I Want to Embrace the Moon for Nine Days

The fighting is good and the pace is quite fast. At first glance, I thought the book was very good. After reading it, I felt it was a little lacking. One is that the character of the protagonist is too extreme. He is not a strong character, nor is he clear about love and hate. The behavior depicted is extreme. Too extreme is too unflattering The fights in both are good-looking, but the proportions of the fights are too heavy, and the contrast between the plots is too weak. There is no distinction between priorities and it is a bit messy. The advantages are so obvious and the disadvantages are so obvious

The main plot is well written, and the characters are full-bodied and no longer stereotyped. I can write less in the dungeons in the future, and just write them when I break through. The main plot is pretty good

I don't know why I couldn't even get the first place in martial arts in the previous book. The top few were all bullshit. There were indeed flaws in the previous book, but it was still on the same level as those bullshit systems.

Totally uninteresting. . There is no point in reading it at all The story is average, the character creation is average, and the power system is generally inferior. . The plot conflicts are quite low-level, and the world view and background are ordinary. . The reason why I pay attention is that the previous book was well written. . It's time to cut it and open another one. Don't waste the popularity of the last book by continuing to lose your ink.

All I can say is that the author is wise and chose the fantasy genre. The writing method can be martial arts, but you must vote for fantasy. The traffic of martial arts and fantasy is different. 😁 I haven't read it yet, and it's infinite, but the author really wrote low martial arts and middle martial arts with a special feeling, and high martial arts is too spacey 😅 Although it is a magically modified version, Wanjie rushed back to the Shaolin Temple in three days. It still feels quite good. The first copy of Infinite also feels full. ​​The combat power standard is set too high, and destroying the world is not necessarily a good thing.

I'm a fan of old books. The beginning of "Brilliant Picture" can be said to be one of the best martial arts novels written in the past ten years. After reading this book, I found that the author has almost lost all his strengths. If you write martial arts well, martial arts must be practiced and fought. Xia is a kind of sentiment, which is reflected in the background of the story and everyone agrees on serving the country and the people. The beginning of "Brilliant" is well written, because you combine martial arts training and killing opium dealers, and propose the four major exercises. The training is hard, the fighting is wonderful, and the flavor of the knight is written. By the way, the number one new book recently also used your Four Great Refinements. One more thing, Wu Jing has been playing very well, and his popularity is only because he has carried forward his national sentiments. Fighting alone is not enough. As far as this book is concerned, I hope you can learn from the Master of One Life and travel through scenes to serve the main line.

I have read a few of the author's books. The styles of these books are quite different. Let me briefly share my opinions! To be honest, I prefer the protagonists in the author's books, because in the current atmosphere of Qidian, all kinds of rubbish protagonists, demonic protagonists, so-called decisive and decisive killings, even indiscriminate killing of innocents, selfishness, and stubbornness are very popular! The protagonist is said to be a holy mother bitch even if she has a little kindness! As for the protagonists in the author's book, they can be said to be righteous, brave and fearless. Anyway, they are all good people in the eyes of the world or people with normal views. I appreciate this very much! As for the writing style, let's not say how good or invincible it is, but at least it is qualified. It should be said that it is good. It is much better than those words and sentences that are not fluent, and it will not make people unable to stand it! As for the plot, I prefer the Infinite Glory picture scroll. The first copy is really well written. Although some of the later copies are not as popular, they are generally good! The beginning of this book is actually okay. It may not be as stunning as the beginning of the previous book, but it is still on a par! But there is a problem I want to say to the author, and some readers have also responded to this problem, that is, the author describes the fighting in too detail, including the principles of martial arts, operation methods, origins, manifestations, etc. Yes, it is too detailed and sometimes makes me tired to read and cannot understand. After all, these are false and unsupported, and it will be more troublesome to rely solely on imagination. Of course, these have become the characteristics of the author's writing. I don't know if it can be changed. I am just putting forward my own opinion! Another point is that the plot is too weak, or the mode of each dungeon is basically the same. It is about the protagonist coming to the dungeon, understanding the basic situation of the dungeon, and then uniting with the righteous side to quickly improve in the battle and defeat the evil story. It cannot be said to be bad. After all, the writing is good, but it is too similar. After watching too much plot fatigue, it feels not very interesting! It's not that the author's writing is not good, but if you look at the previous book, then look at this book, and compare the results, you should be able to see the problem! Of course, the previous book also had this problem, that is, the way the battle was expressed in the middle and late stages of writing was too unreal, which made people feel boring! Of course, I still hope that the author will write better and better and his grades will get better and better!

I'm a bit tired of aesthetics. No matter what the opponent is, as long as they are in the same realm as the protagonist, they can play a few games with the protagonist. Although they all win, it doesn't feel like a crushing game. The protagonist travels through so many worlds and gains so much, yet he doesn't feel much better than others.

I have read several of the author's books, and the fighting scenes are as exciting as ever, but the plot descriptions are sparse, and the character creation except for the protagonist is thin. The battle description can occupy 60% of the space in a novel, which greatly squeezes the space for plot description. It makes me randomly open a chapter where the protagonist is fighting, and there is no other specific impression except the constant battle. This makes me feel more and more boring as I read it. After all, this is the place where the protagonist is fighting. Reading novels is not to learn illusory combat skills. Excellent combat descriptions are just the icing on the cake. As a novel, the most important thing is the plot and characters. The author puts too much energy on combat descriptions, which is putting the cart before the horse. Excellent novels can make people read it again with endless aftertaste, but it is difficult for me to open and reread the author's novel. When it is finished, it is when I remove it from the bookshelf. I feel sad every time I think about it.

Yes, the cover alone kills many online articles in an instant

What's going on with this middle-aged and elderly cover?

The results of this book were simply lost in the vast sea of ​​books. I glanced at the comment section and said that the plot was a bit weak. However, I personally think that the biggest mistake is to select the wrong area. The author's previous two books were ranked in the top three and five in the martial arts area, which is quite public. This time I chose to transfer to the fantasy area to give it a try, but the competition in the fantasy area is too fierce.

I really feel that many of the books on the rankings are unreadable. I don't know if it's my problem or the editor's. Is there really something wrong with me? I think this book is very interesting. What's going on?

I first read this author's books because of his chivalrous spirit and cool martial arts moves. Later, the author's writing became better and better, and his fighting scenes became top-notch in the Wang Wen circle. Later, starting from the extremely classic Ring of the Sun and the Moon, I understood that the reason why the author's name is so cool is because he really has a self-consistent operating logic of high-level martial arts training and fighting. This is really extremely rare in the Internet literary circle, and it is amazing! I hope the author will continue to strengthen the plot conception and character creation, which will be the top level of online author. We do our best to obey fate, and if we are at the top level, we may become a top master one day!

The protagonist's martial arts are too complicated. In fact, I was attracted by the various creative martial arts settings of the protagonist at the beginning. However, as the story gets longer and longer, the protagonist learns more and more martial arts. I can't even remember them all. Moreover, he has obviously created his own martial arts. When he uses it, he often uses new tricks that he has never heard of before. Can you post a single chapter to make statistics on the protagonist's martial arts? It's a bit hard to understand.

The driving force that the author set for the protagonist in the dungeon was insufficient, and it was not a dungeon with tasks. As a result, he got involved in various incidents in a confused way, and then was pushed away by the incidents. People don't know why the protagonist got involved in these incidents. Wasn't it to cure his illness in the first place? Although the author finally arranged a way to treat the leg, the author's secret hand was too obvious. The protagonist obviously did not go to treat the leg, but the leg doctor automatically came to the door. I wanted to cure my leg, but ended up getting involved in various incidents. Then the protagonist went to solve the incident without the intention of curing the illness, and found a way to cure the illness in the middle. It was such a coincidence.

Can the author of the post here see it? I beg you that the new book must have more and longer content in the low martial arts stage The high martial arts explanatory text is too abstract and makes me tired to read It is not as refreshing as the low martial arts stage. What I like most about this book is the content between repairing the legs in the first world and returning to the Southern Song Dynasty world to practice the ladder. It is vivid and vivid in my mind This book is also my favorite content about the late Qing Dynasty and 1999 New Horse Jianghu

Still have a very upright outlook on life, decisive killing, and very detailed descriptions of battle scenes, but I always feel that it is not as interesting as the glorious picture scroll. This book is a bit unreadable after a third of it. It is very similar to the previous book "Martial Arts of All Realms", which is very tiring to read. I personally think that the first thing is the background setting. Like Wanjie Martial Arts, you travel back and forth between the main world and the dungeon. This leads to a problem. If it is not a dungeon that is very different in style from the main world, you will have a sense of fatigue from high-intensity continuous combat after clearing the level and returning to the main world. However, the Glory Scroll is an orthodox main god space flow, so this problem is not serious. Secondly, it is a matter of style. Pure martial arts, coupled with the setting of a fictional ancient dynasty, will cause aesthetic fatigue. Being a hero is very tiring, and it is also very tiring for readers to watch heroes constantly changing. Finally, there is the issue of the plot. When the background and style are not interesting enough, it is very important to arrange the plot in a relaxed and moderate manner. However, this book has the same old problem again. The gorgeous words are piled up into an exquisite buffet.                  ，：！ justice! Let's fight! Guan Luoyang: Martial arts! Justice! Let's fight! Fun! It's so fun to mess around with the stew! Su Hanshan: Martial arts! Justice! Let's fight!

The setting is good and the writing is good, but the plot structure is not good and not attractive.

I have been following this author since the last book. There is nothing to say about the fighting scenes, but the plot is very empty, and the ending of each copy is also very hasty. After reading 30% of this book, I feel a little aesthetic fatigue. I can't stop killing it. I hope there will be changes in the future. I will continue to read it for now.

I really hate random trolls. There is so much rubbish in Qidian. Don't troll some novels that have merit. It can easily mislead some readers with different preferences. If you don't like the first three chapters, you can leave.

The Infinite Glory picture volume of the previous book is the most amazing martial arts novel I have read in the past few years. At that time, I read it at 3 o'clock in the middle of the night. I didn't have this feeling in Pei Tugou's works. Although it was a bit weak in the middle and later stages, the writing of this book is actually not bad, but it just feels like "this is it"

The force value of the new book should not be too exaggerated. Don't be like Tsui Hark's The Condor, where the force value collapses. Why do you need ordinary people if your force value is so high? If the force value is too high, there will be a generation gap with ordinary people. Ordinary people are completely unimportant and cannot advance the plot.

The book is too long. The more I read the fighting scenes, the more repetitive they become. I lose the passion and my combat power is broken. I feel like I could finish this book earlier and start a new one. The beginning is the most exciting.

Fang Yunhan, Guan Luoyang, Su Hanshan, Wei Yunzhou, Shen Kui,

High martial arts don't look good, low martial arts look better

The author wrote really good fighting scenes, why aren't they popular?

Addicted to high martial arts fighting It would be boring if the length is too long

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Xiao Su was so cute that she couldn't help but touch the fish. It was all according to her heart, no reference required