Douluo Dalu: The Way of Martial Arts

The beginning was fairly normal, but towards the end, all I can say is that the protagonist is a saint, a benevolent benefactor. Are you wholesale cheat codes to everyone? He's even fawning over Tang San, who's practically begging for his life, and you still give him a cultivation technique. It's like someone trying to rape your wife and daughter and then giving them five million to "boost their physique"—this kind of plot is beyond the comprehension of any normal person.

The author oversimplifies things. The protagonist, barely starting his cultivation, immediately gives away martial arts manuals to the school, letting everyone learn them. Doesn't he have any brains? Is he courting death? Everyone else uses soul power cultivation methods, but the protagonist uses a martial arts cultivation method.

It's normal for a martial arts master to create a cultivation technique through meridians and martial spirit. But I'm wondering if this protagonist is really that powerful, and why he keeps using it for several years, and then some inexplicable things appear. Simply put, the author is just forcibly giving him a cheat code, and the reasoning is far-fetched.

To write a good novel, you have to imagine yourself as the protagonist. Imagine you actually transmigrated to the Douluo Continent, a realistic society. For example, in real life, if you possessed a martial arts manual, would you dare share it with others? Of course not, otherwise you'd be dismembered. So why would you dare share the manual in Douluo Continent? Do you have an invincible system?

To test a 6-year-old child, and after drawing out his evil fire, make him calm down, then transfer the Great Soul Master's energy to the Soul Master so that he can subdue him—you really think Ma Hongjun is the protagonist? If he really had this ability, he wouldn't bother with you. It's not that the protagonist should teach for free, that would be moral blackmail, but could this test be made more reasonable?

The first thirty chapters had some minor flaws, which were acceptable. After chapter thirty, the style changed drastically, becoming incredibly toxic. It became much more enjoyable.

What's the use of Zhu Zhuqing? She has no talent, she's just a decoration. Every fanfic artist collects her and gives her tons of resources. She only has one high-level martial soul. Are they really only after her breasts?

You've created yet another Tang San, but one even worse than Tang San. He's more hypocritical than Tang San, and lacks Tang San's background and abilities. A low-budget version of Tang San.

Isn't Zhu Zhuyun's figure even more stunning? (Royal supply)

Seeing that the female lead is Zhu Zhuqing, I don't even want to click in.