Sing, Dad

First of all, I feel like your book. Be prepared for a long time. The plot, the characters, and the sense of parental involvement are all very good. I want you to see how to control them. Write a different and good plot. The new plot makes people smile gently.

First of all, entertainment articles are not easy to become popular, and most of them are just pretentious and slap-in-the-face, and they are just mindless copies of works, and this book by the author is even more outrageous. To be honest, when reading entertainment articles, I read the works copied by rebirths. The biggest pleasure is here. The other articles, whether they are original articles or adapted articles, all belong to the self-pleasure category. No matter what, writing books is not easy. I hope the author can persevere.

There are two parts that are not very comfortable to read, so I won't continue reading. I don't object to the heroine's second marriage, but she has lost the ability to have children. I really can't stand it and I don't know what to say. The male protagonist's illness is also a problem. The one-year deadline means that the story only takes place in one year. The time is too short. Whether the male protagonist will die or not is a big problem. I hate sadistic novels and have no masochism hobby.

It only took half a day to finish the first twenty or so chapters, and I still wrote a bunch of things together. It was already one o'clock in the afternoon when I got home. I was eating fruit, cooking, lunch, singing, the children came over, the aunt came over, the children's mother came over, the grandpa asked the children's grandpa, and the grandma came over. It was too complicated and piled up, and the experience was really not good. I feel that there is no need to explain everything in one afternoon. In fact, one afternoon is very short and not so many things can happen. Even if so many things are posted, it will not make you feel too much, just like watching the flowers in a hurry.

I haven't watched my first miss in a few days.

It's pretty good, and it's very delicately written. I'm tired of reading short-form novels now, and I prefer this kind of story. It's plain and simple without any system or parallel world. It feels more down-to-earth. I feel that the author should not torture the protagonist to death. After all, if you don't give a golden finger, you have to have a good ending. Hahahahaha.

Without abilities, systems, or rebirth, what else is there to watch?

I have a few questions for the author: The first question: Do you want to stop writing halfway? Second question: In the finale, will you write that the male protagonist dies of illness? The third question: How many thousand words do you plan to write in this book? My personal suggestion is that you don't kill the male protagonist in the ending. Killing the hero = a bad ending, and don't abandon the book!

What disease does the author's protagonist suffer from? Very curious!

The author's writing style is okay, but after reading more than ten chapters, I realized that there is no golden finger. This kind of writing is not fun without golden fingers. It is like a running account. Who can read it? I don't know what the author is thinking?