I Canonize the Story with Strange Stories

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I felt good about the novel at first, but when I saw that concrete was going to be developed 😒, I didn't want to read it anymore! In a world where there are monsters and monsters, how can you develop concrete? There are gold fingers in pig's feet but no use! The novel has become a country novel. If the author continues to write like this, he will definitely become a eunuch!

Author, your sweet potatoes are not big enough.

How could an ordinary person know so many professional technologies from all walks of life if he traveled through time? And to be honest, I feel like you are just trying to figure it out. We readers, who care about this professional technology, want to read stories about strange things.

Well, how should I put it? The scope of the imperial edict to seal monsters is too large. Does the frog manage all the wells in the world? Shouldn't the scope be narrowed? Be specific. And that crab, mountains and forests, I don't want to be specific. There are so many mountains and forests in the world, can it manage them?

I'm very curious. What did the protagonist do before time travel? He could breed crops, bake bricks, pottery, and make cement. Most people don't know these things, and they are at least three professional things. Even if you are not a professional, you won't know about formulas and other things.

This book is about a time of chaos with monsters and demons, and there are practitioners everywhere, but the author's theory is that it is the Age of Ending of the Dharma. In the Age of the End of the Dharma, everyone has begun to practice? Mortals who don't practice are like ants. Since the Dharma is at an end, how can there be more practitioners?

The starting point is very high, the person of destiny is to maintain the order of heaven, but now, the spirit is sealed to protect you, and it becomes the law of heaven to help you deal with the thugs? Isn't it more in line with what you call maintaining the order of heaven to order a god to keep the people in peace and regulate the order of heaven and earth? Isn't it more powerful?

Well written, very creative, about farming, collecting pets and cultivating immortals

The dialogue is a bit pretentious. . . .

The idea is good, but it's the business part. There's really no need to say what the protagonist talks about 😳

How can I say it? It's a good LOU name.

Not enough, not enough at all!

After reading Chapter 17, it feels too everyday. If you write this book like this, you can put it in the city.

The sea, you are all water. Don't introduce the realm every other chapter. It's too watery.

Let's change the introduction, it's a bit discouraging.

Are the dung essence, mud essence, and plant ash essence serious? ?