I Have a Mission Log

After reading hundreds of volumes, I don't know what the poisonous and thunderous points are; when I write a word, I can point out all the good points and laughing points. If you don't know anything about DND and don't want to know more about it, then this book will be a bit painful to read, because the author rarely adds settings; If you can memorize the monster manual backwards and count the gods of Faerun, you may feel uncomfortable, because The Faerun setting is used for this book, but it is also combined with the author's ideas, which is easy to get into a head-scratching situation; But if you are somewhere in between, especially if you have run groups/played similar games, as long as you can become familiar with the author's narrative style within 50 chapters, you will fall in love with this book. You don't need to record how many kingdoms and unions you have, because this is a task-driven article, you will be familiar with it when you use it, and unfamiliar things will disappear in an instant; You don't need to face many people, there are only key NPCs with arc lights and the protagonist team who grew up with the book; This is not toilet paper from another world, there are not so many sinister plots, conspiracies and reversals. This is an adventurous life that can still be recalled even more than ten years later.

Unpretentious and attractive. At some point, the current cesspit recommendation mechanism has buried all the good books.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first: The writing of the character's emotions is not very good. It is more of a classic Western magic writing method and is relatively slow to heat up. Advantages: The description of the story is very delicate, every step is written very carefully, the author has good imagination, and the potential for subsequent development is high. Suggestion: Since the plot tends to be quite conventional, readers can easily think of the follow-up. It is recommended to create several plots with ups and downs to form a sense of contrast, making people unexpectedly urgent, but also reasonable.

Reading progress: Chapter 120 Western fantasy, the protagonist approaches the battle mage route Advantages: 1. Good writing 2. It has the taste of an adventurer 3. The characters of the supporting characters are described delicately, but they don't steal the protagonist's role (I personally don't like to watch group portraits, unless they are the top ones) Disadvantages: At the beginning, big events seemed a bit frequent, and it seemed that the protagonist would go berserk no matter what the difficulty of the task, but later on when the reasons were explained, I felt that it was okay.

8 Points. It's very comfortable to watch together. The group portraits are well written. You can see who is talking to whom without having to mark the conversations between the team members. It's a bit like playing bg3 and encountering interesting words from teammates at a certain time. The shortcoming is that the combat description is not particularly good. The protagonist is nearly dead many times, as if there is a big hand controlling it.

It's very nice to watch. The dialogues between the characters are quite rich and interesting. A lot of text was spent to shape the protagonist group, which gave me the feeling of playing BG3 again. The protagonist does not need to be too strong and it feels real to level up with the team members.

The author should change the price. It can easily cost dozens of gold coins. Especially for the antidote, you can change it to a weak antidote for a few silver coins. It is too poisonous for a stranger to give away 50 gold coins for free.

Looking at the introduction, the physical reward for dealing with rats 4 times is the same as saving the world. It feels like the mission system and attribute settings are completely broken 😅

Every time I fight hard, struggling on the line of life and death, the rewards I get are all tricks, and there is no feeling like a mage at all. As for the demon swordsman, he is not strong, and does not have the unparalleled pleasure of the goblin next door mowing down low-level monsters of the same level.

Speaking of which, I have traveled to several cities now. Would you like the author to make a regional map to assist and let AI help generate a version?

To be honest, there are many good parts in the writing, but mixed in with the bad writing, it is easy to give people the feeling that the writing is a bit bad. A typical mouse dropping ruins a pot of soup. Take the recent assault on the orcs as an example. In the case of attacking with two third- and fourth-level spells first, not only did there not be death, there was no serious injury and loss of combat effectiveness, and it was even possible to quickly enter the battle. Come on, this is already a million words. It can be said that the story has entered the middle stage. The protagonist has a golden finger, sophisticated equipment, and many powerful specialties. He can't fight in any one battle, and it shouldn't be so ugly. The other one is the profession of the protagonist. I wanted to write a mage, but I didn't want to just cast spells behind me. I wanted to go up and kill people, so I finally decided on the sword chanting method for the protagonist. But the problem is that in sword chanting, he is a mage first, and then the melee ability. Sword chanting does not focus on melee combat. Melee combat is just a choice, and it will never be the first choice under normal circumstances. But there are too many close-combat characters for the protagonist. When faced with a situation, it is more like an arcane cavalry, a war priest, or a poem of courage. It is not like a sword chant.

The approximate location information is adjusted by me based on memory. Discussions and corrections are welcome.

After a million words, it is still dangerous to attack an orc chief in a surprise attack. This is because the orc chief wants to escape. If the chief counterattacks and attacks the protagonist, will the whole team be wiped out? (PS: There is a golden dragon and it is impossible to destroy it all)

It's a good book, with a good pace, no poisonous points, no stupid plot, and the characters are well-developed. Even the little mouse that appeared a few times can make people smile. I thought it was a copy of Ninja when I looked at the name, but it turned out to be unexpectedly good-looking 👍👍

It seems that you use the dnd background in this introduction, but are the attributes given too much? It can give you some constitution when dealing with rats (although this attribute is quite useless), and it makes sense to give you magic blade protection.

Personally, I feel that the slow popularity of this book is not only reflected in the combat power and plot rhythm, but also based on a basic understanding of the DND fantasy world view, as the protagonist's own map begins to slowly expand the world line. The writing is not bad, it is very bland. The combat part is indeed a bit worse, but the rest of the part is very clean and neat, without too many embellishment paragraphs, and the winding and complicated vocabulary and sentences (the guy next door can almost understand me after reading it, three or four hundred words for a meal), it is very comfortable to read, and the shaping of the characters is also good. It is a genre with simple writing but profound shaping. At present, the protagonist, Kes Orc, and some other character NPCs in the plot are basically not blank slates. They are more or less described, and they are not qualitative and straightforward descriptions from the beginning. They are character descriptions established through character dialogue and behavioral logic, which is good. To sum it up, it is readable and traceable.

What do you think?

After reading dozens of chapters, it feels less like a novel and more like a plot that I usually skip when playing RPG games. . Also, every time the protagonist fights, it's a life-and-death situation, but he doesn't feel anything at all. Can anyone explain this?

I just read it not long ago, so I will only comment on the chapters before charging. 1. This is a slow-paced Western fantasy adventure. The writing is generally good, but the description of the worldview is too little. After reading dozens of chapters, there are still no organizations such as the XX Kingdom, the Mage Association, the Adventurer Association, the Legendary Monsters, the Legendary Adventurers, the Demon King Dungeon, and the XX Gold Adventure Team. I only know that the protagonist is in a small city, and it is difficult to establish an understanding of the entire world. As a result, I don't have much expectation for the next plot. We will see wherever the author writes. It doesn't mean that we can predict that the protagonist will fight a legendary monster, bravely brave the 18th floor of the dungeon, or become a legendary adventurer. 2. Although the writing style is not good, the author still knows what we want to see. The plot progresses very smoothly, unlike the goblin next door. What I am most satisfied with is the combat power setting. Although it is a simple number, it seems that there is no excessive value at present; there are not too many vulgar pretending to be slapped in the face. 3. I am not very satisfied with many descriptions (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). For example, this half-orc is tall, burly and powerful. According to common sense, it should focus on strong strength (ordinary writing), big appetite (daily style), and lots of talk (funny style). In fact, I have been writing about this half-orc who wants to go home. It is okay to write that this half-orc is very capable, but there is no emphasis on description. As a result, I don't think this orc is very powerful or useful. In addition, I really can't stand this "we". It's weird. If it were replaced by "I" or "I", I wouldn't feel so uncomfortable. The battle scenes are too descriptive of the main character, and not much is given to the supporting characters. There are also relatively few daily routines. I prefer that the protagonist and his teammates eat and drink in a pub, hotel, and restaurant after completing tasks, and unfold the subsequent plot. This way of writing can better introduce new characters, instead of the city lord directly assigning tasks to the protagonist. 4. In summary, the plot transition is smooth, and there are not too many vulgar plots; the world view is not well laid out in the early stage, and I look forward to the follow-up development; the daily description part is mixed, but at least it is not poisonous, and it is still okay to look at; the writing is generally good; the combat system and golden fingers are okay; the combat description needs to give some space for the supporting characters to express themselves. 5. Final summary, weeds - grains - jelly grass, this book is for middle and upper grains, carefully polished and polished, it can be rated as middle and lower jelly

The writing is average, but it has a simple and delicious home-cooked aesthetic that is unpretentious. There are very few DNDs written in a way that people can read. It's either a show-off or a piece of trash with a lot of bitterness and deep hatred, and only a few words.

The writing is quite good. , The story is also good. , It just didn't feel that great throughout the whole process. , The fighting force is overwhelming. It's not that exciting with the ups and downs of emotions. What if you are just a diary, then you are indeed a diary. , Because you just record. , But you are a novel. Please have an outline rhythm so that the main line of your story can be refreshing when it should be. , There is an ups and downs climax point. The whole process didn't make me feel special. Impressive point, not that cool point. You can have your main story line, but please have a story with the ups and downs of emotions at the end of each main line, such as playing POS, with the soldiers in the front. , Or a manifestation of ability, letting me know that you are awesome. In every book, the protagonist goes into the past and hopes that he can become a very awesome person. , If the whole story were the same. If you suppress it just to suppress your fighting power, it will be boring.

The campground was exposed a lot, with long grass, but someone in the team said it was not like this normally. The dead wood was obviously good and the environment was different. It was definitely for tourism. The standard system document, which should be called system log, was quite different from the log. But you can still watch it.

The author is so stubborn and doesn't want to make money, so let him go

? Isn't this book just copied from someone working part-time in Stormwind City next door? No one cares about it?

Is there any Shennong? How about this one?

Embarrassing, there are always people who think their settings are better than dnd. According to this, if the protagonist touches the edge of a spell, he will be completely harmed, right? The protagonist died long ago.

The author's description reminded me of some pictures I had seen before, but when I went back to look for them, I found that most of them could not be found. I only rescued two, which seemed to look quite similar (except for the eyes). Of course, Alleria's expression must be more feminine. Both of these two are too cute, please imagine for yourself

How are the families doing this time🤓

ai doesn't understand what a page hammer is, and is obsessed with bleaching the tiefling's face😫

I felt pretty good after reading a hundred chapters in one go. First of all, the character creation is very good. The author is very good at using dialogue to shape the characters. The dialogue between the protagonist and Keith is so fun to watch. Secondly, the story plot is very smooth and there are no major poisonous points. Some details are also good. The images of the two adventurers Colin and Keith are too vivid. They are bickering and taking risks while carrying large and small bags of equipment. But it can still be seen that he is a new author. At first, the description of the wolf battle was almost unreadable, but the progress was also very fast. The battle with the druid later was also eye-catching. The step-by-step growth of the protagonist was also very interesting, from the embarrassment of the wolf pack to the killing of the fanged jackal. What makes this book very comfortable to read is that the author allows the characters to navigate within their own capabilities. The legendary paladin is slaying dragons, and the low-level adventurers are working hard to earn a few more gold coins. They do not fall into the grand narrative of common adventure novels, about how capable they are and how much they can do. Many Western fantasy novels show that they are still at the bottom and do not honestly improve themselves, but they insist on being a brave man who saves the world. Moreover, they are not good at emotional mobilization, which will only make people tired to read. There are no forced settings. Some of the self-made settings that serve the plot of the novel are quite good. Of course, this is also a problem I want to complain about in some Western fantasy novels I have read recently.