Infinite Brilliance Picture Scroll

The writing is very good, and the good sentences are so far away that they make me feel uneasy! , Come on

So well written. Only when the fighting is written vividly and flows infinitely can it have the possibility of development. Good.

The path of the infinite warrior, the scroll of infinite glory. Any other books? Please recommend. Everyone understands it. If the protagonist doesn't have the courage and the writing doesn't have the power, don't recommend it.

It is recommended that the author write a longer story about the world of low martial arts and middle martial arts, with more things involving human relations and society, which is more realistic and looks more real. After all, there are too many mysterious and fictitious things in the world of Gaowu, which seems a bit false and empty.

Only the low-level copy is well written. Forgive me for using this description.

I proudly swear this: book eunuch, you eunuch

The author's description of the painting style is becoming more and more normal. Incomparable to Shuke. What are you doing besides? When you have time instead of typing and composing content, you actually read novels and comment on them. Aren't you worthy of us? ! ! !

After watching it all night, I felt very refreshed and very tired. The main reason is that the author is better at fighting than at story. The plot, which is a breaking point for other authors, has become a burden here This makes me more and more tired as I watch. I felt very happy after watching the two fights at the beginning. I originally watched five or six games and it felt pretty good. When I watched dozens of fights in several dungeons, I skipped the fights as soon as I saw them It was like dark clouds first, strong winds brewing, and then thunder exploded instead of thunder on the ground. Without good foreshadowing, no matter how loud the thunder is, it will only make people bored, and no matter how good the writing style is, it will only make people feel boring In general, the first two volumes are enough to cover the fairy grass, and the following volumes are enough to provide food

The first volume is very interesting, but the level of the second volume has dropped significantly, and the third volume can no longer be watched... The whole process is full of fighting and passionate rendering, but the plot is getting more and more boring, and there is no sense of surprise brought by the first volume. Come on, author.

It's not good, it's boring. The most exciting world in the book is probably the first world. It goes downhill from there. I barely read the second world seriously. I quickly flipped through the third world. I flipped through the fourth world quickly. I stopped here and realized that I couldn't waste any more money.

My personal feeling is that the fighting is a bit too intensive. It feels like the whole book is from beginning to end. I felt very energetic and excited at the beginning, but after reading it I felt very tired.

Move quickly, Teacher Jiang Lang, don't stop (referring to code words)

Let's talk about the shortcomings of the author's book here. The author's fights and the settings of each stage are very interesting. However, the stages created by the author every time give people a sense of hollowness. Every character appears hastily and ends quickly. They are all passers-by in the protagonist's journey. They cannot make any waves. There is no in-depth exploration of the world and background. All elements seem to serve only one element, that is battle. If such a world is repeated several times in a row, it will seem a bit numb and samey. In my humble opinion, the most important thing in novels is always the story. Everything else is just icing on the cake and shouldn't let the battle take over. The author is not bad at describing characters. He can often outline the essence of supporting characters in a few sentences, but after drawing the bones, he also has to describe the skin. So since the last book, the author has not had many impressive supporting characters in the book. I think the pinnacle of the group portraits in the previous book is the various monsters in the extra chapter Journey to the West.

The first world is at the level of being a god, and the second world is just fine. Starting from the third world, has the protagonist of the subsequent dungeons forgotten his original intention? Where was that green-faced ghost who raised his sword in anger? Now when I look at the Demon Sect and the prosperous Tang Dynasty, I can no longer find the "infamous" green-faced ghost from all over the country. I only see a four-star reincarnator who is threatened by power.

You can read it in the front, but I'm really tired of the feelings of family and country in the back. How about a little story? I kept writing like this and I couldn't stand it when I saw the Water Margin. There is also an old man who just finished giving instructions and it was like cheating. He just gave it up once and kept giving instructions, skipping a whole process of exploration.

Ah, today I finally understand why this book looks so comfortable to people. Personally, I think this is due to the protagonist's mentality. I divide the image of a novel character through mentality and behavior. The so-called behavior, like the so-called dark flow that is popular nowadays, refers to the protagonist's code of conduct. Obviously the protagonist of this book is not dark, but why is he still so lovable? That's the mentality. The most intuitive impression Lao Guan gave me from the first chapter to the end was that he was strong. No matter when, he never seemed to put himself in a weak position. The so-called so-called patience and waiting for later, or the drama of encountering an irresistible enemy at a low stage that is common in other novels does not exist in this book, or at least in my impression. Lao Guan seems to be a strong man from the beginning to the end. There are no plots in the book where the protagonist changes his mentality and recognizes reality as in some novels. He is like a completely arrogant and reckless man. There was a scene in the dungeon that created the Shenzhou Jieyi Society very early on that left a deep impression on me. It seemed to be someone's son-in-law at that time. Anyway, a lot of pen and ink was used to write about his strength. I only remember that he beat the Ghost Crying Team with one careless hand until he vomited blood. But when Lao Guan came on stage, he completely shattered his seemingly invincible atmosphere with one sentence: "Here, I will beat you to death. Today, I will be trampled to death." Lao Guan seems to have always had a strong sense of existence. He is strong and never hides it. He is about to break into the lair of a villain boss in a copy, and the villains are trying their best to stop him, as if they lose when Lao Guan comes. But Laoguan may not actually be able to beat them. Why is Laoguan's character so lovable? Just because he is a strong man, the biggest disadvantage he suffered from his appearance in the first chapter to the last chapter was that he wanted to kill three people but endured it for a month before doing so. He never seems to look down on anyone who is his enemy or bullies the weak. He always puts himself in the strongest position in his heart. Wherever he is, the rules must be changed according to his wishes. Anyone who does not conform to his wishes will be beaten to death on the spot. Even if he puts off a chapter before attacking, it will feel like he has suffered a loss. Therefore, the character design of Lao Guan, who does not conform to the current dark trend, is very lovable.

It's not fun to watch at all! It's like this every time. When the critical moment comes, it's a stalemate. It's explosive. After so many worlds, why can't we just have a crushing game?

What's the great thing about unlimited streaming? After completing the mission, you will receive rewards and strengthen them! Moreover, the Infinite Stream Strengthening Chapter is a good means of transition. On the one hand, it can ease the tense plot content. On the other hand, it allows readers to have a deeper sense of immersion. They can intuitively feel that the protagonist has become stronger, and it also makes the advancement of the plot have a certain rationality. I would like to ask, has there been any change in Guan Luoyang's strength after finishing the last dungeon and going through the novice base? Let me ask you again, as a reincarnation, you worked hard and went through all kinds of difficulties to complete the task with a score of 80% and get 1900 points, a cheat book of 2000 points, and money for food and clothing. Would you feel happy? Damn it, this is called a social beast. It's uncomfortable to think that the protagonist has to go to the next world to fight life and death, and has to worry about eating, drinking and urinating every day when he returns to the novice base. And what is the purpose of the Lord God? If you want to let the horse run, you also have to let the horse eat grass. The meaning of the existence of the Lord God Space is that if the purpose is not fulfilled, big bugs will occur.

I got tired of watching it later, but I kept buying it in the past. It was amazing at first, but after watching it too much, I got tired of it. This is how you fight a big boss, and this is how big you are when you fight this monster. It takes a long time to write just to fight a monster.

The book is a good book and the writing is excellent. However, I may be old and have been involved in society for more than ten years, so my tact is a bit out of place, so I feel a little out of place in a book with a protagonist who is full of passion and can sacrifice his life for righteousness. After all, I have passed that passionate age.

Let me summarize. The framework of each original world created by the author is extremely exciting, not inferior to some classics, but the utilization rate is too low. Three hundred thousand words can be completed in one copy. It is such a waste. Expanding the content three to five times is more than enough. I can only say that being talented is willful~ In addition, the warrior spirit of the protagonist is really amazing. It makes me feel like I have gone back to the time when I watched the Infinite Path Warrior Road. I burst into tears, brothers.

I can give the author 9 points for both the low-level martial arts and the protagonist's creation, but the high-level martial arts completely loses its advantage range.

Most of the protagonists in Infinite Stream are struggling to survive in the cracks. They don't have the courage of Guan Luoyang to push forward and defeat the entire world with one person. Furthermore, Guan Luoyang's Taoist heart has always been positive. He is not only fighting for himself, but also to eradicate injustices in every world. He has the spirit of a chivalrous man serving the country and the people, and he has never lost his true heart from beginning to end. A Taoist monster like Dr. Chen who doesn't know where to throw his Taoist heart is a typical negative example. Judging from the many Infinite Flows, either they don't have the courage to push forward, or they are selfish only for themselves, or they fell into the Ship of Theseus/lost their true heart in the process of growing up. In so many books, it seems that Guan Luoyang has such "invincible" ➕"heroic" protagonists. Apart from him, there is only Joshua from "Soul of Burning Steel", and Li Anping from "Food Chain" may be half of them after losing human emotions.

The more Gao Wu writes, the less spiritual he is. I can only say that the first hundred chapters are just food and grass, and the rest are all weeds. I regret having ordered them all.

There were too many fights. Although the writing was good, I kept fighting, not in the middle of the fight, but on the way to fight. I was too tired to read it, so I gave up.

Those who teach authors how to write books, I don't know what masterpieces you have written 🙂 If you haven't written them, don't comment. You directly tell the authors how to write, and those who don't know think you are great masters 🤭

In the early part of each volume, you always have to fight back and forth with others, and then you can crush it 😒 The beginning of the book is okay (after all, the strength is not strong), but from the middle stage, the end of each volume talks about what awesome skills have been obtained and how much the strength has been improved. As a result, the beginning of the next volume is 50-50. I don't even know where the improvement is.

This book might have been better if it had been finished during the eight-star battle. There were too many conceptual fights in the latter part. The first and middle stages were pretty good.

The first volume was quite amazing, but the second volume felt like the pace was too fast and made me very tired.

I read this book first and then the author's previous book. To be honest, the progress is really obvious. Although the previous book was not bad, it was very tiring to read. Xiao Fang gave me a feeling of being pushed by the general trend and enjoying the hardships, but this small book does not have that feeling. From time to time, some interesting characters and two-dimensional jokes make this book less tiring, and the overall fluency is greatly improved.        ，，，，，， After reading the author's two books, I can feel that Xiaofang and Xiaoguan are both very pure warriors with very upright views, so they are similar in some places, especially in their pursuit of martial arts, but they each have a strong personal color. By analogy, Xiaofang Like the rising sun, a young person will be shy towards the woman he likes, will be self-exiled because of his youthful experiences, and will be furious because of injustices. That is the big day in the morning. His mood will start almost perfectly, and he will be more decisive and domineering, a youthful person. The two male protagonists are really charming and make people yearn for them, making them want to talk over wine.