The Abandoned Cultivator Returns Home to Farm and Sing

First of all, let me say that I have only read three chapters and I feel that it is pretty good. At least the sentences are smooth and there are no typos. In fact, I feel that the writing style is not bad. I personally like to read rural pastoral novels, but there are not many books on the bookshelf that I can read. So I would like to make a few suggestions and hope that this book can thrive and be enjoyed by me. The first thing to do when making money is to have a certain amount of money. Rural areas with money are pure land, and rural areas without money are pure land. Money is still very important. Personally, I think the most important thing is to use cheats to open up a stable source of funds. It is best to break away from cheats and still not be affected. This can free the protagonist from busy work and enjoy life. Don't be obsessed with making money, wishing you could be the richest man in the world, and reading about farming is probably just to see how much money you can make. Secondly, do not use the Virgin Mary. Many authors themselves are not aware of this. To put it simply, the protagonist can provide a channel for friends and villagers to make money, but remember that it is just a channel and not a direct gift of money! No matter how rich we are, we cannot be fools. The third pet is limited. There are only a few selling points in farming articles. Many authors like to add smart and rare animals when they have nothing to write about. But don't make your home feel like a zoo. The fourth trivial matter in life, rural novels are not about conquering other worlds, there are not so many fights and killings, they are basically trivial and ordinary things. As the protagonist is lucky enough to often encounter special situations, it is normal, but as a realistic novel, if special events are encountered continuously (to create excitement), it will feel nonsense. In cultivation novels, it is normal to encounter special situations in each chapter, but this rule does not apply in native novels. Slow down the pace and intersperse daily stories to reduce the sense of violation of special events. The Fifth Weird Relative, please write less about this. Although everyone has shortcomings, in the world of novels, no one's eyes can tolerate a grain of sand. Although the novel is more realistic, it certainly cannot copy reality. Write less nonsense, and don't play around with character reversals of abandoning evil and doing good. Sixth, most of us read local literature to relax our body and mind, and to imagine in novels a life that we cannot live in reality. Children's education, adult work, and medical care for the elderly all force us to stay in the city. We can only yearn for rural life through videos and novels. Of course, the rural countryside in reality is not very fun, and it can get boring if you stay there for a long time, so I like the author to make it more interesting. When Aldehyde writes novels, he often alternates between urban and rural areas to adjust the rhythm appropriately. Let me talk about some novels of the same type that I like. "Carrying a Fountain with You" ranks first in my opinion without any shortcomings. "The Mysterious Island" is too hands-on. "Robinson Crusoe" is a world-famous novel. "Mountain Pasture" is good except for feelings and occasional misconceptions. "Little Rich Peasant in the Mountain Valley" also has emotional problems. Many places are unreasonable, but I really like the leisurely and comfortable flavor. The 500,000-word "Forest of Two" is almost daily life and is more readable than the 2 million words of an ordinary novel. If you want to write about food, you can seriously read this book. However, this book has a lot of noodles, the taste is sweet, and there are very few spicy ones. Moreover, it is difficult for me to accept that the stewed meat is not boiled to remove the fishy smell! ! ! She only eats a little bit every day due to physical exertion. This is the limitation of a female author! ! ! If the author has time, he can play "Dream Garden" and "Dream Home", and directly download the cheat version. It is too difficult and will force you to spend money, but the garden inside is really beautiful. I guess 99% of people want to have a home like that, with fountains, trees, ponds, swings, and bonfire camps. The land and fishing hut are simply perfect. I hope it can provide some ideas to the author. The other thing is the game Stardew Valley. If you don't have time to play it, just watch the short video. As the top three players in the farming game, it's really fun. Even if it doesn't help writing novels, it won't be a waste of time. If you are interested in the old house renovation video, you can also check it out. Rural houses actually have many shortcomings, especially bathrooms and kitchens. If the protagonist is rich, he can still improve his living conditions. Don't still use dry toilets when he is rich. I can't guarantee whether the wilderness construction video will be helpful in writing novels, but it's definitely fun to watch. Provide some keywords for the author to broaden his thinking, apples, cherries, pears, plums, plums and apricots, various vegetables, flowers, wild peaches, herbs, lotus root, wild lily, honeysuckle, crab, eel, loach, snail, water bird, river shrimp, wild boar, pheasant, turtledove, cuckoo, home Swallow, owl, wasp, honey, raspberry, wild strawberry, pecan, wild grape, birch sap, maple syrup, matsutake, Hericium, fungus, shiitake mushroom, sheep bacilli, pine fungus, bamboo shoots, wild onion, wild garlic, toon, tangerine root and other wild vegetables, pickles, bacon, fish Ponds, vegetable fields, gardens, greenhouses, reservoirs, septic tanks, cellars, wine cellars, wells, spring firewood sheds, tool rooms, utility rooms, livestock sheds, chicken and duck pens, cat houses, kennels, power distribution rooms, hydroelectric power generation, wind power generation (household use), building houses, foundations, sewage drainage, Decoration, fire pit, fireplace, green tiles and white walls, modern decoration, modern bathroom, grape trellis, pavilion, stonemason, carpenter, bricklayer, bamboo fencer, hunting, trap, dog training, eagle cooker, crossbow, hunting cabin, shack, lookout, camping, bonfire, hot spring, snow mountain. Slightly changing the background may not necessarily completely refer to reality, as that would make it impossible to write a lot of things. Dog training base, this is an idea that I personally think is very suitable for rural pastoral novels. Many novels contain ways to unlock intelligence for animals, so training new dog breeds is very suitable, solving economic problems, and driving other villagers and friends to get rich. Military dogs, police dogs, search and rescue dogs, drug detection dogs, guide dogs, hunting dogs, fighting dogs, shepherd dogs, guard dogs, ornamental dogs. There is a lot to be done, there are so many things to write about, I hope an author will write about it. It feels like the more I talk about it, the more confusing it becomes. Anyway, I hope this book can be written well. I feel that the first three chapters are of good quality. I wish this book will sell well and become a god! ! ! ! For the sake of typing 1,800 words by hand on a mobile phone, please don't comment if your suggestions are wrong or inappropriate for the context of this book. Thank you.

After looking at it... This is a bit ridiculous... High spiritual roots are supposed to lead to fast cultivation, but what about physical constitution? This is the first time I heard that people with advanced spiritual roots will not be able to cultivate immortality due to physical problems... Is there any marrow cleansing pill or something like that in the world of immortality? Your sister can control time... If the spiritual root is bound to the soul, if it doesn't work, I will change my body... Besides, after seeing the splendor of the world of immortality, I really just farm honestly, I also admire it...

Have you recently gotten into trouble with this overseas luxury urban business war plot? The whole story is full of this stuff... Deviating from the central theme...

It's too niche, too many dialects are added, and you can't bring it in. I'd like to give the author a suggestion. If you write a novel just to make your people feel involved, then it's no problem. If you want to make people across the country feel included, it's best to reduce the dialects.

Another good thing is that the spoken dialect is written down, and then there are a lot of understanding brothers who accuse others of not being able to understand Chinese language. I feel tired and gave up after reading dozens of chapters. After writing this, many great people from high places will scold me 🙂

Look at these sharp eyes 😁

I don't know what, but I don't like this character. He's all giggling, but I don't see the stability.

The spiritual roots of civil engineering will not be wasted moving bricks at the construction site.

When I read Chapter 7, my girlfriend showed up. My childhood sweetheart, I had no phone calls or messages for 6 days. I couldn't stand it anymore 😅

I originally wanted to read about farming, and it would be nice to sell snacks occasionally. As I kept reading, I wrote that Chinese medicine was sold, and a group of brothers helped sell medicine, as well as the fields and vegetables.