Lingyuan Immortal Lord

I have read 296 chapters so far, and the writing is quite satisfactory. The routines in the early years, such as entering a sect to cultivate immortality and entering a secret realm, reaching a certain level, encountering natural and man-made disasters, changing maps to upgrade, and entering the secret realm. The writing is okay, ignoring some minor problems, and it is quite enjoyable to read.

I saw it was waste again, so I gave it up. Why do I always have waste spiritual roots and low-grade spiritual roots when cultivating immortals?

This book is indeed a waste of material. For such a large sect, there are no elixirs, no magic weapons, and no various inheritances. It is better to be a casual cultivator. The Jindan sect does not have a foundation-building merchant guild with everything. What kind of waste is this? You can't put pressure on the protagonist like this, right?

I spent 16 yuan and I knew I wouldn't order 100 chapters at once. I didn't even want to complain about it, but I couldn't help it! When cultivating an immortal, they fight each other when they disagree. After reading half of the book, the fight takes up a quarter of the page. When assigned a spiritual object to fight, I don't even know if I am reading a fantasy novel. The author has not filled any holes in front of him (which golden elixir test place) Moreover, the routine is so old, not to mention low-grade spiritual roots. Every time I encounter a monk who is a level higher than myself, he can still fight back or escape. Moreover, none of these golden elixir foundation-building supporting characters have an above-average IQ. Seeing that the protagonist is either forcing or chasing him, will the immortal cultivator lose his brain? They have all become immortals and have lived for dozens or hundreds of years, but they have no idea about their IQ and EQ? And the part about Dragon Girl that has to be done with Dragon Girl? (It is recommended that the author not write too much like a mortal when writing about the mortal stream) And senior sister Han Jing in your sect is still waiting for you. I don't mind if you include too many people in the emotional drama, but don't forget the people who have been with you since you were young (I won't comment on the specifics because I skipped to watch later)

I read a book before. The protagonist started practicing alchemy and later... Practiced swordsmanship! Tear the book apart. Reading another book, the protagonist likes formations and has a good talent. When it comes to building the foundation, the protagonist: The formations are too difficult, so it is better to practice swordsmanship! Oh, tear up the book! I read this book again. The protagonist has very poor talent, but he has the opportunity to train with his spiritual husband, and there is hope for a great path. But not yet the golden elixir, the protagonist: Ling Zhifu? Farmer's ear, here comes the sword! Oh, tear up the book! Read another book, the protagonist is successful in refining weapons, here comes the sword! Tear! One more book, come with the sword and tear it apart! ...... In the last book, the protagonist drew a talisman, but ended up running away to practice his sword again. The reader was so depressed that he ran away with a bucket!

The plot of arranging foundation building and golden elixir is really disgusting

It's really a waste of money to read this rubbish book.

Can't watch it. The cultivation speed of low-grade spiritual roots has almost caught up with the cultivation speed of high-grade spiritual roots. Moreover, the spells are perfect and steal the limelight. It is abnormal at first glance. Those high-level monks who have no hope of breakthrough are not tortured yet. Search for your soul.

Well! The author is so stupid. The protagonist has a golden elixir. Why do those who built the foundation in the past still call him senior fellow apprentice? When you see someone who is also in the Golden Core realm, you still want to call them uncle? Isn't this a mess? Can you write? If you don't know how to write, go read those classic immortal novels from the past and see what people in the same realm call them!

This is IQ online, haha, keep a big secret carefully, or change the map frequently, otherwise you can't explain it. Haha, the spicy chicken spirit root is always jumping in front of people, which is obvious to you. Boss: The spicy chicken spirit root is practiced so fast. This guy must have a great opportunity. Keep an eye on him and kill him secretly. The opportunity is mine, Jiejiejiejie

Emotional line: The aura of the protagonist is too strong. Although it is no coincidence that the protagonist goes outside, happens to be met by someone from the Dragon Palace, happens to be the princess recruiting a son-in-law, happens to be used as an upgrade tool, and the princess has feelings after getting in the car. Man, if you feel that the protagonist is now So far, no woman has felt lonely, so I just said it bluntly, don't you think it's very blunt? Although I have done a lot of foreshadowing and said that the eldest princess has a more humane temperament, first of all, dragon nature is obscene, and also, they are three to four hundred years old monsters, and I fell in love with her as soon as I got in the car. Dude, it's so easy to get, but what about the future? Don't tell me that the protagonist's woman will never cheat on her, or that the protagonist is destined and there will never be a better person to replace him. In this case, it is better not to write the emotional line. This kind of emotion is not even more real than the love of the supporting characters in mortals. When the novel breaks away from life, becomes idealistic, and becomes an ivory tower, then its readers will always live in a utopia. Plot line: There is no big problem overall, and it is even slightly novel. For example, the protagonist goes to collect the soul and pass through the level, and finally fetch water from a bamboo basket. It does not directly rely on the protagonist's halo to obtain a qualitative change, which is interesting. However, the small details are a bit rough. For example, when I was arrested together with Li Jingyang before, tell me, the storage bag was not collected, and the weapons and other NPCs were not handed over. How are you playing? There is also the fact that the protagonist is somewhat complacent as his Taoism and qualifications gradually grow. Of course, that is not to say that his self-confidence is a bad thing. However, this is a mortal novel. Sometimes I feel that it is a bit refreshing when I read it. Furthermore, this protagonist relies on his own aura and has repeatedly entrusted himself to the realm of foundation building to plot against the Danji clan. Sometimes the author really rescues and hardens the story. For example, the time I had a bad relationship with the Chen family, it really shocked me. And every time, the author will help the protagonist to reflect, but the protagonist does not change. For example, this time, he went directly to the Prime Minister Turtle. No matter how the author laid the groundwork, you, a human cultivator who has just entered the Dan Formation, went to the Prime Minister of the Demon Race in the late Yuan Ying. What you asked for was to let him stop the Dragon Princess. Don't you think it's a bit childish? I know that sometimes, the protagonist is not trustworthy, and it is difficult for you, the author, to promote the plot, but it is really bloody. Generally speaking, it is above average and can be regarded as food. When you are bored, you can still read it lightly

This is a pseudo-water spiritual root, a growth spell and spiritual root.

The new book has set sail. I beg you to collect and recommend it, to wave the flag and lead the way. A little bit of support can give Match a great encouragement. 🙏🙏

I saw some people discussing the beginning of the waste-chai flow. On the one hand, everyone is tired of seeing the beginning of the waste-chai flow. On the other hand, the rhythm must be grasped well. Han Li's qualifications are not good, but he started in the martial arts world. By the time he reached the fairy world, he already had the little green bottle and medicine refining skills, and then he peeled off the cocoon layer by layer to advance the plot. Moreover, Han Li has clear goals and takes initiative everywhere, so he is more comfortable to watch. This book starts with a character and a mentality, telling the readers that the protagonist and his sect are both garbage, but the protagonist is a piece of garbage. Okay, everyone knows, what next? Does the author think that by writing it this way, readers will be stimulated and want to read more?

I don't want to watch it when I see the Dragon Girl's death substitute. It's purely entertaining and has no foreshadowing. It's the same old routine from ten years ago and I'm still complacent. Especially the teleportation to another world, it's even more fragmented. No wonder the results are so poor.

Ah, I'm speechless. Most of the women in this story created by the author want to be close to the male protagonist when they meet him or are saved by him. The typical example is Chiming Haiwei. When those men see beautiful female practitioners, they want to practice double cultivation or even take supplements.

The protagonist's IQ depends on the author, it's just mind blowing to read

I ordered it from beginning to end. After seeing the sword fight, I really wanted to vomit. I wonder if you can do it. I have never seen any novel that has more than 10 chapters of passers-by and the protagonist does not appear. It is extremely useless!

The plot after the protagonist builds his foundation is almost full of negative feedback. He makes a sword and hits a bunch of villains. Several characters in the sect go straight to roles like vase, scheming, brainless, and unhappy. The only normal leader is not very charming. There are evil intentions among the six factions. After the enemy attacks, the protagonist team flies around like headless flies, and the enemy talks trash all day long. There are dozens of chapters full of nonsense, as if the author is afraid that the readers will be entertained.

It's so frustrating to watch. This sect is useless.

In fact, low-grade spiritual roots are not poisonous points! If the poison point is garbage spiritual roots, don't pretend to be cool! Change maps frequently! The most taboo thing for garbage spiritual roots is to show off and get slapped in the face!

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