From Selling Lunchboxes to Becoming China's Top Chef

See Chapter 229: 1. The growth trajectory relies too much on coincidence. The grandpa and the boss did not highlight the grassroots struggle of "selling box lunches", which gave me the feeling that it was not practical enough. 2. There are very few era profiles. I still don't know that the book is in the 1990s. 3. This book has a strong business element in it, but I see that I don't know how much money the protagonist can earn, and I have no idea at all. 4. The heroine's family content is smelly and long; the daily life atmosphere is not solid enough, and it lacks the description of the humanistic style of the times. It is neither an upgraded novel nor a daily novel.

That's right, I just went to sell some meat after reading the author's book 😭

This kind of urban nostalgia entrepreneurial article is easy to shoot and has a traffic base You can find a prototype to write a "Jinan Catering Story" based on the celebrity chefs of Shandong cuisine The young apprentice travels through time and space Interacts with the masters from the first-person perspective, communicates and learns from the masters Shows the rise and fall of each restaurant bit by bit Changes The personal destiny of each Shandong cuisine celebrity For fun, you can set it to Learn traditional Shandong cuisine techniques Introduction to famous dishes Interaction with famous chefs Complete your dream of being a master Write it and sell it to the noon sun, and the brothers will enjoy it

The protagonist was robbed on the road, and the protagonist was rescued by his friends in the factory. The man who robbed him was beaten and let go easily. Be kind and soft-hearted! If you resort to official tactics, you should be sent to the police station. If you don't report it privately, you should be beaten to death. Normal people will take revenge on you, let alone the person who robbed you. Everyone in the factory is united and united. Next time, they will just slap you and bury you. What can I do if the main character is gone? At least one person has to break his leg. If no one from the factory comes to save him, the protagonist will not end well. Hey, if your writing is not good and you don't want people to comment on it, it's been blocked. You might as well delete it. You can just ban me directly. 🤫

I died from the poisonous disease. I thought I was the number one scholar and went out to travel. Not only did I get a cool script about showing off my identity when I met someone on the road, but at worst it was a farming style and slowly developed. What I saw was a competition-level dog that got a medal, went out and walked around to comment on various judges, and had to kneel down to lick the script. I was convinced.

Reading your novel is like eating a meal while watching a gourmet show

Your feelings come out of nowhere and you especially like to write about them recently! Make money quickly! Who likes to see you make a couple here for the rest of your life? ! Faint to death

I really feel that the author's daily conversations are too unthinking. It is impossible to speak like that in daily conversations. Just like what I wrote recently, people at the train station came to dinner and praised the hand-made noodles, which brought us to a happy ending. To be honest, it is impossible to speak like this in daily conversations. If it were me, I might say that the last bowl of noodles really made me happy. The writing of daily dialogue is not very good (to be honest, daily dialogue can never be like that). I think it is really a failure to write the written language and daily dialogue in the same way. If the author wants to improve, this is really a point that needs to be solved. I also think it affects the perception of reading, what kind of words are said, and what kind of colloquial expressions are used. I always feel that the dialogue you write is exactly the same as the writing of high school students, which is not good. I have been following this book for a long time, and I have always felt that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. If the author can solve it, the perception can be improved to several levels, and more people will read it.

I don't understand why you have to arrange the family background of your current girlfriend. What you wrote is not a love story, and this is not the final heroine. If so, is it to arrange a disgusting plot later? It's really unnecessary. Just arrange it normally.

Of course there is no shortage of readers who write about being honest, doing things sincerely, and telling good stories It's just that half of the people now die from bad writing.