book? After all, fun is not just about being cool, it is also humorous and touching. I think Mushroom's innocent writing is very good.