A Leisurely Life Back in 1982

I'm almost disgusted to death. My family is poor and my engagement has been annulled. I finally found a way to start a business without making any money. I help the poor households in the village without thinking, and I want to lead the whole village to raise rabbits! The problem is that other people don't appreciate it and they always come to their door whenever a problem arises. Aren't you a bitch? Why don't you go to Leshan for a while?

The writing is okay, but the plot is not that exciting. There are conflicts with this, conflicts with that, and there are a lot of conflicts, but none of them can be resolved. Before my marriage was settled, I was planning to change my eldest brother's wife. Before I could get my money back, I started talking nonsense, which seemed childish. As the saying goes, you can make a fortune by keeping silent, but before you get your money back, you start shouting.

Guangdong has been developing for so many years, but many people are raising objections when a local wealthy man builds villas and gives them to the villagers. It is simply not feasible for you to engage in farming with the villagers.

You can't write about the vicissitudes of the elderly. It's best not to write about the rebirth of the elderly. It will be a waste of hundreds of thousands of words.

It is recommended to rewrite it with an outline 1. The injustice of the protagonist is the driving force for rebirth and changing destiny The character foreshadowing in the first few pictures seems long-winded and useless 2. After rebirth, people need to grow and realize, so it is necessary to write an analysis of the same thing from two perspectives, which will be very attractive 3. Use advanced ideas and judgments to transform your own life. This is just a frame. What is attractive is the interaction of the characters in the process, and you cannot ignore the basics. 4. How to embody the timeline concretely and make the chronology more chronological. In addition to the objects and production life in life, this can be created using news events and policy releases. Let readers always notice that this is a past time

I haven't even finished the second chapter yet, but the woman's family got rich in the first year after the household guarantee system was implemented? How did you get rich so quickly? Not farming? Are you afraid that you don't know what the crime of speculation is? And your sister is in her second year of high school? You really don't know what high school students were like back then, do you? You can directly work as a clerk in various government agencies! No matter how bad you are, you can still be a teacher! My aunt just graduated from junior high school and became a doctor in the town hospital! My uncle graduated from a technical secondary school in electric power system, has no connections, and retired as a junior section chief all his life!

It's a mess, if you fail to force things out, you have to lead this and that to meddle in other people's business!

The story about breaking off the engagement at the beginning is really too jarring. Author, you are writing about the countryside in 1982. The male and female protagonists were still babies. It was an era where reputation was very important. The male protagonist just had no ability and was not a street kid with a bad reputation. He broke off the engagement just because he was poor. The reputation of the heroine's family will be ruined. I saw Chapter 37 and you said that the heroine's father wants the heroine to go on a blind date. Don't do such a big poison. There is also the poisonous point of the sister-in-law. To be honest, in the 1980s When the male protagonist's parents are present, even if they are separated, they will still control the sister-in-law to death.

Personally, I feel that this book is not as good as The Eunuch, it is a waste of time.

If you don't understand the meaning of rebirth, don't write about the sorrows of your past life if you don't marry.