Douluo Dalu: The Way of Martial Arts

The first part is quite normal, but in the later part we can only say that the main character is the Holy Mother and the Good Fortune Boy. Are you wholesale gold fingers for others? You even licked Tang San, Tang San wanted you to take death, and you still gave me the technique. It's the same as if someone tried to rape your wife or daughter, and you gave him five million to replenish his body. This kind of thinking is unacceptable to normal people.

The author thinks things too simply. When the protagonist just starts practicing, he gives the martial arts secrets to the school and teaches them to others casually. Can he be wiser? Asking if you have a way to die? Others are practicing soul power cultivation, but Pig's Feet is a martial arts cultivation method. After you become an invincible god, leave some cultivation techniques and martial arts secrets for this Douluo Continent. Wouldn't that work? Why are you so impatient to start showing off? It's not like you have an invincible system. In reality, a showman like you wouldn't survive three episodes. When writing a novel, you must be reliable and don't write randomly. Those great families and dynasties. Wuhun Palace. It's strange that they don't find fault with you. I'll probably arrest you and torture you. Teach them all the secrets.

It's normal to create a martial arts technique with meridians and souls. It's a demon in the heart of the Tao. I just want to know if the protagonist is so awesome. He still uses it regularly for a few years, and then some inexplicable things appear. To put it simply, the author is cheating, and the reason is far-fetched.

If you want to write a novel well, you have to think of yourself as a pig's foot. If you really travel to Douluo Continent, it will be a real society. For example, the author is in real society. You have martial arts secrets, do you dare to show them to others? You definitely don't dare, otherwise you will definitely be sliced ​​into pieces, so why do you dare to take out the martial arts secrets in Douluo Continent? Do you have an invincible system? Invincible background? Nothing. Why do you dare to take it out? Is there a way to die? Why doesn't the author know this simple truth? Writing a novel at least has some logic.

To test a 6-year-old child and induce evil fire into him to keep him calm, and to pass on the energy of the great soul master to the soul master to make him surrender, you really make Ma Hongjun the protagonist. If he really has this ability, he will not disdain you. I'm not saying that letting the protagonist teach for free would be moral kidnapping, but can this test be reasonable?

There are slight flaws before Chapter 30, which is acceptable. After thirty chapters, the painting style changes suddenly and becomes crazy and poisonous. Moisturized.

What's the use of Zhu Zhuqing? She's not very talented. She has one pendant that every fan can collect and a bunch of resources. She's just a high-level martial spirit. I really just like the two pieces of flesh on her chest.

You have written another Tang San, which is not as good as Tang San, is more hypocritical than Tang San, and does not have Tang San's background and abilities. Low profile version of Tang San

Isn't Zhu Zhuyun's figure even more amazing? Specially provided by the royal family

When I saw Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine, I didn't even want to click in.