From Selling Lunchboxes to Becoming China's Top Chef

Reading Chapter 229: 1. The growth trajectory relies too much on coincidences, mentioning this grandfather and that boss, without effectively highlighting the grassroots struggle of "selling boxed lunches," which makes me feel that it is not grounded enough. 2. There is very little historical context; to this day, I still don't know what year the book is set in.

That's right, I started selling braised pork after reading the author's book. 😭

These kinds of urban nostalgia-themed entrepreneurial articles are easy to film and have a built-in audience. One could find a real-life inspiration from a famous Shandong cuisine chef and write a book titled "Stories of Jinan's Culinary Scene." The young apprentice travels through time and space

The protagonist was robbed on the road, but was rescued by a friend from the factory. They beat up the robbers and let them go so easily. They're too lenient! If it were a legitimate official operation, they should have been sent to the police station; even if they didn't report it to the authorities, they should have been beaten half to death.

He died from poisoning. I thought he'd become a top scholar and travel the world, or at the very least, experience a slow-developing, farming-style life, not some saga of a hero who stands up for justice. Instead, I got a story of a racing champion winning a medal, going out for a spin, getting critiques from various onlookers, and having to fawn over them. I'm speechless.

Reading your novel is like watching a food anime – it's so good for eating!

Your feelings for me came out of nowhere, and lately you've been particularly fond of writing these kinds of things! Hurry up and make some money! Who wants to see you spouting this whole "one love, one life" nonsense?! Unbelievable!

I genuinely feel that the author's everyday dialogue is written too carelessly. You would never speak like that in everyday conversation. Like the recent passage where someone at the train station comes to eat and praises the handmade noodles, saying it brings a perfect end to the day—that's something you'd never say in everyday life.

I don't understand why you had to include the current girlfriend's family background. You're not writing a romance novel, and she's not even the final female lead. If she were, would it be to create a disgusting plot later? It's really unnecessary; just make it normal.

Writing about honesty, integrity, and telling good stories will always attract readers. It's just that half the people now die from reading bad, wish-fulfillment novels.