Do Agents Even Have to Do This?

These few chapters are still not enough to read, they still feel short and weak, just for this purpose, as long as the plot does not collapse, everything is done 😏

Agent Diary 2021/2/6 (updated date) 2021/2/2 Sunny (Chapter 1-2) It's hard to give up on natural beauty, because I'm so handsome I almost became a social insect Watching the teacher sitting lonely on the shore recalling the past In the past, I was thinking that if I could become a front-line agent, I would definitely fulfill my teacher's unfinished ambition. In the blink of an eye, the mission is right in front of me. This is my only chance in this life. I will inherit the code name of the sea monster and rebuild the glory of the sea monster. It is our duty! ps: The smell is too strong on the first day, so take advantage of the opportunity to make jokes while the Bible has not yet applied for a patent 2021/2/3 Sunny Touched (I'll talk about it tomorrow) 2021/2/4 Sunny Touched (I'll talk about it tomorrow) 2021/2/5 Sunny Unlimited firepower (Touched) 2021/2/6 Still sunny I won't touch it tomorrow! (Seriously) PS: This is not a touch, but a tribute! (Serious face)

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At first, I liked cross-border leisure products stores and Xinggongchang. Every story in them gave me a shock that made my hair stand on end. Then I came into contact with Gu Aotian and Xue Mo, so I laughed so much every day in those days, and even fell in love with learning - although it was short-lived - Mushrooms, a person's soul will be polished and changed, but the most original thing will not disappear. Talent will accumulate, your writing will become better, but your heart will become more tired, but don't doubt yourself because of this. If you are tired, you might as well think about yourself when you were high-spirited and hopeful. Then you will know what you should do and what is holding you back. Like you, I am a person trapped in myself. But I found that as I tried to inspire you, I also gained the courage to break free from my own constraints. I finally decided to move towards the future I wanted. Mushroom, it is my dream to become an author who masters joy and philosophy, and each book has a different style, but you are already about to realize it. Thank you for the laughter, beauty, and your books that have accompanied me. And I want to see more of your joys, sorrows and dreams in your future books. Regardless of laziness or diligence, sadness or stupidity, depression or fantasy... We are artists, a country of dreams, a snowy moon and a mirror, and a moment. However, we live forever because of our works. Paper is short and love is long, and there are too many ripples in the story. I wish you well and wish you all the best.

"What is the mission this time?" The young agent codenamed Demon King took the note from the old man's hand and asked casually. "A long-term lurking." The old man scratched his nose and winked, "It's very long... If you don't want to, you can refuse. The organization won't blame you. You have given enough." The devil shook his head: "As long as the organization needs it, I can do anything." "The content is: What?" "You know, Demon King." The old man did not answer the young agent's question directly, but turned to look at the undulating sponge. "Many agents have always believed that they are a sharp knife, a sharp knife, or a spear that pierces the enemy's heart." "But no one will let a knife get close. Therefore, there is a group of agents who do not make swords. They become shields and scabbards to protect the sword. " "You know, when a person enters their core, he must be scrutinized. A person without a past must face constant suspicion and vigilance." "And. An ordinary family, an ordinary past with traces and real existence, can add a lot of reality." "I want you to put down your pride as an agent and become a stepping stone for our future." "I want you to become an ordinary person." The young man looked stunned. He is still young. He is only in his early twenties, he still has great youth and future, he has superior intelligence, extraordinary skills, and his agent assessment scores have always been among the best... Why did such a task fall on him? The old man seemed to have noticed his doubts and sighed: "The best knife needs the best scabbard." "The knife in the future will penetrate into the most secret, core and dangerous position of Dongchu." "His scabbard must be indestructible and cannot be used day after day. In daily ordinary life, we must not show off our edges and corners, let alone show the blade in front of our eyes." "Do you understand?" "... I understand." The young man breathed out lightly, as if he had put something down and picked something up. A smile appeared on his face: "I will become the best scabbard." "So, teacher, do you have any other teachings for the last farewell?" The old man's hand shook. "The scabbard lies in Zangfeng. The more ordinary and ordinary the appearance, the better it can fulfill this mission... My suggestion..." The old man was silent for a long time. "If you live a humble enough life, no one will believe that you have shined." "People will peek into the treasure chest, be curious about the box, and even lift up a piece of cloth to take a look." "But no one will open up the cow dung to see what is hidden inside. " The young man was stunned, thought for a long time, and then laughed: "That's it, I thought you really had bronchitis, teacher." "You kid!" The old man raised his cane as if to hit him, but the young man quickly avoided it and turned around and ran towards the boat. "Don't worry! Teacher Mo! I will become a man like you!"

It is recommended to continue writing about running for president from scratch. Writing this with Agawa's 4 years of experience will definitely not be short of merit and audience. Maybe it can be a success, and there is no need to think about the setting.

To say it was poorly written would not be called it, in fact it was quite interesting to watch. But the problems that mushrooms feel can actually be felt by me. The first is the character design, which to a certain extent combines the male and female protagonists of the previous book with certain modifications. For example, the female protagonist has become softer and the male protagonist has become handsome. There's nothing wrong with that. However, their progress seems to be too fast. Within a few chapters, the author has already decided that they fell in love at first sight. The arrogant one no longer has the arrogance, only the coquettish one remains. Too fast. Then there is the plot. The men's ethics course I saw today accounts for 50% of the score. I can understand that this is meant to be funny, even Du Gong often uses this joke to make people laugh. But they want to fall in love. When you are in a relationship, it would be too disgraceful if someone says "You are not a man" from time to time. Finally, there is the world view. From the point of view of agents falling in love and saving the world, it should be a relatively relaxed and fairy tale-like world view. To be honest, in the books written by Mushroom, although society is often simplified, they are all relatively realistic at the beginning. Li Zheng's study, Lu So-and-so's company went bankrupt, So-and-so opened a B&B, So-and-so ran for president, etc., All started with reality as the entry point and slowly became romanticized. Even later, there were still many interesting and realistic plots. As Mushroom himself said, this may be too comic. Of course, none of the above is actually a problem. The characters need to be shaped, the plot needs to be developed, and the worldview needs time to be understood. But there was no chance. I saw Mushroom saying that I wanted readers to criticize you, so I expressed this feeling. But in fact, just these dozen chapters, I have a shitty impression!

I felt something was wrong at the beginning of the book Mushroom, which was similar to the feeling at the beginning of "What to Do If You're Too Popular". All in all, Mushroom's book is basically a good book if it starts well and stays interesting and naughty but reasonable. If by the time the second grade is greater than the core... Well, this book will almost collapse. Keep up the good work, come on!

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: Mushroom's character design is relatively delicate, and the overall atmosphere is pleasant and relaxed, which makes it very comfortable to read. Let's talk about this book. When I saw the protagonist being surrounded by three "unable to see through", I suddenly felt like I was looking at Kusuo Saiki, and I invested in it at that time. The author said that this book is more like a comic than a novel. I agree, but I think it's okay. This is the characteristic and selling point of Mushroom's book. It is obviously a good experience to be able to feel the feeling of reading comics in the text. The author said that he could not think of any interesting developments. I will not elaborate on this point, because it may be really difficult for someone else to understand that feeling. Combined with the previous point "like a comic", I have an immature suggestion, how about continuing it as a comic. In just a dozen chapters, I have already seen the shadows of Qi Shen, Bi Lan, Kaguya, and Xue Mo. These can all be unfolded in a warm and daily way. Making the novel into a unit drama form can also be a way out. Now the only thing that is missing from the unfolding of the story is a community of interests like the student union, diving club, and everything-in-one house that binds the main characters together, and lacks such a platform for unfolding.                                                                                                                                                                                               should be similar to Gintama, and produce some passionate mid-length novels, balancing the length of daily life and the main plot. This story is not without the potential to become a masterpiece. Having said so much, it's a pity that there are none. I'll see you next time.

Good guy, Dog Mushroom must have some manuscripts.

It has been written for more than ten chapters, and the interest is obvious to all, so there is no need to mention it more, but I personally feel that the biggest problem on the surface is... The big goal set at the beginning is too easy to reach, and it is incredibly smooth. For more than a dozen chapters, the two parties basically fell in love at first sight, and then followed the route of "we pretended to be a couple, but we are each other's ideal lover", which just barely opened up a misunderstanding... It's impossible to rely on this misunderstanding for hundreds of chapters, right? There is also a problem in pushing the emotional line to reveal one's feelings within dozens of chapters. ... At the beginning, more than two chapters are used to exaggerate the importance of the protagonist's goal, as if he has been preparing for this goal all his life. At this time, switching to other goals will be very blunt... So blunt that it will explode. The method of writing online articles is to determine the big goal, then break it down into small goals, and complete them step by step. Even if the focus is on daily life, there is still a clear main line, so that when the inspiration collapses, it will be finished if the daily life cannot be pushed away. There is something deeper and more important. Mushroom has written fantasy novels twice, once with the Western Fantasy novel, and once with this one, but both were abandoned. There is a big problem, regarding the characters: The thickness of the character design is completely insufficient... It is just a cute character, without adding effective background settings to the characters that can trigger the plot, and it is not enough to run through the whole text. Generally speaking, there are two approaches to online fantasy novels: One is the setting-driven type. Generally speaking, the typical model is promoted by upgrading, constantly changing the map, and only keeping the personality of the main characters throughout the entire text. Typical examples include Xiao Yan, Yao Lao, and Xun'er throughout the text. Most of the others are functional characters in specific scenes. The advantage of doing this is that when conceiving the full text, you don't need to conceive too much about the characters. Only the clues of the main characters are determined. The rest are all created by the formula of "project establishment, questioning, slap in the face, and shock", which is enough to run through the logic of the whole text. The main selling points are the novelty of the settings, the familiarity and utilization of the routines, etc. The disadvantage is that if there are too few characters throughout the text, the emotional logic (not love) will be difficult to establish, and it will appear relatively naive. The second is the character-driven type, typically like Jiang Ye, which sets up backgrounds, personalities, world settings, and emotional contexts for dozens of characters, and allows them to be connected to the fate of the world. The advantage is that the characters are clear and impressive, but the disadvantage is that you basically have to figure out the plot of the full text quite clearly when imagining it, which is very difficult... Mushroom seems to want to choose the second option, and the characters who appear at the beginning seem to want to be kept until later... But it is obvious that they want to follow the path of light novels, do not want to have bitter hatred, and do not want to make up the connections between the main characters at the beginning that are related to the fate of the world. Suitable character clues... This route seems to be relatively successful only in "Senior Brother Wenhuan"... But Gou Sheng's book also has a considerable degree of setting promotion... After all, it is a prehistoric fan. A large number of character lines are known, a large number of plot processes are known, and the goal of the prehistoric catastrophe is also very clear. The thin characters are bound through sects, and they can also advance the plot by participating in known and familiar processes. And even if it's a light comedy, the foreshadowing of Master Gou Sheng's failure to become an immortal was laid from the beginning, and it took a long time to unravel it. Let's talk about a similar light comedy "Abnormal Creatures". This one is even more obvious. The characters at the beginning are full of foreshadowing, and the set of big eyes is almost as thick as the sky... Of course, most novels are set-driven and character-driven in parallel, more or less. But if you want the characters to permeate the whole text, you must have a background setting such as a "bloody life experience and a bitter and bitter background". After all, this is not an urban novel. Characters with a weak background in urban novels can be promoted by easy career lines and do not need to be related to the fate of the world. Since I want to stand up (not to pass the trial or to force the world to entertain), and it has nothing to do with the fate of the world, why should I stand up? ? ? ? ? This is not only a question of whether the world setting is meaningful, but also how the plot should go after it is meaningless. It is difficult to figure out the clues. Of course, the characters that appear at the beginning of Mushroom, such as Jingjing, Ye Feizhai, Seventh Princess, Jiang Zhenzhi, etc., Seem to have some background settings... The question is, even if there are, what does these background settings have to do with the protagonist's goal? Have they formed a community of destiny? Don't casually substitute urban writing methods into fantasy novels.

Ah, what a fast knife, I realized

I watched Spy House + Miss Kaguya, and I had a lot of fun watching it. Why is it gone?

You guys, don't always bring in the characters from the previous book in the book review section. Jing Jing is Jing Jing, and Dian Yu is Dian Yu. You always mix the two characters together, which will trouble the author very much! !

Hey guys, it's gone before I even start watching?

I accidentally thought of mushrooms. I looked back and thought, oh, a new book is here. I looked again and realized that this knife is really fast.

Hey, I'm so angry that I can't vote monthly, give me an update quickly!

It is reported that 30 million words of the new book have been deposited.

I haven't even started watching yet. . . I wanted to save up some to watch together, but then suddenly the eunuch

In fact, it was okay, it was cut quickly and no one suffered any pain. Just read a short story. I suggest writing a few more chapters and giving you the finale directly.

Mushroom feels a little lost I haven't really finished reading much, only about financial aspects Electricity and learning magic just now But I subconsciously realize that Mushroom should be good at official literature Through his own ability, prove his own value, get greater rights, The idea of practicing oneself is a constant theme Emotional drama is just a break during the period. Although everyone is making fun of emotional drama, it basically acts as a lubricant The three books I read before were all about infrastructure They are energy + water conservancy, scientific research + education, and finance + business Would you like to get involved in other fields?

? ? ? I said he would kill me no matter what. I knew he would die, but I didn't expect it to be so soon. This time I almost wanted to kill myself. Everyone, the mountains are high and the road is far, we are destined to meet again. I continued to lurk.

Due to work adjustments, I haven't clicked on the starting point for a while, so I went online to read it in one go today. Maybe it's the fan filter effect, but I'm quite happy watching it. Maybe it's because I'm used to reading "comic-style" novels? Reality is too depressing, so novels are just for fun. In short, wait for the mushroom to open again.

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Seriously, Mushroom, you'd better not imagine a new world view out of thin air. It's good to use something that exists in reality or a more classic world. For example, Zhengzheng Jingjing in the previous book, along the way, you fight monsters and upgrade according to the education system and the Olympiad system. Now, in the Eastern Chu Kingdom, you need to create a new upgrade line and world line. If you open a new book without even thinking about this, you will definitely not be able to write it later, right? 😥😥😥What a beautiful book. It suddenly disappeared. Where is your home and I can send you a blade? 😡😡😡Good luck with the next book! I will keep chasing you!

It's broken. I finished reading it and found that I couldn't invest in it within ten minutes.

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