The Brave Player Who Started by Touching Corpses

Too boring, too wordy. It seems like every weed on the roadside has to introduce its origin and extended game background. Then spread it to other games. It gives people the feeling of reading an illustrated book. After reading 100 chapters, there are only thirty or fifty chapters of plot advancement for a normal person.

A typical emotional work, the pace is very slow, you write whatever comes to mind. If the style matches, I suggest you just take a look at it in the early stage if you are interested. If you think it is OK, it will be more cost-effective to use it in the middle stage. Personally, I feel that it will inevitably start to get boring after 800 chapters, so use coupons when you make your own estimates, so that you can skip to the end.

It always looks weird, a little bit alien to early game fanatics. To be honest, why are you so keen on writing things that are hard to understand and difficult to understand? Sure enough, Bald Brother's book is better, but the part about Hero Academy is missing in the middle, and it's a bit unbearable to read later.

I now very much doubt that this book was written by AI. It is full of a lot of data and some meaningless introductions. It's been several days and the plot hasn't moved forward at all. The most important thing is that the author never responds to comments. I have a full subscription, but I won't be sure if this continues 😅

If you say that you are verbose, I will permanently block it. There is a reason why a book is still tepid after it is finished.

I met a soldier and threw the staff out because of "instinct". What level of behavior is this? Oh, and to add, the protagonist only has this weapon; he is in the monster's lair, and he can even think of more than one monster with his butt. When he said that those soldiers are not without IQ, I had a strong vision... I'm afraid not, the opposite is a player, and the protagonist is an NPC, right? He was the only one in the audience who was brainless...

Who are the so-called high-ups of the Brave Guild? Are they just ordinary people? It's understandable if you say he's an S-class hero, but why do heroes need their consent to do anything? To put it bluntly, they are just ordinary people who manage the city for the brave men.

After reading this whole novel, I feel like the protagonist has not become stronger. He fights monsters, hides behind others, fights elites, and fights BOSS. It's all the same routine, which is weird.

This is really "back to the original starting point". That's where the fandom was released.

There's too much nonsense, and it's almost half a chapter of explanation and introduction.

What a rubbish book, 70% of the 10 chapters are exposition. Two or three sentences of dialogue will set up half of the chapter. You might as well read this manual.

The author seems not to know how to write dialogues. It is difficult for the characters to form dialogues. When the supporting characters ask the protagonist, it is difficult for the protagonist to respond in words. There is a thick barrier between the protagonist and the entire world. The protagonist and others are even on two world lines. The encounters and actions of other people cannot affect the protagonist's thinking. When other characters act, it is difficult for the protagonist to interact.

I guess everyone must have some old games hidden in some corner of their memory. They can only remember the general gameplay, or even just the characteristics of a certain soldier. However, I can't remember the exact name of this old game. Then, you can try to describe it in this post, and by brainstorming, you may be able to uncover your forgotten childhood memories.

Two shortcomings of this book It is a very strange way of description. The description of the plot seems to be composed of narration, or there is no normal dialogue, and it is written in the form of a diary. It feels quite superficial, and there is no sense of substitution People and things all over the world write about the dark side of society, full of dark speculations, but because of the poor level of the author and the management of the association who control the resources, they behave stupidly and have no execution ability. The existence of the entire association has no rationality, and the conspiracy is stuck in this uncomfortable state of destroying it if it is not obtained

They didn't even send us a notification when they opened a new book! Here I am, Tamar!

I'm a little interested in reading the introduction and world background. Unfortunately, after reading more than ten chapters, the writing is really long-winded. It has a lot to write but it's not very interesting to read. It's a bit dry. It's not that I can't read it at all. I'll give it a try when the book is exhausted.

How to put it, the author may be a newbie or have not written a few books, or he may be an old author but has some bad writing habits. No matter which one it is, it is recommended that the author change it. This slightly manual writing method can certainly show more of his settings and ideas to readers, but it will be quite uncomfortable from the reader's perspective. It's not just about the word count or channel setting, it's just that this writing technique will increase the redundancy of a paragraph and make it difficult for readers.

After reading more than 900 chapters, I feel that the protagonist's skills are complicated and numerous. There are too many skills and equipment to remember, but the most commonly used ones are always the same. Many small skills are basically invisible in the later stage. Too many skills also make teammates seem useless. The protagonist is in an invincible state most of the time, and his abilities improve too quickly. Teammates are basically dispensable.

It's too much. I've read more than ten chapters and it's all about introductions. The plot doesn't advance at all. The entire chapter introduces this and that. Anyway, it doesn't start the plot. What's the difference between this and the stinky and long plot introduction at the beginning of a game? Or should the reader try to guide them where they don't care at all, but they just don't start the game 😅

The author played a lot but didn't play it deeply enough, which led to many problems in the setting. He set up the Curse of the Undead in Diablo 2 to be fully effective against gods. According to this setting, all bosses who cannot run fast enough are useless in front of the protagonist. Set up a counter-injury and then send the cannon fodder directly to whoever comes to die. Diablo 2's counter-damage curse counters damage according to the damage it causes. Just slap him in the face from the boss and you'll be almost done

The reason is also very simple. I know more about the games in the last book, but less about the games in this one, and it's more tiring to read than the previous book.

It's been three months and I still haven't had enough rest.

I subscribed to about 500 chapters before. It's all fucking data, written like a fucking running account. I gave up. I have thousands of free coupons. I changed it. After looking at it for half an hour, I couldn't stand it any longer. When I gave up the pit, I made the right decision.

When will the new book be released? ? !

After reading the free chapter, I found that he is indeed a barbarian. It just so happens that his panel has no intelligence. He himself is also an abnormally wise man with amazing wisdom.

I just want to complain about this book, why every time I am happy, I almost get snot from my nose.

Chosen Evolution: I can load the protagonist template

Where can I read the author's video games and dungeons?

Now that the book is finished, what about the new book?

Guys, does anyone know who the red, blue, and yellow characters are in it? Which book are they the protagonists of? Could you please recommend them?