Sing, Dad

First of all, I feel that your book has been prepared for a long time. The plot, the characters, and the parents' sense of identification are all quite good; it's up to you to see how to control them. Write a different, good plot. A new plot that brings a gentle smile to the reader's face.

Firstly, entertainment novels aren't easy to become popular, and most of them involve showing off and getting slapped in the face, or mindlessly plagiarizing other works. This author's book is a prime example of this. Honestly, the biggest thrill of entertainment novels lies in the reincarnation and plagiarism scenes; that's where the excitement is. The rest, whether original or adapted, are just self-indulgent. Anyway, writing is hard work, so hopefully the author can persevere.

There were two parts that I found uncomfortable to read, so I stopped. I don't object to the female lead being in her second marriage, but the fact that she's infertile is really hard to watch. I don't know how to explain it. The male protagonist's illness is also a problem.

The first twenty or so chapters took only half a day to write, and I had a ton of stuff to do. By the time I got home it was already 1 p. M. Then came fruit, cooking, lunch, singing, the kids coming over, my aunt coming over, the kids' moms coming over, grandpa looking for the kids' grandpas and grandmas coming over—it was all so chaotic and piling up, the experience was really unpleasant.

I haven't looked at my first mistake in a few days.

It's pretty good, and the writing is quite detailed. I'm tired of the typical light novels now, so I prefer this kind of story. It's simple and straightforward, without any systems or parallel worlds, which makes it feel more down-to-earth. I think the author shouldn't kill off the protagonist. After all, even if he doesn't have any cheat codes, he should at least have a good ending, hahaha.

Without superpowers, systems, and rebirth, what's the point of watching it?

I have a few questions for the author: First question: Are you planning to stop writing halfway through? Second question: Will you write that the male lead dies of illness in the finale? The third question: How many tens of thousands of words do you plan to write in this book? My personal advice is, please don't kill off the male lead in the ending. Killing him off equals a bad ending, and don't abandon the book!

What illness does the main character have? I'm really curious!

The author's writing style is alright, but after reading more than ten chapters, I realized there's no cheat code. Without cheat codes, there's no excitement in this kind of story; it's just like a monotonous diary. Who could possibly read that? I don't know what the author was thinking.